Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons and an example. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Link ideas with simple connectors (because, so, and).

例: I prefer to wear comfortable clothes. For example, loose cotton shirts and joggers help me feel relaxed during the day because they are not tight and allow me to move easily.

提案: Answer directly and complete the contrast. Use correct words (formal/informal) and a linking phrase to compare. Keep it to two or three sentences and avoid hesitations.

例: I usually prefer comfortable, casual clothes for school because they help me relax. However, for formal events I choose smart clothes like a shirt and trousers to look more professional.

提案: Give a direct yes/no and briefly explain with one supporting detail and a contrast. Use correct tense and avoid repeated words. Use a linking word like however to show contrast.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wear. However, I wear formal clothes to important events so I can look professional.

提案: Be specific about situations and use clear language. Use present simple for habits and avoid filler words. Give a short reason and an example of how much time you spend.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes for school because I pick simple outfits quickly. But when I go shopping or prepare for a date, I spend more time selecting clothes to look nice.

提案: Answer directly and give a clear contrast with specific examples of styles for weekdays and weekends. Avoid repetition and use correct linking words (because, but).

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear comfortable clothes like jeans and hoodies for school because they are practical. On weekends I often wear trendier outfits, such as a nice blouse or jacket, when I go out with friends.

提案: State your preference clearly and give a specific reason. Avoid vague or repetitive phrases. Use one or two sentences and a clear adjective to explain why you like that colour.

例: I prefer black clothes because they look neat and are easy to match with other items. For example, a black jacket and trousers make any outfit look tidy and stylish.

× And I prefer to wear come comfortable clothes which allows me feel a lot too tight or it or uncomfortable because I I think if I can wear comfortable it it helps me to feel happy.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes which do not feel too tight or uncomfortable because I think wearing comfortable clothes helps me feel happy.

The original sentence misuses conjunction 'And' at the start and has many repetitions and incorrect clause links. 'which allows me feel a lot too tight or it or uncomfortable' is ungrammatical; use a relative clause 'which do not feel too tight or uncomfortable'. Also subject-verb agreement in relative clause required plural verb 'do'. Remove filler words and repetitions and reorder for clarity. Suggestion: start with the main clause, then add the relative clause and a clear reason clause.

× Actually if I just go to school I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because it's it's helps me more comfortable and relax. But if I if I need to go to some inform some informal formal event, I prefer to wear.

✓ Actually, if I just go to school I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they help me feel more comfortable and relaxed. But if I need to go to a formal or semi-formal event, I prefer to wear smart clothes.

Tense and verb form errors: 'it's it's helps me more comfortable and relax' mixes subject and verb incorrectly; use plural pronoun 'they' for 'clothes' and verb 'help' in present tense. Use adjective 'comfortable' and past participle 'relaxed' or adjective 'relaxed' for state. Also 'inform some informal formal' is confused; choose 'formal or semi-formal'. End the second sentence with the object 'smart clothes' for completeness.

× And yes, I found a wearing wearing T-shirts because it helps me relax and comfortable. However, if I I need to went to some formal event, I usually chose to wear formal clothes because it allows me to look more professional.

✓ Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they help me relax and feel comfortable. However, if I need to go to a formal event, I usually choose to wear formal clothes because they make me look more professional.

Incorrect verb forms: 'found a wearing wearing' is wrong; use 'enjoy wearing'. Use 'they' for plural 'T-shirts' and 'help' present tense. 'Feel comfortable' requires adjective 'comfortable'. 'Need to went' mixes modal + past; use 'need to go'. 'Usually chose' is past tense; use present 'usually choose'. 'It allows me to look' is better as 'they make me look' for clothes and clearer causation.

× Actually, if I just go to school, I cannot rest more to more to more time to choose my clothes. However, if I went to shopping or dating with my friends, I usually prefer to spend more time because it helps me look more pretty and.

✓ Actually, when I just go to school, I do not have much time to choose my clothes. However, if I go shopping or on a date with my friends, I usually prefer to spend more time because it helps me look prettier.

Tense inconsistencies: 'cannot rest more to more to more time' is ungrammatical; use 'do not have much time'. 'If I went to shopping or dating' mixes past and wrong verb forms; use present 'if I go shopping or on a date'. 'Look more pretty' should be 'look prettier' (comparative form). Remove trailing 'and.' and complete sentence.

× An absolutely because I usually need to go to school on weekdays so I usually wear some comfortable clothes. But when I but on the week weekends I I have some dating with my friend, I prefer to wear fashion clothes.

✓ Absolutely. I usually need to go to school on weekdays, so I wear comfortable clothes. On weekends, if I go on dates with my friends, I prefer to wear fashionable clothes.

Conjunction and connector misuse: 'An absolutely' is incorrect; use 'Absolutely.' Repetition 'but when I but' should be removed. 'Week weekends' wrong form; use 'weekends'. 'I have some dating with my friend' is unnatural; use 'I go on dates with my friends'. 'Fashion clothes' should be 'fashionable clothes' (adjective form).

× Actually, I prefer to wear black clothes because it helps me look more, look more, look more. I don't, I don't feel colorful because it is very amazing.

✓ Actually, I prefer to wear black clothes because they suit me and make me feel calm. I do not like very colorful clothes.

Adjective misuse and repetitions: repeating 'look more' is meaningless. 'It helps me look more' incomplete. Use clear reasons: 'they suit me and make me feel calm'. 'I don't, I don't feel colorful because it is very amazing' is ungrammatical and unclear; replace with 'I do not like very colorful clothes.' Avoid unnecessary repetition and vague adjectives like 'amazing' where meaning is unclear.