Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence. State the type of clothes you prefer, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid hesitation sounds and repetition.

例: I prefer sporty, fitted clothes because they are comfortable and made from breathable fabrics. For example, I often choose cotton or moisture-wicking materials since they prevent skin irritation and keep me cool.

提案: Answer directly with one clear preference, then give specific reasons. Use linking words (because, so, when) and avoid repeating phrases. Pronunciation and grammar should be more accurate.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me concentrate and feel relaxed. For instance, when I wear light, loose clothing I don't feel restricted, so I can focus better in public places.

提案: Give a direct answer and a clear, specific reason. Use correct tense and simple linking phrases (in summer, because). Avoid filler words and incorrect collocations.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially in summer, because they are light and keep me cool. I usually pair them with jeans or chinos for a comfortable, casual look.

提案: Start with a clear statement about how much time you spend. Explain briefly why, using specific details and correct grammar. Use linking words (so, because) and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, I often spend a long time choosing clothes because I get confused about what suits me. So I usually ask friends or cousins for recommendations before deciding.

提案: Answer directly and organise your response: state the contrast (weekdays vs weekends), then give specific examples. Use appropriate vocabulary (casual, smart, formal) and correct collocations.

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear a uniform for work, which is practical and formal. On weekends I prefer dressier, more fashionable clothes for going out with friends or to the beach, because they make me feel confident.

提案: Give a clear preference and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use natural phrasing and avoid literal claims (e.g., 'symbol of royalty') unless explained. Keep it concise.

例: I prefer black clothing because it looks elegant and suits many occasions. For example, I often choose a black shirt for meetings because it appears smart and is easy to match with other items.

× Well, I have a sports sports person.

✓ Well, I am a sporty person.

The student used the noun 'sports' twice and the wrong form 'sports person'. A descriptive adjective 'sporty' is correct to describe a person who likes sports. Use 'I am' to link subject and adjective. Suggestion: Use the adjective form (sporty) after a form of 'be' to describe personality.

× I love to wear fit clothes, especially in which I feel comfortable and especially a, which made of uh, like, uh, uh, good fabric.

✓ I love to wear fitted clothes, especially those in which I feel comfortable, and which are made of good fabric.

The student used 'fit' (verb/adjective) and awkward relative clause 'especially in which'. Use 'fitted' or 'well-fitting' for clothing, plural demonstrative 'those' to refer to clothes, and passive 'are made' to describe material. Remove filler words. Suggestion: Say 'fitted clothes, especially those in which I feel comfortable, and which are made of good fabric.'

× And it's also like protect me from the different allergies.

✓ And they also protect me from different allergic reactions.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but 'clothes' is plural, causing pronoun mismatch. Also 'allergies' is vague; 'allergic reactions' or simply 'allergies' works but keep plural agreement. Use present simple 'protect' for general truth. Suggestion: Ensure pronoun number matches the noun ('they' for clothes).

× Well, like I really explained, I love to really comfort clothes because it helped me to like think more more openly.

✓ As I explained, I really like comfortable clothes because they help me to think more openly.

The student used the adjective 'comfort' incorrectly instead of 'comfortable' and mixed tenses ('helped' past vs general present). Use present simple 'help' for habitual effect and 'comfortable' as adjective. Remove fillers. Suggestion: Use 'comfortable clothes' and present tense for general habits.

× And uh, like in some cases when I wear another thick clothes, I feel an uncomfortable and this also helped me to like think more good and feel comfortable in between the public places.

✓ In some cases, when I wear thick clothes, I feel uncomfortable, and this makes it harder for me to think clearly and feel at ease in public places.

Errors: 'another thick clothes' mixes singular 'another' with plural 'clothes'; 'an uncomfortable' misuses article with adjective; tense 'helped' wrong; 'think more good' ungrammatical. Use 'thick clothes' (no 'another'), 'feel uncomfortable' (adjective without article), and 'makes it harder' or 'hinders' to express cause. 'Think clearly' is natural. Suggestion: Use correct determiners, avoid unnecessary articles, and choose appropriate verbs ('makes', 'hinder').

× If I do be honest, like like on the weather of the kinder now, like in summers, I love to wear the T-shirt because they're too hot out outside.

✓ To be honest, in this kind of weather now, in summer, I love to wear T-shirts because it's very hot outside.

'If I do be honest' is incorrect; use 'to be honest' or 'if I'm honest'. 'On the weather of the kinder now' is ungrammatical; use 'in this kind of weather'. 'In summers' should be 'in summer' or 'in summers' depending, but 'in summer' is natural. 'They're too hot out outside' wrong pronoun and redundancy; use 'it's very hot outside' to state general condition. Also plural 'T-shirts'. Suggestion: Use fixed expressions 'to be honest' and correct weather phrasing.

× And yeah, I feel really comfortable while wearing T-shirts with their trousers.

✓ And yeah, I feel really comfortable wearing T-shirts with trousers.

'Their trousers' incorrectly uses possessive pronoun 'their' with no clear antecedent and is unnecessary. Also 'while wearing' is acceptable but simpler 'wearing' is natural. Ensure subject-verb agreement and clear references. Suggestion: Remove 'their' and use 'trousers' or 'jeans' depending on meaning.

× Well, to be honest, I introvert person I, I usually confuse between what I what I have to wear.

✓ Well, to be honest, I am an introverted person; I usually get confused about what I should wear.

Missing 'am' (verb) and wrong noun form 'introvert person' — use 'introverted person' or 'an introvert'. 'Confuse between' is incorrect; use 'get confused about'. Also remove repeated fragments. Suggestion: Use 'I am an introverted person' and 'get confused about' for clarity.

× So I usually then took a recommendation from my friends and especially from my cousins what I have to wear.

✓ So I usually ask for recommendations from my friends and especially from my cousins about what I should wear.

'Took a recommendation' is awkward and incorrect tense for habitual actions; use present habitual 'ask for recommendations'. Also insert 'about' to introduce the content of the recommendation and use 'should' for advice. Maintain present tense for routines. Suggestion: Use 'usually ask for recommendations' and 'about what I should wear'.

× And yeah, it's take a long time.

✓ And yeah, it takes a long time.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it' + present simple requires 'takes', not 'take'. Also contraction 'it's' can stand for 'it' + verb. Use correct verb form for third person singular. Suggestion: Use 'it takes a long time' for habitual statements.

× Yes definitely because during the work day from Monday to Friday I wear my uniform.

✓ Yes, definitely, because on workdays from Monday to Friday I wear my uniform.

'During the work day' is awkward; 'on workdays' or 'during the working days' is natural. Add commas for clarity. Pronoun use fine otherwise. Suggestion: Use 'on workdays' for habitual schedule statements.

× After that I wear just a normal clothes like a night food.

✓ After that, I just wear normal clothes, like nightwear.

'A normal clothes' mixes article 'a' with plural 'clothes'; use 'normal clothes' without 'a'. 'Night food' is incorrect — likely 'nightwear' or 'comfortable clothes for the evening'. Suggestion: Use correct noun forms and the appropriate word ('nightwear').

× But during weekends I love to go outside with my friend and family.

✓ But during the weekends I love to go out with my friends and family.

'Go outside' is grammatically acceptable but 'go out' is idiomatic for social outings. 'Friend' should be plural if referring generally. 'During weekends' -> 'during the weekends' or 'on weekends'. Suggestion: Use 'go out' and plural 'friends' for general statements.

× I usually wear a fancy clothes which like attractive people and I love to wear in the like beaches and it also enhance my personality.

✓ I usually wear fancy clothes that attract attention; I love wearing them at the beach, and they also enhance my personality.

Errors: 'a fancy clothes' wrong article with plural; 'which like attractive people' ungrammatical — use 'that attract attention' or 'that make me look attractive'. 'Love to wear in the like beaches' -> 'love wearing them at the beach'. Verb agreement 'enhance' should be 'enhance' with plural subject 'they' (used correctly here). Clean up fillers. Suggestion: Use 'fancy clothes', 'that attract attention', and correct prepositions ('at the beach').

× Like to be honest, I love to wear black clothes.

✓ To be honest, I love wearing black clothes.

'Like to be honest' should be 'to be honest'. 'Love to wear' is acceptable but 'love wearing' is more natural. No pronoun error but fix fixed phrase. Suggestion: Use 'To be honest' as the fixed expression.

× I think it's enhanced my personality and it is also symbol of royalty.

✓ I think it enhances my personality and is also a symbol of royalty.

Tense error: 'it's enhanced' uses present perfect/passive incorrectly; use present simple 'enhances' for general belief. Missing article 'a' before 'symbol'. Suggestion: Use present simple for general opinions and include necessary articles.

× And even today I wear the black clothes.

✓ And even today I am wearing black clothes.

'I wear' is a simple present (habit), but for current action 'today' use present continuous 'I am wearing'. Also 'the black clothes' wrongly uses definite article; say 'black clothes' without 'the'. Suggestion: Use present continuous for present actions and drop unnecessary definite article.