Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and give one concrete reason with a short example. Use plural/singular correctly (e.g. 'clothes' not 'cloth').

例: I usually prefer casual clothes like jeans, T-shirts and simple dresses because they are comfortable. For example, I often wear jeans and a T-shirt when I go shopping or meet friends since they let me move around easily.

提案: Use a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (add subjects and verbs), and connect supporting points with linking words. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences) and give one specific example. Avoid repeating phrases.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits because they are easier to wear and maintain. For example, when I meet friends or go for a run I usually put on a T-shirt and jeans because they are quick to put together and allow me to move freely.

提案: Give a complete, grammatically correct answer with a reason and a full example. Avoid unfinished sentences and correct article/noun agreement ('a jeans' → 'jeans', 'it is' → complete clause).

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are easy to match with jeans and very practical for my daily routine. For example, I usually wear a T-shirt when I go jogging or run errands because it keeps me comfortable.

提案: Answer directly, then give a brief reason with one linking word. Fix grammar and remove repetition. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer simple, comfortable outfits. Therefore I usually grab something practical so I don't waste time deciding what to wear.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence. Use correct phrasing ('both on weekdays and weekends'), avoid typos, and give one concrete example. Keep sentences short and coherent with linking words.

例: No, I wear similar casual clothes both on weekdays and weekends because they are convenient. For example, whether I'm going out or taking a walk I normally wear a T-shirt and jeans.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (remove duplicate words, fix articles), and provide a specific reason and example. Use linking phrases like 'because' and 'for example' correctly.

例: I prefer black clothes because they are easy to match with other items and look smart. For example, I often wear a black shirt to interviews because it makes me feel more confident and professional.

× Generally I prefer a casual cloth such as jeans, T-shirt, dresses because it is a comfortable and more simple.

✓ Generally I prefer casual clothes such as jeans, T-shirts, and dresses because they are comfortable and simple.

The word 'cloth' is incorrect for items of clothing; use the plural 'clothes' or 'clothing'. 'T-shirt' should be plural when listing items (T-shirts). Use commas between list items and include 'and' before the last item. Pronoun and verb must agree with the plural noun: use 'they are' rather than 'it is'. Remove 'more' before 'simple' because it implies comparison without a reference; 'simple' alone is correct. Suggested improvement: learn countable vs uncountable nouns for clothing (a shirt vs some clothing) and ensure subject-verb agreement for plural subjects.

× I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because it convenient and simple.

✓ I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they are convenient and simple.

The subject 'comfortable and casual clothes' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' and the verb 'are'. 'It convenient' omits the auxiliary and uses wrong pronoun. Suggested improvement: match pronoun and verb number to the subject; for plural subjects use 'they are'.

× It easy to wear and maintain.

✓ They are easy to wear and maintain.

Sentence lacks a correct subject-verb structure. 'It easy' omits the verb 'is' and uses singular pronoun 'it' for plural 'clothes'. Use 'they are' to agree with 'clothes'. Suggested improvement: always include a verb (is/are) and ensure pronoun number matches the noun.

× For example when I go for when I go out with my friends or run around because they are easy to move in a quick to put together.

✓ For example, when I go out with my friends or run around, they are easy to move in and quick to put together.

The sentence contains repetition ('when I go for when I go out'), incorrect phrasing ('easy to move in' should be 'easy to move in' is acceptable but awkward; keep it), and missing conjunctions or prepositions. 'quick to put together' needs 'and' connecting phrases. Remove extra words and add commas for clarity. Suggested improvement: read sentences aloud to spot repetition and ensure parallel structure when listing reasons.

× Yes, I like to wear T-shirts because it easy to match with a jeans and convenient for my daily routine.

✓ Yes, I like to wear T-shirts because they are easy to match with jeans and convenient for my daily routine.

'T-shirts' is plural, so use 'they are' not 'it easy'. 'A jeans' is incorrect: 'jeans' is plural and does not take 'a'. Also parallel structure requires 'easy to match' and 'convenient' both with 'they are'. Suggested improvement: remember that 'jeans' is always plural and match verbs to plural subjects.

× For example, if I go go out for run it is a.

✓ For example, if I go out for a run, it is convenient.

There is a repeated word 'go go', missing articles and awkward ending 'it is a'. Insert 'a' before 'run' and complete the sentence with an adjective like 'convenient'. Suggested improvement: check for repeated words and ensure sentences end with a clear predicate.

× No, I don't spend a lot of time on choosing clothes.

✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary after 'spend time' when followed by a gerund. Use 'spend time doing something' rather than 'spend time on doing something'. Suggested improvement: learn common verb + gerund patterns such as 'spend time doing'.

× I just pick up simple and comfortable clothes and it's convenient and I don't want to spend too much time on what I've I wear.

✓ I just pick simple, comfortable clothes because it's convenient, and I don't want to spend too much time on what I wear.

Remove extra 'up' in 'pick up' (unnecessary here) and fix malformed clause 'what I've I wear' to 'what I wear'. Use commas to improve readability. 'Pick simple clothes' is more natural. Suggested improvement: edit to remove duplicated words and ensure the clause 'what I wear' is used correctly.

× No, I prefer casual and simple clothes for my weekends and weekdays both because it's convenient and easy to style.

✓ No, I prefer casual and simple clothes for both weekdays and weekends because they're convenient and easy to style.

Place 'both' before the items it modifies: 'both weekdays and weekends'. Also use plural pronoun 'they're' to agree with 'clothes'. Suggested improvement: position 'both' correctly and maintain subject-verb agreement.

× For example, if I go for a out or I go for a walk, I choose AT shirt and jeans for my daily convenient.

✓ For example, if I go out or go for a walk, I choose a T-shirt and jeans for daily convenience.

Remove incorrect preposition 'for a out' -> 'go out'. 'AT shirt' is a typo for 'a T-shirt'. Use article 'a' before 'T-shirt' and change 'my daily convenient' to noun 'daily convenience' or adjective 'convenience'. Suggested improvement: proofread for typos (AT -> T) and use correct noun forms and articles.

× I prefer black colour because it it is easy to available and easy to match with any jeans.

✓ I prefer black because it is easy to find and easy to match with any jeans.

'Black colour' is redundant; 'black' suffices. Remove duplicated 'it'. 'Easy to available' is incorrect; use 'easy to find' or 'readily available'. 'Any jeans' is acceptable but 'jeans' is plural so keep agreement. Suggested improvement: avoid redundancy (colour after color word) and use correct adjective phrases like 'easy to find'.

× For example if I go for a interview I wear a black because it fill me more confident.

✓ For example, if I go for an interview, I wear black because it makes me more confident.

Use the article 'an' before 'interview'. 'Wear a black' is wrong: 'wear black' or 'wear a black shirt' depending on noun. 'It fill me more confident' needs subject-verb agreement and correct verb ('makes') and adjective form 'more confident' with 'me' as object. Suggested improvement: ensure correct articles before vowel sounds, include the noun after color if using 'a' (e.g., a black shirt), and use 'make' -> 'makes' for singular subject 'it'.