Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and small grammar errors (e.g., omit extra words like “the” before “clothes”).

例: I usually wear casual, flexible clothes because I take dance lessons. For example, I often choose stretchy leggings and loose T-shirts so I can move freely during practice.

提案: Provide a direct topic sentence then give a clear reason with correct word choice and grammar. Replace awkward phrases (“move really dynamic”, “do a huge movements”) with natural expressions. Keep it concise.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I need to move freely for dance. For this reason, I avoid smart outfits and choose clothing that allows large, unrestricted movements.

提案: Be concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Use one or two clear supporting points and link them smoothly. Correct register: use “because” instead of informal "'cause" in the test.

例: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are breathable and comfortable. They also wick sweat during dance practice, which helps me stay cool.

提案: Start with a direct answer and give one clear reason. Avoid repeating similar ideas and refine phrasing (e.g., “I don’t worry about what others think”). Keep it within two to three sentences.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because comfort is my priority. I also don't worry much about other people's opinions, so a simple outfit is fine for me.

提案: Give a brief direct answer and a clearer, more grammatical reason. Remove repetitions and strengthen coherence with a linking word like “because” or “since.”

例: No, I wear the same style on weekdays and weekends because my activities are similar, so there is no need to change my clothes.

提案: Use more natural expressions and fix informal language (avoid “wanna”, “mad”). Give a concise reason and one example of how you choose colors. Try to include linking words and reduce repetition.

例: I prefer white clothes because they are easy to match with other items. For example, a white T‑shirt pairs well with any shorts or trousers, so I don't have to worry about matching colors.

× I prefer wearing clothes that are really casual and flexible because I take dance lessons and it's really important for me to be the clothes really casual.

✓ I prefer wearing clothes that are really casual and flexible because I take dance lessons and it's really important for me that the clothes are really casual.

The sentence uses an incorrect clause 'for me to be the clothes really casual.' After expressions like 'important for me,' a content clause with 'that' plus subject and verb is needed: 'that the clothes are really casual.' This fixes word order and grammar. Also keep consistent subject 'the clothes' with verb 'are.' Suggestion: Use 'important for me that...' or rephrase to 'it is really important that my clothes are casual.'

× For example, I wear really stretchy bottoms and T-shirts when I go to dance lessons.

✓ For example, I wear really stretchy bottoms and T-shirts when I go to dance lessons.

No grammatical change needed: 'wear' with plural 'bottoms and T-shirts' is correct and fits the present habitual meaning. Keep as is.

× I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes because I take dance lessons and it is really important for me to wear casual clothes so that I can move really dynamic and do a huge movements.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes because I take dance lessons and it is really important for me to wear casual clothes so that I can move very dynamically and make large movements.

'Move really dynamic' incorrectly uses an adjective; adverbs modify verbs, so use 'dynamically.' 'Do a huge movements' mixes singular and plural and uses 'do' awkwardly; use 'make large movements' or 'perform big movements.' Suggest using adverb forms and matching singular/plural nouns.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts 'cause it's really easy to breathe, it is really breathable and I take dance lessons so it absorbs sweat and it's really casual and comfortable.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are breathable, they allow me to breathe easily, they absorb sweat, and they are casual and comfortable.

Colloquial ''cause' should be 'because' in formal speech. Pronoun agreement: 'T-shirts' is plural, so use 'they' not 'it.' 'It absorbs sweat' is incorrect for shirts; use 'they absorb sweat.' Also 'easy to breathe' is better expressed as 'they allow me to breathe easily.' Break into parallel clauses for clarity.

× Actually, I don't really spend a lot of time choosing clothes because if it is comfortable and casual for me, it is OK.

✓ Actually, I don't really spend a lot of time choosing clothes because if they are comfortable and casual for me, that's OK.

Pronoun agreement: 'clothes' is plural, so use 'they are' not 'it is.' Also 'it is OK' is vague; refer back to 'that's OK.' This keeps present tense and correct agreement.

× I don't really feel that everyone is looking at me.

✓ I don't really feel that everyone is looking at me.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed.

× I don't care about everyone's eyes.

✓ I don't care about what everyone thinks of me.

'I don't care about everyone's eyes' is not idiomatic in English. Use 'what everyone thinks of me' or 'what other people think' to express indifference. This corrects meaning rather than strict grammar.

× No I wear same kind of styles even though it's weekdays or weekends because what I do on weekdays and weekends is all same so I so I don't need to change clothes styles.

✓ No, I wear the same kinds of styles whether it's weekdays or weekends because what I do on weekdays and weekends is the same, so I don't need to change my clothing style.

Multiple issues: missing commas and articles, singular/plural mismatches. Use 'the same kinds of styles' or better 'the same kind of style.' Use 'whether' for contrast. 'All same' should be 'the same.' 'Clothes styles' is awkward; use 'clothing style' or 'my clothing style.' Clean up repetition 'so I so I.'

× I like wearing clothes that are white because if there is a lot of colors, I don't really wanna care about how mad how the T-shirt matches with the bottoms or how the bottoms matches with the T-shirt.

✓ I like wearing white clothes because if there are a lot of colors, I don't really want to worry about how the T-shirt matches the bottoms or how the bottoms match the T-shirt.

Use 'white clothes' not 'clothes that are white' for concision. 'There is a lot of colors' is subject-verb agreement error: 'there are a lot of colors.' 'Wanna' is informal; use 'want to' in tests. 'Worry about how X matches Y' is idiomatic; 'how mad how' is incorrect. Also ensure plural agreement: 'bottoms match' not 'matches.'

× I don't really wanna care about it.

✓ I don't really want to worry about it.

Replace informal 'wanna' with 'want to' and 'care about it' with more natural 'worry about it.' This is stylistic and improves formality.

× So I don't like color.

✓ So I don't like bright colors.

'I don't like color' is unclear and unidiomatic. Likely meaning is dislike of colorful clothing; specify 'bright colors' or 'many colors.' Use plural 'colors.'