Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant with specific example. To improve, make the language more natural by using correct collocations (e.g., “sportswear”, “breathable tops”) and vary vocabulary slightly. Also keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid minor grammar slips.

例: I usually prefer comfortable clothes, especially sportswear, because they suit my daily activities. For example, I often wear breathable tops and leggings when I go shopping or take a walk because they keep me cool and allow easy movement.

提案: Good direct response and reason. Improve by using a clearer, more natural phrase than “Trek suits” (unless you mean a brand or tracksuits) and avoid awkward phrasing like “on my daily life.” Use a linking word and add a brief example or contrast.

例: I definitely prefer comfortable, sporty clothes because they make it easier to move around quickly. For example, I usually wear tracksuits or activewear when I run errands, whereas I only wear smart clothes for formal occasions.

提案: Strong answer with good range of details. Improve by correcting small grammar issues (“tuck them into skirts” or “tuck them into a skirt”) and combining sentences with linking words for cohesion. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., “pair with skirts” rather than “into the skirts”).

例: Absolutely. I like wearing T‑shirts because they are very versatile. I own many colours and usually pair them with shorts or jeans, but sometimes I tuck a T‑shirt into a skirt and add a blazer for a smarter look.

提案: Clear and honest response. Improve by using more natural phrasing (“I focus on other tasks” rather than “spend time for my other tasks”) and adding a linking phrase to explain routine. Be specific about what you prioritize when choosing clothes.

例: Not really. I usually focus on other tasks, especially in the morning, so I pick whatever is clean and convenient. If I have time, I might choose clothes that are weather‑appropriate or match the occasion.

提案: Very clear and specific. To improve, correct minor word choices (“tracksuits” as one word) and use a linking word to contrast weekdays and weekends more smoothly.

例: Yes. I wear a uniform at work during the week, but on weekends I prefer informal clothes, such as dresses or tracksuits with sneakers, so I can relax and be comfortable.

提案: You give a clear preference, but the second part is unclear and has grammatical issues (e.g., “are very reflective with the skinny jeans”). Improve by explaining reasons more precisely and giving a specific example of matching outfits. Use correct agreement and cohesive linking phrases.

例: I enjoy wearing plain colours like black and white because they’re easy to match with other items. For example, a white T‑shirt looks great with my skinny jeans and a black blazer for a simple, polished outfit.

× I wear breathable top with leggings when I go shopping or take a walk.

✓ I wear a breathable top with leggings when I go shopping or take a walk.

Missing indefinite article before a singular countable noun ('top'). Use 'a' with singular countable nouns. Suggestion: include 'a' or use plural 'tops' if intended.

× I wear Trek suits on my daily life.

✓ I wear Trek suits in my daily life.

Incorrect preposition use affecting tense/meaning: 'on my daily life' is not idiomatic. Use 'in my daily life' to indicate the usual routine. Also 'Trek suits' plural is acceptable if referring to multiple suits.

× I own many sizes and colors.

✓ I own many sizes and colors of T-shirts.

Sentence is grammatically possible but feels incomplete and unclear: 'sizes and colors' need an object (what the sizes and colors refer to). Add 'of T-shirts' for clarity. This addresses missing noun after plural quantifiers.

× I usually pair them with shorts or jeans, or sometimes I tuck them into the skirts and use a blazer.

✓ I usually pair them with shorts or jeans, or sometimes I tuck them into skirts and wear a blazer.

Use of 'the skirts' is incorrect; general reference to skirts requires no article. Also 'use a blazer' is uncommon; 'wear a blazer' is more natural. Remove 'the' and change verb for natural collocation.

× I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I spend time for my other tasks, especially in the morning.

✓ I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I spend time on my other tasks, especially in the morning.

Incorrect preposition: 'spend time for' is wrong; the correct collocation is 'spend time on' when referring to activities or tasks. Use 'on' with tasks.

× Yes, because I wear uniform at work during the week, but on weekends I wear informal clothes like a dress or track suits with sneakers.

✓ Yes, because I wear a uniform at work during the week, but on weekends I wear informal clothes like a dress or tracksuits with sneakers.

Countable singular noun 'uniform' needs an article: 'a uniform'. Also 'track suits' should be 'tracksuits' as one word; maintain number agreement and natural collocation.

× I enjoy wearing plain colors such as black or white because it is easier to match with other colors and clothes, for example, are very reflective with the skinny jeans.

✓ I enjoy wearing plain colors such as black or white because they are easier to match with other colors and clothes; for example, they go very well with skinny jeans.

Multiple issues: pronoun agreement and unclear structure. 'It is easier' should be 'they are easier' to match plural 'colors'. The phrase after the comma is ungrammatical: 'for example, are very reflective with the skinny jeans.' Rephrase to 'for example, they go very well with skinny jeans.' This fixes pronoun agreement and improves collocation and clarity.