Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer grammatically correct, more concise and add one specific example to support the reason. Keep within 2–4 sentences and use a linking word to connect ideas.

例: I prefer flexible, comfortable clothes because I often dance. For example, I like loose joggers and stretchable tops since they allow me to move freely when practicing choreography.

提案: Avoid repetition and informal contractions; state your preference clearly, give a brief reason and one supporting detail. Use a linking word to make it coherent.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because I dance a lot. For instance, I often choose sweatshirts and sneakers so I can move easily during rehearsals.

提案: Keep the answer concise and vary vocabulary to avoid repetition. Add a brief specific example of a T-shirt style to sound more natural.

例: Yes, I wear T-shirts a lot because they are comfortable and let me move freely. For example, I often wear breathable, stretch cotton T-shirts when I practice dance.

提案: Correct casual phrasing and unclear phrases, be concise and polite. Give a short reason and one specific detail about your routine when choosing clothes.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because comfort matters more to me than fashion. Usually I pick whatever is clean and comfortable, like a simple T-shirt and jeans.

提案: Make the contrast clearer and use precise vocabulary. Replace vague phrases with concrete examples and use a linking word to show contrast.

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear smarter, more suitable clothes such as a button shirt and chinos for work, whereas on weekends I choose very comfortable outfits like hoodies and joggers.

提案: Avoid informal or embarrassing phrasing; explain the preference politely and give a cleaner reason. Use clearer vocabulary and one concise sentence or two.

例: I prefer black clothing because it hides stains and looks neat. For example, I often wear black shirts when I'm out since they stay looking clean longer.

× I like to wear clothes that is really flexible to wear and comfortable to wear.

✓ I like to wear clothes that are really flexible and comfortable to wear.

Subject 'clothes' is plural, so the relative clause requires the plural verb 'are' instead of 'is'. Also 'flexible to wear' is awkward; keeping 'flexible' alone is sufficient. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with plural noun and remove redundant phrases.

× And also I like dancing, so I like the clothes that I can dance.

✓ And I also like dancing, so I like clothes that I can dance in.

The verb 'dance' here needs the preposition 'in' to indicate what the clothes are used for; using 'dance' without 'in' is ungrammatical. Also 'the clothes that I can dance in' is more natural than 'the clothes that I can dance.'

× I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes 'cause as I said it before, I usually do dance and I wanna dance it really comfortably so that is why.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable, casual clothes because, as I said before, I usually dance and I want to dance very comfortably, so that is why.

Informal 'wanna' should be 'want to' in standard English. 'Do dance' is unnecessary; use 'dance'. 'Really comfortably' is informal; 'very comfortably' is better. 'Cause' should be 'because' in formal responses. Suggestion: use standard modal/auxiliary forms and avoid colloquial contractions.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. It's really comfortable and flexible, and also it's really easy to move and do dancing.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. They're really comfortable and flexible, and they're also very easy to move in for dancing.

T-shirts (plural) require plural pronoun 'they're' not 'it's'. 'Do dancing' is awkward; use 'dance' or 'for dancing' and include preposition 'in' after 'move'. Suggestion: match pronouns to plural noun and use correct verb forms with prepositions.

× No, I don't usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes 'cause I don't think everyone is looking at me and looking at my car like clothes, so I don't really care about it.

✓ No, I don't usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I don't think everyone is looking at me and my clothes, so I don't really care about them.

The phrase 'looking at my car like clothes' is unclear and ungrammatical. Likely intended 'my clothes'. Pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to refer to 'clothes' (plural). Suggestion: refer back to plural nouns with plural pronouns and avoid unclear comparisons.

× If it's comfortable for me it is OK.

✓ If it's comfortable for me, it's OK.

Minor punctuation: add comma after conditional clause. 'It is' -> contraction optional. Structure is otherwise correct; no tense or agreement errors.

× Yes. On weekdays I usually wear a little bit kind of suitable things and on weekends I wear really, really comfortable things.

✓ Yes. On weekdays I usually wear somewhat suitable clothes, and on weekends I wear very comfortable clothes.

Phrase 'a little bit kind of suitable things' is ungrammatical and awkward. Use 'somewhat suitable clothes' or 'more suitable clothes'. Also 'things' is vague; 'clothes' is appropriate. Suggestion: choose clear modifiers and the correct noun.

× I like wearing clothes that are black colors 'cause I'm not really good at eating things, so when I spit something, if it's black it doesn't appear it so it is good.

✓ I like wearing black clothes because I'm not very good at eating neatly, so if I spill something on a black item it doesn't show, which is good.

'Black colors' is redundant; use 'black clothes'. 'Not really good at eating things' is vague; 'not very good at eating neatly' clarifies the meaning. 'Spit something' is wrong contextually; 'spill something' is correct. Sentence also had pronoun errors ('it doesn't appear it'); corrected to clear clause. Suggestion: use precise verbs and fix pronoun references.