Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct grammar (use 'like' not 'likes'), give a direct topic sentence and one specific detail. Keep it concise and natural. For example: start with a clear statement about preference, then add a brief reason or example using a linking word.

例: I like to wear comfortable clothes because they help me move freely. For instance, I often choose soft cotton T‑shirts and loose trousers when I travel.

提案: Avoid filler words and unclear structure. Give one clear sentence stating your preference, then add a linked supporting detail about situations when you wear smart clothes. Use linking words like 'but', 'however', or 'for special occasions'.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes for everyday use, but I wear smart outfits for special occasions. For example, I usually dress formally at parties or job interviews.

提案: This is a good, direct answer but you can improve by adding a brief specific reason or example to extend the response slightly. Use one linking word such as 'because' to connect the reason.

例: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are versatile and easy to wash. I often pair them with jeans for a simple everyday look.

提案: Remove repetition and make the reason more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why with one or two precise details (e.g., matching outfits, deciding for occasions).

例: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I like matching outfits for different occasions. For instance, I compare colours and styles when preparing for work or weekend outings.

提案: Avoid fillers and provide a concise contrast using linking words like 'usually' and 'whereas' or 'but'. Give one concrete example of weekday vs weekend clothing.

例: Yes, I usually wear formal or smart‑casual clothes on weekdays for work, whereas on weekends I choose more relaxed outfits like hoodies and jeans.

提案: Remove hesitations and give a brief reason or an example of how you use the colour. Provide one linked detail such as when you wear it or what shades you prefer.

例: I especially like pink because it feels cheerful and suits my style. For example, I often wear pastel pink shirts in spring and brighter pink accessories for parties.

× I likes comfortable clothes.

✓ I like comfortable clothes.

The subject I requires the base form of the verb without the -s ending. 'Likes' is third person singular present; with I we use 'like'. Use subject-verb agreement: I + like.

× Uh, mostly. Uh, I prefer comfortable clothes. Uh, wear occasionally casual clothes. Otherwise party smart clothes.

✓ Uh, mostly. Uh, I prefer comfortable clothes. Sometimes I occasionally wear casual clothes. Otherwise, I wear smart clothes to parties.

Several issues: missing subject and incorrect word order. Sentences require a subject before the verb and correct placement of adverbs. 'Wear occasionally casual clothes' should be 'occasionally wear casual clothes' or 'I occasionally wear casual clothes.' Also 'Otherwise party smart clothes' lacks a verb and preposition; corrected to 'I wear smart clothes to parties.' Keep consistent present simple tense for habits.

× Yes, mostly I I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I have many clothes.

✓ Yes, mostly I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I have many clothes.

Duplicate word 'I I' is a repetition error and should be a single 'I'. The present simple tense 'spend' is correct for habitual actions; remove the extra 'I' to form a grammatical sentence.

× Uh, yes, I wear different style of clothes, uh, on weekends.

✓ Uh, yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekends.

The noun 'style' should be plural 'styles' because 'different' implies more than one kind. Also remove filler commas and extra 'uh' for clarity. Use 'styles of clothes' or 'styles of clothing.'

× Uh, specially I like uh, uh, pink colour.

✓ Especially, I like the color pink.

Use 'especially' instead of 'specially' to express preference. 'Pink colour' is better expressed as 'the color pink' (American English) or 'pink colour' could be 'the colour pink' (British). Include the article 'the' when naming a color preference. Remove filler 'uh' words for clarity.