Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear, relevant and concise. To improve, add one specific example and a linking phrase to make it more vivid and coherent (stay within 3–4 sentences). Also avoid repeating the same idea twice.

例: I prefer wearing casual or sportswear because they are comfortable and let me move freely. For example, I often wear a lightweight tracksuit when I run errands or go hiking on weekends, which helps me stay active. Additionally, I choose breathable fabrics like cotton because they keep me cool.

提案: Good direct response but it repeats 'easy to move' and is slightly redundant. Improve by using a linking word, giving a concise reason, and one brief example to show contrast with smart clothes.

例: I definitely prefer casual clothes because they’re much more comfortable and practical. For instance, after a long workday I like to change from a suit into jeans and a hoodie to relax, whereas smart clothes feel restrictive.

提案: Strong, natural answer with variety and examples. To reach full marks, tighten wording and use a linking word to connect ideas smoothly. Keep answers within four sentences.

例: Absolutely — T-shirts are very versatile and comfortable. I have many with different designs and colors, so I often pair them with jeans or shorts; occasionally I wear a T-shirt with a skirt for a casual date.

提案: Answer is direct but blunt and slightly informal with 'waste of time'. Improve by using a softer, more natural phrasing, adding a brief reason and an example of when you do spend time choosing clothes.

例: Not really — I usually pick simple outfits quickly because I don’t like spending much time on clothes. However, I will plan my outfit for special events like job interviews or weddings to make sure I look appropriate.

提案: Good contrast, but phrasing has a small error ('working form'). Improve by using correct term 'workwear' or 'formal clothes', add a linking word, and provide a specific example of each style.

例: Yes, I do. During weekdays I usually wear workwear — for example, tailored trousers and a blouse for the office — whereas on weekends I prefer informal clothes like jeans and a sweatshirt.

提案: Clear and natural answer. To improve, give a specific reason and an example of how you combine those colors, and use a linking word to expand briefly.

例: I prefer plain colors such as black and white because they’re easy to mix and match. For example, I often pair a white shirt with black trousers and add a colored scarf to create a simple but polished look.

× I prefer wearing casual or sportswear because I feel more comfortable with those clothes and they help me to move around easily.

✓ I prefer to wear casual or sportswear because I feel more comfortable in those clothes and they help me move around easily.

The verb 'prefer' can be followed by either 'to' + base verb or the -ing form; using 'to wear' sounds slightly more natural here. Use 'in' with clothing rather than 'with'. Also 'help' is followed by the base verb without 'to', so 'help me move' is correct. Improve by choosing one preferred structure and consistent prepositions: 'prefer to wear' + 'comfortable in'.

× I definitely prefer wearing casual or comfortable clothes because it's easier to move around easily, especially after a busy week or busy day.

✓ I definitely prefer wearing casual or comfortable clothes because it's easier to move around, especially after a busy day or week.

Redundant words: 'easier' and 'easily' conflict; use one form. 'Busy day or week' is the typical order; no need for both 'week' and 'day' repeated. Keep 'prefer wearing' is acceptable but remove redundancy: 'easier to move around'.

× I enjoy wearing T-shirts because it is very versatile.

✓ I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they are very versatile.

T-shirts is plural, so the pronoun and verb must agree: use 'they are' not 'it is'. Ensure subject-pronoun and verb number match: plural noun -> plural pronoun and verb.

× I have a lot of T-shirts with different designs and colors.

✓ I have a lot of T-shirts in different designs and colors.

Both 'with' and 'in' can be used, but 'in different designs and colors' is more natural when describing variations. This is a stylistic choice; use 'in' for clearer description.

× I usually pair them with jeans or shorts, sometimes with skirts for special occasions.

✓ I usually pair them with jeans or shorts, and sometimes with skirts for special occasions.

Add 'and' to connect the two coordinate parts smoothly. Preposition 'with' is correct; include the conjunction for clarity.

× Not really, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because it's like a waste of time for me.

✓ Not really. I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I find it a waste of time.

Split into two sentences for clarity. Replace 'it's like a waste of time for me' with idiomatic 'I find it a waste of time'. This improves conciseness and naturalness.

× Yes I do. I wear working form on weekdays, but on the weekends I wear informal clothes.

✓ Yes, I do. I wear work clothes on weekdays, but on weekends I wear informal clothes.

'Working form' is incorrect; use 'work clothes' or 'workwear'. Add a comma after 'Yes'. 'On weekends' is more natural than 'on the weekends' in this context. Ensure correct collocations.

× I like plain colors like black or white because it's easier to match with other clothes.

✓ I like plain colors like black or white because they are easier to match with other clothes.

The subject 'plain colors' is plural, so use 'they are' rather than 'it's'. This fixes pronoun-number agreement. Alternatively 'because they match easily with other clothes.'