Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and fix vocabulary errors (e.g., 'scrap tops' → 'crop tops'). Use a linking word to connect reason.

例: I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and let me move freely. For example, I usually wear simple T‑shirts and jeans when I go out, since they suit my daily activities and make me feel relaxed.

提案: Correct subject-verb agreement and streamline the response. Begin with a clear statement, then give specific examples and one brief reason. Use a linking phrase such as 'for example' or 'because' to connect ideas.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits because they let me move easily. For example, I often choose simple T‑shirts, blouses and shorts for everyday activities because they’re practical and comfortable.

提案: Avoid short incomplete answers and redundant phrases. Give one main reason plus a brief example or context. Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement and unnecessary fragments) and keep to two sentences.

例: Yes, I enjoy wearing T‑shirts because they’re comfortable and practical. For instance, I usually wear them when I study or meet friends since they’re easy to move in.

提案: Make grammar and word order clear. Start with a direct answer, then give specific reasons and an example. Correct phrases like 'when it becomes to what I look' → 'about how I look' and 'the clothes are I wear aligns' → 'the clothes I wear match'.

例: Yes, I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I care about how I look. For example, I pick different outfits for work, social events or casual outings to make sure my clothes match the occasion.

提案: This answer is generally clear but can be more concise and specific. State the main contrast, then give one or two concrete examples and a brief reason for the difference. Avoid words like 'only' if inaccurate.

例: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. For example, during the week I wear simple T‑shirts and trousers for work or classes, while at the weekend I often choose dresses or more fashionable tops because I’m socializing or going out.

提案: Make the sentence grammatically correct and avoid fragments. Give one clear preference and explain briefly with a reason or example. Use singular/plural agreement (e.g., 'colors... are' or 'the pastel ones' → 'pastel colors').

例: I prefer pastel colours because they feel calming and look fresh. For instance, I often choose pale pink or mint green shirts because they’re easy to match and give a relaxed impression.

× The kind of clothes that I like to wear are the casual ones because it makes me more comfortable and it allows me to move freely so it doesn't bother me much unlike such a scrap tops and other dresses.

✓ The kind of clothes that I like to wear is casual ones because they make me more comfortable and allow me to move freely, so they don't bother me much, unlike scrap tops and other dresses.

Singular/plural mismatch: 'The kind' is treated as singular so 'is' fits; however later subjects refer to 'clothes' (plural) so verbs must be plural: 'make', 'allow', 'don't'. Also 'such a scrap tops' is incorrect article+noun form; 'scrap tops' (though likely 'crop tops') should be plural without 'a'. Suggestion: keep subject-verb number consistent and match articles to singular/plural. (Note: consider changing 'scrap tops' to 'crop tops' if intended.)

× I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes because they are the ones who allows me to move freely, just like a simple T-shirt, blouses, pants, shorts, unlike crop tops that are uncomfortable.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes because they are the ones that allow me to move freely, such as a simple T-shirt, blouses, pants, and shorts, unlike crop tops which are uncomfortable.

Pronoun/reference error: use 'that' or 'which' for things rather than 'who'. Subject-verb agreement linked to pronoun: 'they...allow' (plural) not 'allows'. Also 'just like' is better as 'such as' to introduce examples; 'which' clarifies the clause about crop tops. Suggestion: use 'that/which' for objects, keep verb number consistent, and use 'such as' for examples.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because it makes me feel more comfortable, it allows me to move freely without bothering me and. That's all.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they make me feel more comfortable and allow me to move freely without bothering me. That's all.

Verb agreement: 'T-shirts' is plural so verbs should be plural: 'they make' and 'allow', not 'makes'/'allows'. Also sentence had an extra 'and.' causing fragmentation. Suggestion: match verbs to plural subject and remove stray conjunctions.

× Yes, I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I am very conscious when it becomes to what I look and I make sure that the clothes are I wear aligns where I am going or the event that I am going to.

✓ Yes, I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I am very conscious about how I look, and I make sure that the clothes I wear align with where I am going or the event I am attending.

Multiple preposition and word-choice errors: 'conscious when it becomes to' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'conscious about'. 'What I look' should be 'how I look'. 'The clothes are I wear' has wrong word order; use 'the clothes I wear'. 'Aligns where I am going' needs preposition 'align with' and verb form 'attending' is smoother than 'going to' for events. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('about', 'with') and correct word order.

× Yes, I usually use different styles of clothes on weekdays and on weekends. For example, on weekdays, I only wear casual clothes such as simple T-shirts, blouses, pants, and shorts, while on weekends, I prefer wearing dresses, crop tops, and other clothes.

✓ Yes, I usually wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and on weekends. For example, on weekdays I usually wear casual clothes such as simple T-shirts, blouses, pants, and shorts, while on weekends I prefer wearing dresses, crop tops, and other outfits.

Minor preposition/verb choice: 'use different styles of clothes' is unnatural; 'wear different styles of clothes' is correct. 'Other clothes' is vague; 'other outfits' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'wear' for clothing and prefer 'outfits' for variety.

× The color of clothes that I like are the pastel ones because it feels more relaxing and. It and it looks fresh.

✓ The colors of clothes that I like are pastels because they feel more relaxing and look fresh.

Number agreement and redundancy: if referring to multiple colors, use 'colors' and 'pastels' (plural) and plural verbs 'feel' and 'look'. Original included fragments 'and. It and it' which are incorrect. Suggestion: keep subject and verb numbers consistent and remove redundant phrases.