Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations, and add one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep to 1–3 sentences. For example, state the style you prefer and why, and give a short example.

例: I prefer clothes with a unique, modern style because I love fashion and enjoy standing out. For example, I often choose pieces with unusual cuts or bold patterns to express my personality.

提案: Answer directly with one clear preference and a reason; avoid unrelated words or unknown terms. Use a linking word to add a brief supporting detail or example. Keep it to 1–2 sentences.

例: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they let me move freely and feel relaxed during the day. For instance, I usually choose jeans and a soft sweater when I go out.

提案: Be concise: state your preference clearly, give a reason and a brief example. Correct basic grammar (T-shirts are) and avoid fillers. Use one linking word to expand slightly.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable and easy to wash. For example, I often wear a plain T-shirt when I run errands or meet friends.

提案: Provide a precise answer about how much time you spend and explain why, using linking words for clarity. Replace fillers with concrete time phrases (e.g., a few minutes, an hour).

例: Yes, I usually spend about 20–30 minutes choosing my clothes because I like to make sure my outfit matches the occasion. For example, I pick work clothes the night before to save time in the morning.

提案: This is a good structure: clear topic sentence plus contrast. Improve grammar (a comfortable style → comfortable clothes) and add a linking word to emphasize contrast. Add a short example to be more specific.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear comfortable clothes because I need to be practical for work, but on weekends I choose more unique or fashionable outfits to go out with friends.

提案: Answer is mostly clear but contains repetition and fillers. State preference directly, give two short reasons and one brief example. Use correct phrasing (I like black clothes).

例: I like black clothes because black looks simple and stylish and is easy to match. For example, I often wear a black jacket because it goes with everything.

× I like clothes that umm. Uh, unique style because I love fashion and this is my.

✓ I like clothes that have a unique style because I love fashion and these are mine.

The original sentence misuses adjectives and has unclear pronoun reference. 'Unique style' should be described with a verb phrase 'have a unique style'. 'This is my' is incomplete; replace with 'these are mine' to refer to clothes. Also change singular 'this' to plural 'these' to match 'clothes'. Use clearer word order: 'I like clothes that have a unique style because I love fashion and these are mine.'

× I prefer to wear, umm, Cadillac clothes because, uh, when I do something, umm, I'm.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes because when I do things I like to be comfortable.

The speaker used 'Cadillac' incorrectly (likely meant 'casual'), which is a vocabulary error and adjective misuse. Also sentence was incomplete ('I'm.'). Correct to 'casual clothes' and finish the thought with 'I like to be comfortable'. Match plurality 'things' and proper word order.

× Yes, I like, uh, T-shirts because T-shirts is very comfortable and uh, umm. Uh, Since, uh, it. Where is it?

✓ Yes, I like T-shirts because T-shirts are very comfortable.

There is a subject-verb agreement error: plural subject 'T-shirts' requires plural verb 'are', not 'is'. The rest of the original is filler and fragmented; remove fragments to produce a complete clear sentence. Keep tense present simple to answer preference.

× Yes, I spend many spend around time. For example, I choose close to next, uh, tomorrow, umm.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes. For example, I sometimes choose outfits the night before.

'Many spend around time' is ungrammatical and misuses quantifiers. Use 'a lot of time' or 'much time'. 'I choose close to next tomorrow' is unclear; interpret as choosing clothes the night before or next day. Provide a clear, grammatically correct sentence that fits the question and tense.

× Yes, I usually wear a comfortable clothes but I wear unique clothes in weekends.

✓ Yes, I usually wear comfortable clothes, but I wear unique clothes on weekends.

'A comfortable clothes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'clothes' — incorrect adjective/article use. Remove 'a' and use plural 'comfortable clothes'. Preposition 'in weekends' is wrong; use 'on weekends'. Maintain contrast with 'but'.

× I like color clothes that black because black is simple and umm, stylish. So I like black color clothes.

✓ I like clothes that are black because black is simple and stylish. So I like black clothes.

'Color clothes that black' is incorrect word order and adjective usage. Use 'clothes that are black' or 'black clothes'. 'Black color clothes' is redundant; use 'black clothes'. Keep adjectives in correct position before noun or use 'that are' construction. Maintain present simple tense for preferences.