Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Remove filler words, give a clear topic sentence and add one brief reason with a linking word. Be specific about what features make sportswear convenient or comfortable.

例: I prefer wearing sportswear because it is lightweight and allows me to move freely. For example, the breathable fabric keeps me cool when I walk or exercise, so I choose sportswear for most casual activities.

提案: Avoid repetition and correct small grammar slips. Start with a direct topic sentence and add a concise supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., because, since).

例: I definitely prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me relax after a long day. For instance, loose trousers and a soft sweater make commuting and working much easier.

提案: Good short answer and supporting details. To improve, combine sentences for fluency and add a specific example of how you wear T-shirts using a linking word.

例: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they are very versatile; for example, I wear plain T-shirts for work and graphic ones when I meet friends, which lets me dress up or down easily.

提案: Avoid absolute phrases like "waste of time" that may sound blunt. Give a brief reason and one specific routine detail using a linking word such as "so" or "therefore."

例: Not really. I usually pick clothes quickly because I prefer practicality, so I choose whatever is clean and convenient, like a simple shirt and jeans for work.

提案: Correct grammar and be more precise. Start with a topic sentence, then explain the difference with a linking word and a clear example. Remove repetition and fix tense/word order errors.

例: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends because I work on a farm during the week and need durable work clothes; at the weekend, I switch to casual outfits like jeans and a T-shirt.

提案: Avoid filler words and repetition; use correct grammar and a clear structure. Start with a direct statement, give a reason, and include a brief specific example of outfit combinations.

例: I prefer plain colours such as black and white because they are easy to mix and match; for example, a white blouse goes well with both skirts and jeans.

× I prefer wearing uh sports wear because it is more convenient and it feels more comfortable.

✓ I prefer wearing sportswear because it is more convenient and feels more comfortable.

The phrase 'sports wear' should be 'sportswear' as one word; remove filler 'uh'. Also 'it feels more comfortable' repeats subject 'it' unnecessarily after 'and' — combine to 'and feels more comfortable' to avoid redundancy. Suggestions: remove fillers, use correct compound noun 'sportswear', and avoid repeating subjects when they are the same.

× I definitely prefer comfortable and casual clothes because it's it feels more relaxing.

✓ I definitely prefer comfortable and casual clothes because it feels more relaxing.

There is an extra subject 'it' causing redundancy and an incorrect contraction sequence ('it's it'). Remove the duplicated 'it' so the clause reads 'because it feels more relaxing.' Suggestion: Proofread to remove duplicated words or contractions.

× Absolutely. I like wearing T-shirts because they are very versatile. I have a lot of T-shirts with different designs and colors.

✓ Absolutely. I like wearing T-shirts because they are very versatile. I have a lot of T-shirts with different designs and colors.

No grammatical error detected that matches the listed problem types; sentences are correct. (Included to confirm no change needed.)

× Not really, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because it's a waste of time for me. I usually choose whatever is clean and convenient.

✓ Not really. I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because it's a waste of time for me. I usually choose whatever is clean and convenient.

Change comma to period for clearer sentence separation; grammar matches allowed types. No grammatical issue beyond punctuation. Sentences are otherwise correct.

× Yes I do. I wear different styles of clothes on weekends and weekdays. I wear work in a farm on weekdays, but on weekends I wear informal clothes.

✓ Yes, I do. I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends. I work on a farm on weekdays, but on weekends I wear informal clothes.

'I wear work in a farm' is ungrammatical. The intended meaning is likely 'I work on a farm' so replace 'I wear work' with 'I work', and use preposition 'on' with 'a farm'. Also standardize order 'weekdays and weekends' to match context. Suggestion: ensure verbs match intended meaning and use correct prepositions with places.

× While I prefer plain colors like black or white because it's easier to match with every clothes, especially with skirts or jeans, jeans.

✓ I prefer plain colors like black or white because they are easier to match with every item of clothing, especially skirts or jeans.

Several issues: 'While' at sentence start is unnecessary; 'it's' (singular) mismatches plural 'colors' so use 'they are'. 'every clothes' is incorrect; use 'every item of clothing' or 'all clothes'. The repetition 'jeans, jeans' is redundant. Suggestion: match pronoun number with antecedent, avoid unnecessary words, and remove repetition.