Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Avoid repeating the examiner's question. Give a direct topic sentence about your preferences and one brief detail. Keep it natural and concise.

例: I like wearing comfortable, casual clothes such as jeans and soft cotton shirts because they’re easy to move in and suit my daily activities.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct grammar (e.g., “feel not too heavy” → “don’t feel too heavy”). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits because they don’t feel too heavy and are more practical for my everyday life. For example, I often choose soft cotton shirts and loose trousers because they’re breathable and easy to wear.

提案: Answer directly, then explain clearly with correct vocabulary and grammar. Replace unclear phrases (e.g., “hear pass from T-shirt”) with precise reasons such as “they are loose and breathable, so I don’t sweat.” Use one linking word like “because.”

例: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are loose and breathable, so I don’t get too hot or sweat during the day.

提案: Use a simple negative response followed by a clear reason. Correct grammar (e.g., “I don’t spend a lot of time choosing clothes”) and explain how you shop online, mentioning one or two specific methods (filters, categories).

例: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I usually shop online and use filters and saved preferences to find items quickly.

提案: Give a clear contrast between weekdays and weekends. Use linking words (for example, "on weekdays... but on weekends...") and specific examples (work clothes vs party clothes). Keep sentences short and grammatically correct.

例: Yes. On weekdays I dress casually for work or college, usually in plain shirts and trousers, but on weekends I wear more fashionable or party clothes, such as fitted shirts and jeans.

提案: State your preference clearly, then give a specific reason. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., “dark colors,” not “dark gloves”) and concise phrasing. Mention one or two favorite colors as examples.

例: I prefer dark colors, like navy and black, because they suit my skin tone and make my face look brighter.

× I usually prefer comfortable clothes which feel me not too heavy, which is good to wear and look good on me.

✓ I usually prefer comfortable clothes that do not feel too heavy and that are comfortable to wear and look good on me.

The original sentence has incorrect relative clause structure and verb usage. 'Which feel me not too heavy' is ungrammatical; use 'that do not feel too heavy' (correcting word order and adding auxiliary). Also 'which is good to wear' should agree with plural 'clothes' and be 'that are comfortable to wear'. Suggestions: use 'that' for defining relative clauses with plural subject and include auxiliaries for negation (do not). Break into simpler clauses if needed for clarity.

× Yes I like wearing T-shirts because it is an loose fit on my body which help me to hear pass from T-shirt and need not to sweat you.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are loose on my body, which helps the air pass through the T-shirt and prevents me from sweating.

Multiple issues: 'it is an loose fit' uses wrong article and singular pronoun for plural noun; use 'they are loose'. 'Help me to hear pass' is confused: intended 'helps the air pass through'. Also 'need not to sweat you' is wrong pronoun and structure; use 'prevents me from sweating'. Suggestions: ensure pronouns agree with plural/singular nouns, use correct articles ('a' vs 'an' with consonant sound), and use standard verb patterns ('prevent someone from doing something').

× No I'm not spend a lot of time to choosing clothes because I love shopping online by seeing what I love to wear by short and filter using.

✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I like shopping online and use filters to find what I want to wear.

Original mixes incorrect negative form 'I'm not spend' instead of 'I don't spend' (simple present negative). Also 'to choosing' is wrong after 'spend' (use gerund 'choosing'), and 'short and filter using' is ungrammatical; intended 'use filters'. Suggestions: use simple present for habits ('I don't spend'), follow 'spend' with gerund, and use clear phrases like 'use filters' when describing online shopping.

× Yes I wear different styles on weekends then weekdays because weekdays are working days in which I wear in day or college shoot and then I lose fitting like lower T-shirt and on weekends I am like party guy then I wear party shoots party dresses so at this time about different style.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles on weekends than on weekdays. On weekdays I wear casual clothes for work or college, like loose-fitting T-shirts. On weekends I dress more like a party guy and wear party outfits, so my style is different at that time.

The original sentence is confusing with wrong comparative 'then' instead of 'than', awkward prepositions ('wear in day'), and many unclear phrases ('college shoot', 'lose fitting', 'party shoots'). Suggestions: split into shorter sentences, use 'different... than', 'loose-fitting' for adjective + noun, and choose standard phrases like 'party outfits' or 'dress more casually/formally'.

× I like mostly dark colors because on my skin tone it gives me a glow to on my face so I usually like dark gloves.

✓ I mostly like dark colors because they give my face a glow with my skin tone, so I usually choose dark colors.

Problems: word order and agreement ('it gives me a glow to on my face' is wrong), and 'dark gloves' likely incorrect word choice—should be 'dark colors'. Use plural pronoun 'they' for 'colors' and correct phrase 'give my face a glow'. Suggestions: ensure subject-pronoun agreement, use clear collocations ('give a glow to my face' or 'give my face a glow'), and check word choice (colors vs gloves).