Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (subject-verb agreement), avoid redundancy, and give one or two specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas.

例: I prefer wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I often choose 100% cotton T-shirts in different colors since they are breathable and easy to wash.

提案: Improve grammar (use correct verb forms), make the response coherent and avoid confusion. Give a clear reason and one specific supporting detail. Use a linking word to explain cause.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I spend a lot of time at home. Therefore, I usually wear T-shirts and sweatpants since they are comfortable for working and relaxing.

提案: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct, avoid repetition, and use a linking phrase to add a reason or example.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. Since I often stay at home, I usually wear them when I'm relaxing or working because they are comfortable and easy to move in.

提案: Use complete sentences and correct prepositions, and give a clear contrast with linking words (e.g., 'however', 'but'). Provide one concrete example of when you spend more time.

例: It depends. If I'm going to an important event, I spend more time choosing clothes because I want to look presentable. However, for everyday activities I pick simple outfits quickly, like a T-shirt and jeans.

提案: Combine short fragments into smoother sentences, correct word choice (activities), and give a brief reason with a linking word.

例: Not really. I usually wear T-shirts and shorts both on weekdays and weekends because I mostly stay at home and don't have many activities planned.

提案: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a reason and a brief comparison. Avoid unclear phrases.

例: I don't have a strong preference, but if I must choose I prefer black clothing because it doesn't show dirt easily, unlike white T-shirts which stain more quickly.

× I like T-shirts. It is really convenient, comfortable to use.

✓ I like T-shirts. They are really convenient and comfortable to wear.

T-shirts is plural so use plural pronoun 'they'. 'Convenient to use' is unnatural for clothing; use 'comfortable to wear'. Also join adjectives with 'and'. Ensure subject-pronoun agreement.

× It's made 100% from cotton and have many different colors and sizes.

✓ They are made 100% from cotton and have many different colors and sizes.

T-shirts is plural so use 'they are' not 'it's'. Maintain subject-verb agreement: 'have' matches plural subject 'they'. 'Made 100% from cotton' is acceptable; 'made of 100% cotton' is also possible.

× It is easy to found.

✓ They are easy to find.

Use active infinitive 'to find' not past participle 'found'. Also match plural subject 'they are'. 'Find' is correct verb form to express that T-shirts are easy to locate.

× I'm mostly wear comfortable and casual clothes, so I prefer to wear casual clothes.

✓ I mostly wear comfortable and casual clothes, so I prefer to wear casual clothes.

When using 'I' the verb should be base form without auxiliary 'am' before it; 'I'm mostly wear' is incorrect. Use 'I mostly wear' to indicate habitual action.

× I spend almost half of my year at home so I prefer to. Where confronted clothes, especially T-shirts, because that's what I wear.

✓ I spend almost half of the year at home, so I prefer casual clothes, especially T-shirts, because that's what I usually wear.

Original contains fragments and unclear phrasing. 'I prefer to' lacks object. 'Where confronted clothes' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I prefer casual clothes, especially T-shirts'. Add 'usually' for frequency and combine clauses with commas for clarity.

× I do wear T-shirts, like most of the times.

✓ I do wear T-shirts, like most of the time.

Use singular 'time' in the phrase 'most of the time'. 'Most of the times' is nonstandard.

× I don't go out quite often, so yeah, I'm wearing T-shirt most of the times at home when relaxing or working.

✓ I don't go out very often, so I wear T-shirts most of the time at home when relaxing or working.

Use 'very often' instead of 'quite often' for common collocation, and simple present 'I wear' for habitual actions. Use plural 'T-shirts' and 'most of the time' phrasing.

× If I need to go out, I spend quite a lot of time to choosing clothes because I want to look good.

✓ If I need to go out, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look good.

After 'spend time' use gerund without 'to': 'spend time choosing', not 'spend time to choose'. Keep verb form consistent.

× But if I'm wearing just for everyday activities I don't really choose clothes to use. I mostly.

✓ But if I'm dressing just for everyday activities, I don't really choose special clothes; I mostly wear whatever is comfortable.

Original is fragmented and awkward. Use 'dressing' or 'wearing' with clearer structure, and complete the thought. 'Clothes to use' is unnatural; rephrase to 'special clothes' or 'choose clothes'.

× No, I often go for T-shirts and shorts. Because I don't have a lot of activation during that day as I'm mostly spending time at home.

✓ No, I often wear T-shirts and shorts because I don't do many activities that day and I mostly spend time at home.

Do not start a sentence with a short fragment 'Because...' Combine into one sentence. Use 'do many activities' or 'have many activities' instead of 'activation'. Use present simple for habitual actions.

× I don't have particular coloring for clothes too like but.

✓ I don't have a particular color I prefer for clothes, but...

Original word order is confused. Use 'a particular color I prefer' for clarity. 'Coloring' is incorrect for 'color' preference. Keep natural phrasing.

× If I have to choose, I like to wear black clothes.

✓ If I have to choose, I like to wear black clothes.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It fits context and tense.

× That is because it does not get dirty easily.

✓ That's because they do not get dirty easily.

Refers to 'black clothes' (plural), so use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'do not'. Contraction 'that's' is acceptable.

× It is different than you use white quotes, white T-shirts.

✓ They are different from white T-shirts, which get dirty more easily.

Use 'different from' not 'different than'. Refer to plural 'they' for clothes. Clarify meaning: compare black clothes to white T-shirts and explain why.