Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and clear. Start with a concise topic sentence (e.g., “I prefer comfortable clothes, especially in summer.”), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct basic grammar (use ‘cotton’ + verb forms) and avoid repeated or unclear phrases.

例: I prefer comfortable clothes, especially in summer. For example, I usually choose cotton shirts because they absorb sweat and keep me cool.

提案: Answer the choice directly (comfortable or smart), then give specific reasons with linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., ‘I prefer comfortable clothes’), avoid redundant adjectives like ‘fascinated’ here, and use verbs correctly.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits because they allow me to move freely and are cooler in hot weather, especially if they are made of breathable fabrics like cotton.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words and vague phrases like ‘anything’. Use plural forms and collocations correctly (‘T-shirts with jeans’).

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable. For instance, I often pair T-shirts with jeans or shorts for a casual but neat look.

提案: Answer directly and briefly, then give one clear reason with specifics. Avoid repetitions and self-corrections. Use correct phrases (‘choosy when selecting clothes’, ‘dressing sense’) and limit to maximum five sentences.

例: Yes, I spend some time choosing clothes because I care about my appearance. For example, I usually check styles and colors before buying to make sure they match my wardrobe.

提案: Give a clear direct answer about the difference between weekdays and weekends, then support with specific details and linking words. Avoid contradictory statements in one answer and reduce hesitations. Use consistent tense and concise phrasing.

例: Usually I dress more casually on weekdays for comfort at work, but on weekends I wear trendier or more stylish outfits to go out with friends.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your favorite colors, then give specific reasons using linking words. Use correct plural and collocation (‘red suits me’, ‘besides’). Avoid fillers and repeat words.

例: I like red and white. Red suits me well and makes me feel confident, while I also like white because it looks fresh and symbolizes peace.

× I want to wear comfortable clothes, especially in summer. I prefer to wear cotton clothes which observe which observer sweat.

✓ I want to wear comfortable clothes, especially in summer. I prefer to wear cotton clothes which absorb sweat.

The student used 'observe' and 'observer' incorrectly. The intended meaning is that cotton takes in sweat, which requires the verb 'absorb' in base form to form a relative clause 'which absorb sweat' (plural noun 'clothes' needs plural verb). This is a combination of wrong verb choice and subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use 'absorb' and ensure verb agrees with 'clothes' (they absorb).

× I'm very fascinated to wear a clothes because I'm very fashionable.

✓ I'm very interested in wearing clothes because I'm very fashionable.

The phrase 'fascinated to wear a clothes' is ungrammatical. 'Fascinated' followed by 'to' is incorrect; use 'interested in' or 'fascinated by'. Also 'a clothes' is wrong because 'clothes' is plural and does not take 'a'. Suggestion: use 'interested in wearing clothes' or 'fascinated by clothes'. Use correct article or none for plural nouns.

× I want to prefer a comfortable clothes which observe my sweat and provide coolness to me.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes that absorb my sweat and keep me cool.

Problems: 'want to prefer' is wrong — 'prefer' alone is enough. 'a comfortable clothes' mixes singular article with a plural noun. 'observe my sweat' is wrong verb choice; 'absorb' is correct. 'provide coolness to me' is wordy; 'keep me cool' is natural. Suggestion: use 'I prefer comfortable clothes that absorb sweat and keep me cool.'

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirt because T-shirt is very comfortable.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable.

Use plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. Also use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are' to match. Alternatively 'the T-shirt' could be used when referring to a specific item. Suggestion: say 'I like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable.'

× We can wear T-shirt with the anything like lower jeans etcetera.

✓ We can wear T-shirts with anything, like jeans or trousers.

'the anything' is incorrect; use 'anything' without 'the'. 'lower jeans' is unnatural — say 'jeans' or 'trousers'. Also use plural 'T-shirts' for general statements. Suggestion: simplify to 'with anything, like jeans.'

× Uh, also the T-shirt look very classy.

✓ Also, T-shirts look very classy.

Subject-verb agreement: 'T-shirt' as a general category should be plural 'T-shirts' and take plural verb 'look'. If singular, use 'The T-shirt looks very classy.' Suggestion: match number between subject and verb.

× Yes, I am very choosy to select a clothe.

✓ Yes, I am very choosy when selecting clothes.

'Choosy to select a clothe' is ungrammatical. Use 'choosy about' or 'choosy when selecting'. 'A clothe' is wrong — use 'clothes' (plural) or 'a piece of clothing'. Suggestion: 'I am very choosy when selecting clothes.'

× Or also I am very serious about my clothing sense.

✓ Also, I care a lot about my clothing sense.

'Or also' is redundant; 'clothing sense' is understandable but 'dressing sense' is more natural. 'I am very serious about' is grammatical but slightly formal. Suggestion: 'I care a lot about my dressing sense.'

× Sorry, not a clothing sense, it's a dressing sense.

✓ Sorry, not 'clothing sense', I mean 'dressing sense'.

This is a repair utterance; use quotes or commas in speech. The student used 'a' unnecessarily. Suggestion: 'I mean dressing sense.'

× Or yes I'm I want to I prefer to wear a comfortable clothes.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes.

Redundant phrases 'I'm I want to I prefer' are incorrect; choose one verb phrase. 'A comfortable clothes' mixes singular article with plural noun. Suggestion: simplify to 'I prefer to wear comfortable clothes.'

× Uh, this is not compulsory. I want to wear stylish clothes only on weekends.

✓ This is not compulsory. I prefer to wear stylish clothes only on weekends.

'I want to wear' is acceptable but 'prefer' matches context better. No major grammar error here beyond style. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for clarity.

× Uh, I want, I prefer to wear clothes very stylish everyday, not only in weekends, uh, because I'm very fashionable and I'm very fascinated to wearing clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear very stylish clothes every day, not only on weekends, because I'm very fashionable and I'm very interested in wearing clothes.

Multiple issues: 'everyday' (adjective) vs 'every day' (adverb) — use 'every day'. 'in weekends' is wrong — use 'on weekends'. 'fascinated to wearing' is incorrect; use 'interested in wearing' or 'fascinated by wearing'. Suggestion: 'I prefer to wear very stylish clothes every day.'

× So yes, I choose very comfortable and cool.

✓ So yes, I choose clothes that are very comfortable and cool.

'I choose very comfortable and cool' lacks object; complete thought requires 'clothes that are'. Add 'that are' to form correct adjective clause. Suggestion: include the noun being chosen.

× Uh, there are many type of colour but I like red colour, uh because red colour suit me very well.

✓ There are many types of colour, but I like red because red suits me very well.

'many type' should be 'many types'. 'red colour' is redundant; 'red' or 'the color red' is preferred. Subject-verb agreement: 'red suit' should be 'red suits' (singular subject). Suggestion: 'There are many colors, but I like red because it suits me.'

× So that's why I choose red colour. Beside this, white is also a colour which I like because white is a symbol of peace.

✓ So that's why I choose red. Besides that, I also like white because white is a symbol of peace.

'red colour' redundant—use 'red'. 'Beside this' should be 'Besides that' or 'Besides'. Maintain coherence and use 'I also like white'. Suggestion: 'Besides that, I also like white because it symbolizes peace.'