Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then 1–2 supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (maximum 5 sentences). Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' when adding reason or example.

例: I prefer casual, comfortable clothes. For example, I often wear jeans and soft cotton shirts because they are easy to move in and suit my everyday activities.

提案: Again you repeated the question. Choose one option clearly in the first sentence, then explain why and give a brief example. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

例: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because I work in a relaxed environment. For instance, I usually wear chinos and a polo shirt so I can feel comfortable all day.

提案: You echoed the examiner instead of answering. Respond with a clear statement (yes/no and why), then add a short specific detail or example. Keep it natural and avoid repeating the question.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are simple and breathable. For example, I wear graphic T-shirts at weekends when I meet friends.

提案: The student repeated the question and made a small hesitation. Answer directly with a topic sentence (brief yes/no), then explain how much time and give a reason. Use linking words like 'usually' or 'because'.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes; usually I decide quickly in the morning. Because I prepare outfits the night before, I only spend a few minutes picking accessories.

提案: You repeated and also made an error in the question wording. Answer clearly and correct the distinction (weekdays vs weekends). State whether you change styles and give specific examples and a reason using linking words like 'but' or 'so'.

例: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I wear smart-casual clothes for work, but at the weekend I opt for jeans and hoodies to relax.

提案: The student asked the question back instead of answering. Provide a direct topic sentence stating preferred colours, then add a brief reason or example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to make it coherent.

例: I prefer neutral colours such as navy, grey and black because they are easy to match. For example, I usually buy navy shirts since they go well with most trousers.

× What kind of clothes do you like to wear?

✓ I like to wear comfortable and casual clothes.

The student's reply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/content error. Provide a full declarative sentence that answers the question. Include subject 'I', verb phrase 'like to wear', and the object (type of clothes).

× Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes rather than smart clothes.

The student repeated the question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/content error. Form a clear preference statement using 'I prefer to' and contrast with 'rather than' or 'instead of' to indicate the choice.

× Do you like wearing a T-shirt?

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts.

The student's answer repeated the question and used singular 'a T-shirt'. For general habits, use plural 'T-shirts' or a general statement 'wearing T-shirts'. Keep subject 'I' and present simple 'like' for habits (third person singular rule does not apply to 'I', but ensuring correct plural for general statements is necessary).

× Do you spend a lot a lot of time choosing clothes?

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

The original contains a repeated phrase 'a lot a lot', which is a sentence structure/typo error. Remove the duplicate to form the correct adverbial phrase 'a lot of time'. Use 'spend' + object 'time' + '-ing' form 'choosing'.

× Do you wear different style of clothes on weekends and weekends?

✓ Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?

The student's answer repeated 'weekends and weekends' and used singular 'style' with 'different'. When referring to more than one kind, use plural 'styles'. Also correct the intended contrast to 'weekdays and weekends' rather than repeating 'weekends'.

× What color clothes do you like?

✓ I like clothes in bright colors, especially blue and green.

The student's reply repeated the examiner's question instead of providing an answer. Provide a full declarative sentence beginning with 'I like' and specify colors or color preferences. Use plural 'colors' when referring to general color preferences.