Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use precise vocabulary. Say why you like those clothes with one supporting detail using a linking word.

例: I prefer wearing casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical. For example, jeans and T-shirts are easy to move in, so I can wear them for work, errands or meeting friends.

提案: Answer the question directly (choose one option) and give two clear, relevant reasons using linking words. Fix grammar and unclear phrases, and avoid unrelated or confusing details.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes. Firstly, they are easier to move in and more practical for my daily activities. Secondly, casual styles like T-shirts are currently fashionable, so they help me look modern without much effort.

提案: Give a clear direct answer and describe specific features you like, avoiding repetition and fillers. Use linking words to connect preferences and examples, and correct word choice (e.g., “long-sleeved” vs “long tail”).

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially ones with a relaxed cut or raglan sleeves. In summer I buy bright colors such as yellow and blue because they feel fresh and make me more comfortable in the heat.

提案: Keep the answer natural and organized: give a short topic sentence then two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar and use singular/plural forms correctly.

例: Yes, I do spend time choosing clothes because I enjoy following new fashion styles. For example, I often research trends online and ask friends for advice about colours and fits before I buy anything.

提案: Answer directly then give clear contrast using linking words (e.g., 'during the week' vs 'at the weekend'). Use correct grammar and clearer reasons; avoid awkward phrases like 'grand brands houses.'

例: Yes, I wear different styles during the week and at the weekend. During the week I usually wear T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable for work, while at the weekend I dress up more, for example wearing a dress if I go shopping or visit nicer places.

提案: Answer clearly and give a reason using linking words. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'except' not 'expected', 'bright' not 'breathe') and avoid vague phrasing. Provide one or two specific colour examples.

例: I like most colours except black because I feel it looks too sombre. For social events and work I prefer bright colours like blue or yellow because they make me feel more cheerful and approachable.

× I prefer to wear actual clothes such as jeans and T-shirt because it is a it is really convertible and be relaxed to daily life.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes such as jeans and T-shirts because they are really versatile and comfortable for daily life.

The student used incorrect adjectives ('actual' instead of 'casual'), singular/plural issues ('T-shirt' should be plural with 'jeans' and agreement), and incorrect verbs ('be relaxed' is wrong). 'It is a it is' is redundant. Use 'they are' to agree with plural noun 'jeans and T-shirts'. 'Versatile' is a more appropriate word than 'convertible'. Improve by choosing correct adjective, ensuring plural agreement, and using correct predicates. Suggested practice: replace wrong adjectives with context-appropriate ones, check subject-verb agreement for compound subjects.

× Yes, I prefer to wear a comfortable and usual clothes.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable, everyday clothes.

The indefinite article 'a' is incorrect before plural noun 'clothes'. 'Usual' is awkward here; 'everyday' or 'casual' is better. Remove 'a' and use plural or uncountable adjective phrase. Improve by matching articles to countability and choosing appropriate adjectives. Suggested practice: review countable vs uncountable nouns and use articles accordingly.

× That's for many reason.

✓ That's for many reasons.

The noun 'reason' should be plural when modified by 'many'. The student omitted plural 'reasons'. Improve by making nouns agree with quantifiers. Suggested practice: practice using quantifiers like 'many' with plural nouns.

× Firstly, it is easy to walk and find a new outfit in the soup.

✓ Firstly, it is easy to walk around and find a new outfit in the shop.

The preposition and noun are wrong: 'in the soup' is likely a mispronunciation of 'shop'. Use 'walk around' or 'walk' and 'in the shop' or 'in shops'. Improve by choosing the correct vocabulary and prepositions. Suggested practice: learn common collocations like 'walk around' and 'in the shop'.

× Secondly. Nowadays is a one of the new fashion to wear T-shirts and the keys.

✓ Secondly, nowadays it is fashionable to wear T-shirts and jeans.

Sentence has multiple issues: incorrect punctuation, missing subject 'it', wrong article 'a one of', and 'the keys' is likely 'jeans'. Replace with 'it is fashionable' and correct noun. Improve by constructing full sentences with subject and verb, and using correct nouns. Suggested practice: practice subject insertion for impersonal expressions ('it is...') and common collocations.

× I like wearing T-shirt, especially long tail and cutting for from the shoulders.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts, especially long-tail ones and styles that are cut from the shoulders.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general statements. 'Long tail' should be hyphenated 'long-tail' and use 'ones' to refer to T-shirts. 'Cutting for from the shoulders' is ungrammatical; use 'cut from the shoulders' or 'off-the-shoulder styles'. Improve by using plural for general preferences and correct adjectival phrases. Suggested practice: practice pluralization for general tastes and correct modifier placement.

× In summer, I prefer to buy new colors like yellow and blue, making more convertible and relaxed and, and, and relaxed.

✓ In summer, I prefer to buy new colors like yellow and blue, which make my clothes more versatile and comfortable.

'Making more convertible and relaxed' is ungrammatical; use a relative clause 'which make' to describe the effect. Remove repetition and use 'versatile' and 'comfortable' for clarity. Ensure verb agrees with plural 'colors' or refer to 'these colors'. Suggested practice: use relative clauses to link descriptive effects and avoid repetition.

× I remember that. I remember that.

✓ I remember that.

Repeated sentence is redundant. Keep a single instance. Improve by avoiding unnecessary repetition in speech. Suggested practice: practice concise answers and self-monitoring during speaking.

× Yes, I spend quite the time researching clothes because I enjoy researching new fashion style.

✓ Yes, I spend quite a bit of time researching clothes because I enjoy exploring new fashion styles.

'Spend quite the time' is incorrect; use 'spend quite a bit of time' or 'spend a lot of time'. 'Researching new fashion style' should be 'exploring new fashion styles' for natural collocation and plural agreement. Improve by learning fixed expressions for time and pluralization of 'style'. Suggested practice: memorize time expressions ('quite a bit of time', 'a lot of time').

× I'm asking friend about the colours style before buy anythings and all these.

✓ I ask my friends about color and style before buying anything.

Mixed tenses and wrong forms: 'I'm asking' present continuous is odd for habitual actions; use simple present 'I ask'. 'friend' should be plural or 'my friend' with article; 'colours style' is ungrammatical—use 'color and style' or 'colour and style'. 'Buy anythings' should be 'buying anything'. Also change verb form to gerund after 'before'. Improve by using simple present for routines and correct noun forms. Suggested practice: practice present simple for habits and gerund after prepositions like 'before'.

× It takes time.

✓ It takes time.

This sentence is correct as is; it uses simple present to describe a general truth. No correction needed. Suggested practice: none.

× Yes, I'm not wear this same styles in the weekdays and weekends.

✓ No, I don't wear the same styles on weekdays and weekends.

'I'm not wear' is ungrammatical; use auxiliary 'do' with base verb: 'I don't wear'. 'this same styles' should be 'the same styles'. Use 'on weekdays and weekends' for correct preposition. Improve by using correct negative formation in simple present and definite article with 'same'. Suggested practice: review negative forms in present simple and use of 'the' with 'same'.

× Firstly the week weekdays I prefer to wear T-shirt and jeans because it is convertible and relaxed.

✓ On weekdays, I prefer to wear T-shirts and jeans because they are versatile and comfortable.

Use 'On weekdays' for time expression. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts'. 'It is' should be 'they are' to agree with plural subject. 'Convertible' is inappropriate; use 'versatile'. Improve by using correct time prepositions, pluralization, and subject-verb agreement. Suggested practice: practice subject-verb agreement and common adjectives for clothing.

× On other hands in the weekends I wear dress because we are visiting grand brands houses.

✓ On the other hand, at weekends I wear dresses because we visit big brand stores.

Use 'On the other hand' for contrast. 'In the weekends' -> 'at weekends' or 'on weekends'. 'Wear dress' needs plural 'dresses' for general statement. 'grand brands houses' should be 'big brand stores' or 'brand-name stores'. Also change 'we are visiting' to simple present 'we visit' for habitual action. Improve by using correct prepositions and noun phrases. Suggested practice: study fixed contrast phrases and prepositions of time.

× Actually I like all colors expected black because it's reflect for sadness or negative feeling that I'm trying to wear a breathe color for the social event and work.

✓ Actually, I like all colors except black because it reflects sadness or negative feelings; I try to wear brighter colors for social events and work.

Multiple errors: 'expected' should be 'except'. 'It's reflect' should be 'it reflects' (subject-verb agreement). 'Negative feeling' -> 'negative feelings' plural. 'I'm trying to wear a breathe color' unclear: 'brighter colors' is intended. Use plural 'colors' and plural 'events'. Improve by learning 'except' vs 'expected', subject-verb agreement, and adjective choice ('brighter' not 'breathe'). Suggested practice: proofread for similar-sounding words and subject-verb agreement.