Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the sentence grammatically correct, be concise, and add one specific detail to support your preference. Avoid fillers like 'uh'. Use linking words if you add another clause.

例: I prefer wearing T-shirts because they make me feel comfortable and allow me to move easily. For example, I often choose a lightweight cotton T-shirt when I walk to campus because it keeps me cool and flexible.

提案: Respond directly with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and give a specific reason with an example. Remove hesitation sounds.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are easy to mix and match. For instance, a plain T-shirt and jeans can be combined with different jackets or shoes for various occasions.

提案: Use correct word order and grammar, and combine ideas into a fluent short response (max 3–4 sentences). Add a specific detail about why T-shirts are good in summer.

例: Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts, especially in summer, because they are breathable and let me move comfortably. I often choose light-colored cotton T-shirts to stay cool on hot days.

提案: Make your answer more organized: state the reason, then describe your routine with correct grammar and fewer repetitions. Replace vague phrases with specific actions and avoid filler words.

例: Yes, I do spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I often worry about what is appropriate for an event. Therefore, I usually pick and lay out my outfit the night before to save time and avoid last-minute stress.

提案: Answer directly, correct grammar, and clarify the unclear last sentence. Give a brief reason and a simple example of your usual weekday/weekend choice.

例: No, I usually wear the same simple style on both weekdays and weekends because it makes me feel confident and comfortable. For example, I typically wear plain shirts and jeans whether I'm at work or relaxing at home.

提案: State your preference clearly, correct grammar, and give a specific reason or example of how you mix black and white with other items. Avoid fillers.

例: I prefer black and white clothes because they are easy to match with other items. For example, I often combine a white shirt with black jeans and a colored scarf to create a simple, coordinated outfit.

× I want to wear T-shirts because it's make me feel comfortable and easily to, uh, do everything I want.

✓ I want to wear T-shirts because they make me feel comfortable and make it easy for me to do everything I want.

The original sentence misuses 'it's' and lacks subject-verb agreement. 'T-shirts' is plural, so use 'they' (Grammar Problem Type ID 17 and 27). Also 'make me feel comfortable and easily to do' is ungrammatical; use parallel verbs 'make me feel comfortable' and 'make it easy for me to do'. Suggestion: Match plural subject with plural pronoun and keep parallel structure: 'they make me feel comfortable and make it easy for me to do everything I want.'

× I prefer to wear casual clothes because they easily too coordinate clothes with many style. Mm-hmm.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes because they are easy to coordinate with many styles.

Errors include wrong adverb/adjective form and word order. Use adjective 'easy' with infinitive or 'to' omitted: 'easy to coordinate'. 'Too' is unnecessary. 'Clothes' repeated is redundant and 'many style' should be plural 'many styles' (Grammar Problem Type IDs 13 and 17). Suggestion: simplify phrase to 'they are easy to coordinate with many styles.'

× I very like wear T-shirt because in summer. It makes you feel comfortable and easy to move.

✓ I really like wearing T-shirts in summer. They make you feel comfortable and make it easy to move.

'I very like' is incorrect; use 'I really like' or 'I like ... very much' (Grammar Problem Type ID 13). 'wear T-shirt' needs gerund/plural: 'wearing T-shirts'. The sentence fragment 'because in summer.' should be combined. Also ensure plural agreement: 'They make you feel...' and parallel structure 'make it easy to move.' Suggestion: use 'really like wearing T-shirts in summer' and keep parallel verbs.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I don't know what I want and what is suitable for this event. So I will prepare my outfit at the night before because it's save time and uh, help me, uh, have a many time.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I don't know what I want and what is suitable for the event. So I prepare my outfit the night before because it saves time and helps me have more time.

Problems: 'the night before' is the correct phrase, not 'at the night before' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). 'it's save time' needs correct verb form: 'it saves time' (present tense third-person singular) (Grammar Problem Type ID 2 and 6). 'help me, uh, have a many time' is incorrect: use 'helps me have more time' and remove filler words (Grammar Problem Type ID 13). Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and correct preposition and verb agreement.

× No I have never tried other styles because for me I prefer simple styles. It make me feel more confident and comfortable. I don't want to every everyone.

✓ No, I have never tried other styles because I prefer simple styles. They make me feel more confident and comfortable. I don't want to stand out from everyone.

Issues: 'It make' should agree with plural 'styles' so 'They make' (subject-verb agreement, Grammar Problem Type ID 27). The phrase 'I don't want to every everyone' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'I don't want to stand out from everyone' or 'I don't want to be different from everyone' (Grammar Problem Type ID 12 and 26). Suggestion: use correct pronoun number and a clear verb phrase such as 'stand out from everyone.'

× I usually wear casual style so I like black and white because umm it easy to meet and match order clothes.

✓ I usually wear a casual style, so I like black and white because they are easy to match with other clothes.

Problems: 'wear casual style' needs article and noun form: 'wear a casual style' or 'wear casual styles' (Grammar Problem Type ID 22). 'it easy to meet and match order clothes' is incorrect: use 'they are easy to match with other clothes' (preposition 'with' and correct adjective/adverb forms) (Grammar Problem Type ID 11 and 13). Suggestion: use 'they are easy to match with other clothes' and correct article usage.