Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Use a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitation words (umm, uh), correct small grammar errors, and give one specific example with a linking word. Speak in 2–4 concise sentences.

例: I prefer casual clothes, such as T-shirts and jeans, because they make me feel relaxed and comfortable. For example, when I go out with friends to hang out, I can move freely and enjoy myself more.

提案: Start with a direct answer, avoid repetition, use correct grammar (e.g., 'these kinds of clothes are'), and use one linking phrase to add a reason or example.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes. They are easier to move in, so for example when I hang out with friends outdoors I feel free and relaxed.

提案: Answer directly, use correct verb forms and pronouns, avoid filler phrases like 'you know', and give one clear reason with a short example. Keep under five sentences.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and suit my style. For instance, I often choose a T-shirt when I go to the park because it is easy to move in.

提案: Provide a concise answer with correct quantifiers (e.g., 'a lot of time' or 'some time'), fix word order, and give one clear instance when you take time choosing clothes. Use linking words like 'for example'.

例: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look good. For example, I often ask my sister for advice when picking an outfit for the weekend or a special event.

提案: Give a clear contrast sentence using linking words ('while' is fine), correct article and noun forms ('formal clothes', 'a formal shirt and trousers'), and be specific about occasions.

例: Yes. When I go to work I usually wear formal clothes, such as a shirt and trousers, because I want to look professional. While at the weekend I wear casual clothes so I can move freely and relax.

提案: Answer directly with correct sentence structure: 'I prefer blue' or 'I like blue clothes'. Avoid fillers and repetition, explain specifically why the colour suits you, and give one brief example of how you wear it.

例: I prefer blue clothes because I have many blue items and they suit my skin tone. For example, I often choose a blue shirt for social events because it looks calm and matches other clothes.

× I prefer wearing, umm, casual, uh, clothes. I like T-shirts and jeans because I feel more relaxed and comfortable with it And umm, for example, when I go outdoors with my friends to hang out, I feel more easy with this kind of clothes and uh, I all the time I'm doing.

✓ I prefer wearing casual clothes. I like T-shirts and jeans because I feel more relaxed and comfortable in them. For example, when I go out with my friends to hang out, I feel more at ease in this kind of clothing and I wear them all the time.

The speaker uses incorrect pronouns and demonstratives: 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'T-shirts and jeans'; 'clothes' and 'this kind' require consistent forms ('this kind of clothing' or 'these kinds of clothes'); 'go outdoors' is more natural as 'go out'; 'feel more easy' is incorrect collocation — use 'feel more at ease'; 'I all the time I'm doing' is incorrect structure — corrected to 'I wear them all the time'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and use standard collocations (e.g., 'at ease', 'wear them').

× Absolutely, I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes because I think, umm, these kind of clothes, uh, are more relaxed and comfortable and I, and it's easy for me to move, umm, to move in. And for example, when I, uh, hanging out with my friends outdoors, it's a very easy to move.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes because I think these kinds of clothes are more relaxed and comfortable and they are easy for me to move in. For example, when I am hanging out with my friends outdoors, it's very easy to move.

Errors include incorrect gerund/participle use and missing auxiliary: 'these kind' should be 'these kinds' or 'this kind'; 'it's easy for me to move, to move in' is redundant and awkward — use 'they are easy for me to move in'; 'when I, uh, hanging out' requires a verb form 'when I am hanging out'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms after subject and ensure gerunds are used with appropriate auxiliary verbs (e.g., 'I am hanging out').

× Yes, definitely I like to tshirts and casual clothes because I feel more relaxed and comfortable in it and you know, the T-shirts styles and go goes me well and I can choose them easily and I it's easy for me to move when I go open.

✓ Yes, definitely I like T-shirts and casual clothes because I feel more relaxed and comfortable in them. The T-shirt styles suit me well and I can choose them easily, and it's easy for me to move when I go out.

Pronoun errors: 'in it' should be 'in them' (plural); 'the T-shirts styles and go goes me well' is incorrect — use 'the T-shirt styles suit me well'; 'go open' is wrong collocation, should be 'go out'. Suggestion: match pronouns to plural nouns and use correct verbs for expressions (e.g., 'suit someone').

× Absolutely yes. I spend amount of time choosing my favorite clothes and sometimes I need my sister's help to choose the best 1 and I do my best for choosing clothes and when I have a for example for weekends or any special event.

✓ Absolutely, yes. I spend a lot of time choosing my favorite clothes and sometimes I need my sister's help to choose the best one. I do my best when choosing clothes, for example for weekends or special events.

Several structural problems: 'spend amount of time' should be 'spend a lot of time'; 'the best 1' likely means 'the best one'; phrase order is awkward and redundant ('I do my best for choosing clothes and when I have a for example for weekends') — clarified into coherent sentences. Suggestion: simplify and split long ideas into clear sentences, use common quantifiers ('a lot of') and spell out numbers or use 'one'.

× Yes, definitely. When I go to work I usually wear an formal clothes such as AT shirt and trouser because I want to look respectable. While at the weekend I prefer wearing a casual clothes to move freely and I feel really relaxed and comfortable with this kind of clothes.

✓ Yes, definitely. When I go to work I usually wear formal clothes such as a shirt and trousers because I want to look respectable. At the weekend I prefer wearing casual clothes to move freely, and I feel really relaxed and comfortable in this kind of clothing.

Article and number errors: 'an formal clothes' should be 'formal clothes' (no article) or 'a formal outfit'; 'AT shirt and trouser' seems to mean 'a shirt and trousers' — use articles correctly and pluralize items ('trousers'); 'a casual clothes' should be 'casual clothes' (no 'a'); 'with this kind of clothes' better as 'in this kind of clothing'. Suggestion: use articles before singular count nouns ('a shirt') and omit articles before plural general nouns ('casual clothes'); use 'in' with 'comfortable'.

× I prefer absolutely blue color because I have a lot of clothes in blue and it suits me well. And you know, whenever I put on these kind of color, I, I think it's suits my skin tone and it's, it's I, I feel really calm and relaxed with this color and I can match with.

✓ I absolutely prefer the color blue because I have a lot of clothes in blue and it suits me well. Whenever I wear this color, I think it suits my skin tone and I feel really calm and relaxed in it and I can match it easily.

Adjective/adverb and article issues: 'prefer absolutely blue color' is awkward — 'absolutely prefer the color blue' is natural; 'these kind of color' should be 'this kind of color' or better 'this color'; 'it's suits' is wrong verb form — use 'it suits'; 'feel... with this color' should be 'feel... in it'; sentence ended with 'I can match with' incomplete — clarify to 'match it easily'. Suggestion: place adverbs correctly (e.g., 'absolutely prefer'), ensure subject-verb agreement, and complete phrasal structures.