Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details with linking words. Mention why dresses are easy to match and give an example. Keep it under five sentences.

例: I prefer wearing comfortable, casual dresses. For example, loose cotton dresses are easy to mix and match with different shoes and accessories, so I can get ready quickly for work or a day out.

提案: Give a direct answer first (comfort or smart), then explain one reason clearly using linking words (because, so). Avoid vague words like "small" or "mild"; use 'casual' or 'smart'. Provide a brief example of an occasion.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they let me move freely and feel relaxed. For example, I often wear a simple blouse and jeans for errands or meeting friends because it looks neat but not too formal.

提案: Answer directly (Yes/No) and use correct nouns: 'T-shirts' and 'shirts.' Explain briefly why and give one specific situation where a shirt is preferable. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example.'

例: Not really — I prefer wearing shirts because they look smarter and suit many occasions. For example, I wear a collared shirt to interviews or meetings because it gives a more professional impression.

提案: Start with a clear statement (No/Yes) and then contrast past and present using linking words like 'now' and 'when I was younger.' Avoid unclear words like 'shooting' and 'dutiful.' Be specific about what changed (experience, simpler wardrobe).

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes now because I have a simple wardrobe and know what suits me. However, when I was younger I spent a long time deciding outfits because I was still finding my style.

提案: Answer clearly and contrast weekdays and weekends using linking words ('on weekdays... whereas... on weekends...'). Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'comfortable clothes for work' and 'casual clothes for relaxation'). Give a specific example for each period.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear comfortable but neat clothes such as trousers and a blouse for work, whereas at the weekend I choose casual outfits like jeans and a T-shirt so I can relax and be comfortable.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence listing two or three favorite colours, then give a brief reason for liking or avoiding a colour. Avoid long lists and correct grammar (e.g., 'I like yellow and light blue-green').

例: I like bright colours such as yellow and light blue-green because they make me feel cheerful. I usually avoid black because it makes me feel too slim and I prefer colours that suit my mood.

× I like to wear comfortable in the also cool outfit such as dresses because they are very easy to match on.

✓ I like to wear comfortable and cool outfits such as dresses because they are very easy to match.

Incorrect preposition 'in' and trailing 'on' are unnecessary; 'outfit' should be plural to match general statement; conjunctions were awkward ('and also'). Improve by removing wrong prepositions, using 'and' to connect adjectives, and pluralizing 'outfits'.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and also the small clothes because I think that when I wear the mild clothes, I don't like that I'm being very elegant and also I think it's very decent. It's very suitable for the any occasional outfit.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, simple clothes because when I wear formal clothes I don't like being very elegant; I think simple clothes are decent and suitable for many occasions.

Words like 'small' and 'mild' were incorrect adjective choices. 'the any occasional outfit' is incorrect article and noun usage. Replace with 'simple' or 'casual', remove unnecessary 'the' and use 'many occasions'. Also simplify sentence structure and correct verb forms (don't like being).

× Interrupt the T-shirt. I prefer more to wear a shirt because I think it's very more elegant and can be fit for a lot of occasion.

✓ About T-shirts: I prefer to wear shirts because I think they are more elegant and can fit many occasions.

'Interrupt the T-shirt' is unintelligible and needs rephrasing. 'I prefer more to wear a shirt' is awkward; use 'I prefer to wear shirts'. 'It's very more elegant' is incorrect adverb placement and comparative; use 'more elegant'. 'can be fit for a lot of occasion' has incorrect passive and plural; use 'can fit many occasions'.

× Obviously not much because now I I know, but I'm dutiful for so I can be like I can save a lot of time to shooting, but when when I was younger that I spent a lot of time to shooting because I don't know what what might style and what I don't know what is my.

✓ Obviously not much now because I know what I like, so I can save a lot of time choosing clothes. When I was younger I spent a lot of time choosing because I didn't know my style.

The original has repeated words, incorrect verb 'shooting' (should be 'choosing'), mixed tense and unclear phrasing. Fix tense consistency (past for younger), remove repetitions, use correct verb 'choose/choosing', and clarify 'know my style'.

× Yes, when I, uh, in on a weekday that I prefer to wear the comfortable clothes because it's durable food work. And then in the weekend that I prefer to wear the triceps because I don't can be more relaxing and uh, I prefer to dividing.

✓ Yes. On weekdays I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they are practical for work. On weekends I prefer to wear casual clothes because I can be more relaxed.

Incorrect prepositions ('in on a weekday', 'in the weekend'), wrong word choices ('durable food work', 'triceps', 'I prefer to dividing'), modal error 'I don't can'. Replace with 'on weekdays/weekends', 'practical for work', 'casual', and correct verb/modal use 'can be more relaxed'.

× I like to yellow, umm light blue-green, purple, pink, white, a lot of color but I don't like the black because it seems like when I wear that I feel I'm slimmer and I do not good.

✓ I like yellow, light blue-green, purple, pink, and white; I like many colors but I don't like black because when I wear it I feel slimmer and it does not look good on me.

Incorrect verb and pronoun usage: 'I like to yellow' should be 'I like yellow'. Use 'it' to refer to 'black' and correct adjective phrase 'does not look good on me'. Also add commas and conjunctions for clarity and pluralize 'colors'.