Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Remove filler words, correct grammar, and make the answer more concise while adding one specific example to support your preference. Use a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail with a linking word.

例: I prefer simple, casual clothes because they make me feel comfortable and allow me to move easily. For example, I often wear a cotton T-shirt and jeans when I go out because they are breathable and suitable for walking.

提案: Shorten repetitive phrases and improve cohesion by using linking words. Provide a brief reason and one specific situation to illustrate your point.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they let me move freely and feel confident. For instance, when I go shopping or meet friends, I usually wear sneakers and jeans so I can walk for hours without discomfort.

提案: This answer is natural and concise. Improve slightly by using a linking word and adding a brief reason about when you choose different designs.

例: Absolutely. T-shirts are very versatile, and I wear them with jeans or shorts. For example, I choose plain T-shirts for workdays and patterned ones for weekends to express my mood.

提案: Fix grammatical errors and soften the phrase "waste of time" to sound more natural. Add a linking word and one specific routine to explain how you choose clothes.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer to be practical. Usually, I pick whatever is clean and comfortable, for example, a plain shirt and jeans for daily errands.

提案: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use a clear topic sentence and one specific contrast between uniform days and days off.

例: Not really. Because I wear a uniform at work, I usually stick to casual clothes off-duty; for example, I wear the same T-shirts and jeans on both weekdays and weekends.

提案: Correct grammar and make the explanation more natural by giving a specific reason and one example of when you choose each color. Use linking words for clarity.

例: I prefer black and white clothes because they look professional and are easy to match. For example, I wear black for formal meetings but choose white shirts for casual outings because they feel fresh.

× I prefer wearing uh, simple casual clothes because it fills me more comfortable and help me relax and move around easily.

✓ I prefer wearing simple, casual clothes because they make me feel more comfortable and help me relax and move around easily.

The original has several issues: 'uh' is a filler and removed; 'simple casual' needs a comma for coordinate adjectives (order correction, but treated here as clarity). More importantly, 'it fills me more comfortable' is ungrammatical: 'fill' is not used this way and the subject is plural (clothes), so use plural pronoun 'they' and the correct expression 'make me feel comfortable'. Also 'help' must agree with the plural subject 'they' and is correct here. Suggest practicing subject identification and common expressions like 'make someone feel' and using plural pronouns for plural nouns. Suggested improvement: identify the subject (clothes = plural) and use 'make me feel' for describing how clothing affects feelings.

× I definitely prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes because it's easier to move around and go out, for walking, for shopping, for everyday life, so I feel more confident with those clothes.

✓ I definitely prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes because they're easier to move around in and go out in, for walking, for shopping, and for everyday life, so I feel more confident in those clothes.

The original uses contraction 'it's' (it is) to refer to clothes (plural). This is a pronoun-number mismatch; use 'they're' (they are). Also prepositions: say 'easier to move around in' and 'confident in those clothes'. Maintain parallel prepositions and include commas for list clarity. Suggest ensuring pronoun number matches noun and using correct prepositions with verbs like 'move around in' and 'confident in'.

× Absolutely. I like wearing T-shirts because it's very versatile.

✓ Absolutely. I like wearing T-shirts because they're very versatile.

The subject 'T-shirts' is plural, but the sentence uses 'it's' (it is), which is singular. Change to 'they're' (they are) to match the plural subject. Practice matching pronouns and verbs to the number of their antecedents.

× I usually choose the clothes whatever is clean and convenient.

✓ I usually choose whatever clothes are clean and convenient.

The clause 'whatever is clean and convenient' mismatches with 'the clothes' and has awkward word order. Use 'whatever clothes are clean and convenient' or 'whatever is clean and convenient' without 'the clothes'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement: 'clothes' (plural) requires 'are'. Suggest simplifying to 'I usually choose whatever clothes are clean and convenient.'

× I wear the same things on weekends and weekdays because at work I wear uniform so apart from work I usually wear the same things so my style doesn't change a lot.

✓ I wear the same things on weekends and weekdays because at work I wear a uniform, so apart from work I usually wear the same things, and my style doesn't change much.

Several issues: 'wear uniform' needs an article 'a uniform' unless speaking of uniform conceptually; run-on sentence needs commas and conjunctions; 'doesn't change a lot' is colloquial—'doesn't change much' is more natural. Also 'on weekends and weekdays' is acceptable but repetitive; kept for meaning. Suggest adding articles where needed and breaking long sentences into clearer parts.

× I like white or black clothes because it shows me more professional and I think it shows my personality because I don't like very colorful things.

✓ I like white or black clothes because they make me look more professional, and I think they show my personality because I don't like very colorful things.

Pronoun and verb issues: 'it shows me more professional' is incorrect. Use plural pronoun 'they' for clothes and the correct verb phrase 'make me look more professional'. Also 'shows my personality' should be 'they show my personality'. Suggest using 'make someone look' for appearance changes and matching pronouns to plural nouns.