Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repeating similar adjectives and refine grammar (e.g. "at work" not "at the work"). Use linking words like "however" to contrast casual and work clothes.

例: I usually prefer casual clothes in my free time because they are comfortable and relaxed. However, at work I wear smart, professional attire—such as a shirt and trousers—so I appear neat and confident.

提案: Make the answer direct and natural: give a brief preference then explain with a specific reason. Improve grammar and use linking words like "because" and "but" correctly. Avoid awkward phrases like "get more preference for easiness."

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed and suit my everyday activities. But for family functions I choose smart clothes so I look presentable and don’t feel out of place.

提案: Start with a clear statement, correct grammar and be specific about why you like T-shirts. Remove redundant or unclear phrasing (e.g. "final printing"). Add a brief example to illustrate your point.

例: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they come in many designs and allow me to express my personality. For example, as a child I often wore band-logo T-shirts to show my taste in music.

提案: Be more concise and natural: answer directly then give a specific explanation. Avoid unnecessary background unless it directly explains the habit. Improve grammar and sentence flow.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. I usually make a shopping plan beforehand, decide what I need, and buy directly, which saves time.

提案: Make the response clearer and more natural: state the difference between weekdays and weekends, use correct phrasing (e.g. "at work" and "wear"). Remove odd expressions like "normal human being." Provide one concrete example of weekday and weekend outfits.

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear work clothes such as a shirt and trousers to feel professional, while on weekends I wear casual outfits like jeans and T-shirts to relax.

提案: Answer directly and give reasons with correct grammar. Avoid repeating words and refine phrasing ("gives me more relaxed" → "makes me feel relaxed"). Include a brief example of items in those colours.

例: I prefer blue and black because they look neat and are easy to match. For family functions I often choose white shirts or kurtas because they feel fresh and relaxed.

× I would like to wear casual clothes when I'm free, but when I'm at the work I would like to wear a specific attire so that I can look professional, clean, healthy.

✓ I would like to wear casual clothes when I'm free, but when I'm at work I would like to wear specific attire so that I can look professional, clean and healthy.

Using 'the' before 'work' is incorrect in this context; 'at work' (no article) is the usual expression for being at one's workplace. Also use 'specific attire' without 'a' because 'attire' is uncountable here. Use 'and' to join adjectives. Suggestion: omit 'the' before 'work' and remove 'a' before 'specific attire', and join adjectives with 'and'.

× I would prefer to wear the comfortable and casual clothes because I get more preference for easiness, but when I'm at the family function I wear the smart clothes so that I don't feel awkward.

✓ I would prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because I prefer comfort, but when I'm at a family function I wear smart clothes so that I don't feel awkward.

Do not use 'the' before a general plural like 'comfortable and casual clothes'. Use 'comfortable, casual clothes' or simply 'comfortable clothes'. 'Get more preference for easiness' is unnatural; use 'prefer comfort'. Also use 'a family function' (indefinite article) unless a specific function is meant. Suggestion: remove 'the', rephrase the second clause, and use 'a' before 'family function'.

× Yeah, I like wearing T-shirt because T-shirts comes in various forms of final printing and I like to show my personality as well.

✓ Yeah, I like wearing T-shirts because T-shirts come in various forms of printed designs and I like to show my personality as well.

Subject-verb agreement: 'T-shirts' is plural and must take the plural verb 'come', not 'comes'. 'Final printing' is awkward; 'printed designs' or 'print styles' is clearer. Suggestion: use plural verb with plural noun and choose natural collocations like 'printed designs'.

× When I was in my childhood, I would love to wear band logos, T-shirts.

✓ When I was a child, I loved to wear T-shirts with band logos.

'When I was in my childhood' is unidiomatic; use 'When I was a child'. 'Would love to' is inappropriate for past habitual action; use simple past 'loved' or 'used to love'. Also reorder to 'T-shirts with band logos' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use 'When I was a child' and past tense for past habits.

× No, I am from a middle class background so when I go for shopping I will have a plan in my mind that what type of clothes I would buy.

✓ No, I am from a middle-class background, so when I go shopping I have a plan in mind about what type of clothes I will buy.

'Will have a plan in my mind that what type' mixes tenses and word order. 'When I go shopping' is present simple for habitual actions; use 'I have a plan in mind' (present) and 'what type of clothes I will buy' (future). Also use hyphen in 'middle-class' and prefer 'go shopping' without 'for'. Suggestion: use consistent tense and correct word order: 'I have a plan in mind about what I will buy.'

× So it's a direct approach, so it doesn't take time.

✓ So it's a direct approach and it doesn't take much time.

Repeating 'so' is redundant; combine clauses with 'and'. Add 'much' to quantify time. Suggestion: avoid redundant connectors and add a quantifier for natural phrasing.

× I just feel like to be a normal human being, so I will wear casual clothes when I'm at my home and when I'm at the work I will work the specific attire which makes me feel confident.

✓ I just want to be a normal person, so I wear casual clothes when I'm at home, and when I'm at work I wear specific attire that makes me feel confident.

'Feel like to be' is incorrect; use 'want to be' or 'feel like a'. 'Normal human being' is wordy; 'normal person' is natural. Remove 'the' before 'work' and 'at home' does not need 'my'. 'Will work the specific attire' is incorrect—use 'wear specific attire'. Use 'that' for defining relative clause. Suggestion: use natural verbs ('want', 'wear'), remove unnecessary articles, and fix verb choices.

× I would love to wear blue and black color clothes because it feels clean, but I also like to wear white clothes when I'm at the the family functions because it gives me more relaxed.

✓ I would love to wear blue and black clothes because they look clean, but I also like to wear white clothes at family functions because they make me feel more relaxed.

Do not repeat 'the the'. 'Blue and black color clothes' is unnatural; use 'blue and black clothes'. Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to clothes. 'Feels clean' should be 'look clean'. 'At the family functions' should be 'at family functions' unless specific functions are meant. 'Gives me more relaxed' is ungrammatical; use 'make me feel more relaxed'. Suggestion: fix prepositions, pronoun agreement, and verb collocations.