Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but tighten phrasing and correct small grammar issues. Start with a concise topic sentence, then add one specific example and a linking phrase. Avoid redundancy (e.g., “comfortable” and “relaxed” overlap).

例: I usually wear comfortable, sporty clothes because they help me stay relaxed. For example, I often choose a breathable hoodie and running shoes when I go shopping or take a long walk, since they make moving around much easier.

提案: Good direct response, but reduce repetition and fix grammar (use “in my daily life” not “on”). Add a linking word and a short reason or example to enrich the answer.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move easily. For instance, I usually wear loose trousers and sneakers during the day, which is more practical than smart outfits.

提案: Strong, natural answer with good detail. Improve cohesion by combining sentences and correcting word order (‘different size designs’ → ‘different styles and sizes’). Use a linking phrase to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I love T-shirts because they are very versatile. I own T-shirts in different styles and sizes, and I usually pair them with jeans or shorts; occasionally I wear a T-shirt with a skirt for a casual special occasion.

提案: Clear answer but phrase more naturally and politely (avoid saying it’s a “waste of time”). Add a brief reason and a linking word to explain your routine.

例: Not really. I try to keep it simple, especially in the mornings, so I usually choose whatever is clean and convenient because I want to save time for other tasks.

提案: Answer is relevant but needs grammatical correction and clearer phrasing. Use linking words and be specific (singular/plural: ‘a black top, jeans and sneakers’). Avoid 'only' awkwardly placed.

例: Yes. During the week I wear a work uniform, but on weekends I dress casually. For example, I often wear a black top with jeans and sneakers.

提案: Good basic idea but fix grammar and fluency. Remove filler sounds (‘uh’) and use smoother expressions (e.g., ‘they suit me’). Provide one concise reason with a linking word.

例: I prefer plain colors such as white and black because they are easy to match. For example, a black jacket goes well with almost any outfit, so I feel more confident wearing neutral tones.

× I prefer wearing comfortable, sporty clothes because I feel more relaxed and they are better suited for my daily routines, especially when shopping or take a walk.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable, sporty clothes because I feel more relaxed and they are better suited for my daily routines, especially when shopping or taking a walk.

The verb after 'or' should be in the -ing form to match 'shopping' (parallel gerunds). Change 'take a walk' to 'taking a walk' for parallel structure and consistency.

× I definitely prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they help me to move around easily and quickly. I especially wear them on my daily life.

✓ I definitely prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they help me move around easily and quickly. I especially wear them in my daily life.

Use simple present without 'to' after 'help' (help + base verb). Also use the preposition 'in' with 'daily life' rather than 'on' for idiomatic English.

× I own many different size designs and colors because they are very versatile.

✓ I own many different sizes, designs, and colors because they are very versatile.

Plural nouns 'sizes', 'designs', and 'colors' are needed after 'many'. Also add commas to separate items in a list.

× I usually pair them with jeans or shorts or sometimes with skirts for special occasions.

✓ I usually pair them with jeans or shorts, and sometimes with skirts for special occasions.

Using 'or' repeatedly is awkward; use 'and' to link the final alternative. Also add a comma before 'and' for clarity when listing alternatives.

× Not really, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because it's a waste of time for me, especially in the mornings.

✓ Not really. I don't spend much time choosing clothes because it's a waste of time for me, especially in the mornings.

This reply should be two sentences rather than a comma splice. Replace the comma with a period to correct sentence structure.

× I usually pick whatever is clean and convenient.

✓ I usually pick whatever is clean and comfortable.

'Convenient' is possible but collocates less naturally for clothing choice; 'comfortable' is a better collocation. This is a usage suggestion rather than strict grammar, but improves naturalness.

× Yes, during the week I wear uniform at work, but on the weekends I wear informally.

✓ Yes, during the week I wear a uniform at work, but on the weekends I dress informally.

Add the article 'a' before 'uniform' (countable noun). Use 'dress informally' rather than 'wear informally' for correct verb usage.

× For example, I wear black top and only jeans and a sneaker.

✓ For example, I wear a black top with jeans and sneakers.

Use the article 'a' with the singular countable noun 'top'. Use plural 'sneakers' for typical footwear and remove 'only' or reposition it if needed. Use 'with' rather than 'and' for natural collocation.

× I like plain colors like white or black because it is easier to match uh than with other clothes or colors.

✓ I like plain colors like white or black because they are easier to match than other clothes or colors.

Pronoun 'it' is incorrect for plural 'colors'—use 'they'. Remove filler 'uh'. Also correct comparative structure: 'easier to match than other clothes or colors'.

× I don't like colorful things because I think they don't suit me a lot.

✓ I don't like colorful things because I think they don't suit me very much.

Use 'very much' instead of 'a lot' in negative statements for more natural English. This fixes the adverbial quantifier usage.