Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more grammatical, concise and complete. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms and avoid filler words. Add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

例: I usually wear T-shirts and jeans because they are very comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I often choose a soft cotton T-shirt and well-fitting jeans when I go out with friends because they keep me relaxed all day.

提案: Answer directly and avoid hesitation noise. Use a clear single sentence saying your preference, then briefly support with a reason and linking word. Correct pronouns and verb forms.

例: I prefer to wear casual clothes when I go to work because they help me feel comfortable. For instance, I usually choose smart-casual outfits for meetings so I look neat but still relaxed.

提案: Make verbs and pronouns agree and streamline the sentence. Start with a topic sentence, then add one concise, specific reason using a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and make it easy to decide what to wear. For example, a plain T-shirt pairs well with jeans, so I can get ready quickly in the morning.

提案: Use consistent tense and correct articles/plurals. Give a clear topic sentence about how much time you spend, then explain with one specific example and a linking word. Avoid repetition.

例: Yes, I sometimes spend a lot of time choosing clothes because it depends on the occasion. For instance, I take longer to pick an outfit for a wedding than for a casual meal with friends.

提案: Clarify and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'casual' not 'castle') and be specific about styles. Use one topic sentence and one supporting sentence with linking words. Reduce hesitations and repetition.

例: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. For example, on weekdays I wear casual office clothes like chinos and a polo shirt for work, whereas at the weekend I often dress more formally when I go to church.

提案: Be concise and correct sentence fragments. Give a clear statement of preference, then one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid fillers and explain what you mean by 'color resistant'.

例: I prefer white T-shirts because they fit comfortably and are easy to match with other clothes. For example, a white T-shirt goes well with any jeans or jacket, so I can mix and match outfits quickly.

× The clothes that are that I like to wear is T-shirt and jeans because it is very comfortable and.

✓ The clothes that I like to wear are T-shirts and jeans because they are very comfortable.

Original sentence has extra words ('that are that') and subject-verb agreement errors: 'The clothes ... is' should be 'are' because 'clothes' is plural (Grammar problem type IDs 1 and 27). Also use plural 'T-shirts' and plural pronoun 'they' to match. Remove the trailing conjunction 'and.' Suggestion: simplify to 'The clothes that I like to wear are T-shirts and jeans because they are very comfortable.'

× Yes, I prefer our casual ones when I am going to work. Hmm. And have a meeting. This, uh, enables me to.

✓ Yes, I prefer casual clothes when I go to work or have a meeting because they allow me to be comfortable.

Original uses incorrect pronoun 'our' instead of 'casual clothes' or 'them' and has sentence fragments ('And have a meeting. This ... enables me to.'). Also tense and structure: use present simple 'I go' for habitual action (Grammar problem type IDs 12 and 26). Suggestion: combine ideas into one complete sentence and use correct pronouns and tense: 'I prefer casual clothes when I go to work or have a meeting because they allow me to be comfortable.'

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because it is very comfortable and it is very easy to decide what shirt should I wear on that day.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable and it is very easy to decide which shirt I should wear that day.

Use plural pronoun 'they' to agree with plural 'T-shirts' (third person plural), not 'it' (Grammar problem type IDs 2 and 27). Also correct question word order within a statement: change 'what shirt should I wear on that day' to 'which shirt I should wear that day.' Use 'which' for choice and remove 'on.'

× Yes, I spent a lot of time when I'm too when choosing a right clothes because it will vary on the occasion that I have attend like a wedding and celebrations.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing the right clothes because it varies depending on the occasion I attend, such as weddings and other celebrations.

Mixed and incorrect tenses: original switches between past 'spent' and present 'I'm' and future 'will vary.' Use present simple 'I spend' for habitual action (Grammar problem type 5 and 6). Also 'choosing a right clothes' is incorrect: use 'choosing the right clothes' (article and number). 'Vary on the occasion that I have attend' is ungrammatical: use 'varies depending on the occasion I attend' and pluralize 'weddings.' Suggestions: keep consistent present tense for habits and correct article and verb forms.

× Yes, I wear a different style of clothes. For example, on weekdays I wear a castle once, uh, this is for, uh, for working and for weekends, uh, I like to wear uh, formal attire, like attend, uh, like when I'm tending to church.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes. For example, on weekdays I wear casual clothes for work, and on weekends I like to wear formal attire, for example when I attend church.

Use plural 'styles' to match 'different' and plural noun 'clothes' (Grammar problem type IDs 1 and 13). 'Castle once' is incorrect—likely intended 'casual ones' so corrected to 'casual clothes.' Verb 'attend' was misused as 'tending to church'; use 'attend church.' Also streamline and remove fillers for clarity. Suggestions: use plural nouns consistently and correct vocabulary ('casual' not 'castle').

× I like to wear, uh, a white T-shirt because, uh, it fits. Very comfortably and for me, uh, it is uh, color resistant.

✓ I like to wear a white T-shirt because it fits very comfortably and, for me, it is stain resistant.

Sentence had a period breaking 'fits very comfortably' into two fragments and used 'color resistant' incorrectly—likely meant 'stain resistant' or 'does not show stains' (Grammar problem type 13). Also remove filler words and join fragments. Suggestion: use 'stain resistant' or 'doesn't show stains' to express the idea clearly and keep sentence fluency.