Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct, clear topic sentence describing the style you prefer (e.g., fashionable, casual, sporty). Then add one or two specific reasons or examples. Keep sentences short and avoid hesitations or unclear phrases.

例: I like to wear fashionable clothes because they help me make a good impression. For example, I often choose a smart jacket and neat trousers when I meet new people or go to events.

提案: State your preference directly (comfortable/casual or smart) and give a clear reason using a linking phrase (because, so). Avoid vague words like 'small' or short fragments.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed during the day. For instance, I usually wear a soft T-shirt and jeans when I go out with friends.

提案: Your answer is on the right track: give a clear topic sentence and two concise supporting reasons. Avoid repetition and unclear details (e.g., '2 shirts'). Use linking words such as 'because' and 'so' correctly.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to put on. So, I often choose a T-shirt with jeans for everyday activities.

提案: Give a direct yes/no and explain briefly how much time you spend and why, with a concrete example. Avoid unclear words and broken sentences. Use a linking word to connect your idea to the reason.

例: Yes, I usually spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I want to look appropriate for each occasion. For example, I plan my outfits the night before work or a social event.

提案: Answer directly and contrast weekdays versus weekends using linking words (whereas, while). Be specific about the clothes you wear (e.g., shirts, suits, jeans) and avoid invented words or mispronunciations written as text.

例: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I wear smart clothes like shirts and tailored trousers for work, whereas on weekends I choose casual outfits like T-shirts and jeans.

提案: State the colour clearly and give a simple, polite reason. Avoid unclear or inappropriate phrases. Use linking words (because, so) and give a brief example of when you wear that colour.

例: I prefer black clothes because they look neat and match easily with other items. For example, I wear a black coat or sweater when I go to the city because it feels professional and simple.

× I like to find an impression because it's like.

✓ I like to make an impression because I like that.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and phrasing: 'find an impression' and 'it's like' are incorrect. Replace with 'make an impression' (correct collocation) and use 'I like that' to refer back to the idea. This fixes pronoun/reference and creates a clear subject-verb structure.

× Please make me feel like.

✓ I want my clothes to make me feel confident.

The original is an incomplete sentence and unclear. 'Please make me feel like' lacks an object or complement. Rephrase to a complete clause expressing the intended meaning: 'I want my clothes to make me feel confident.' This corrects sentence structure and provides a clear verb and object.

× Like the woman?

✓ Do you mean like a woman?

The original is a fragment and unclear. Use 'Do you mean like a woman?' to form a proper question with correct pronoun/article usage and complete sentence structure.

× I prefer small clothes 'cause it makes me more cool so. I note.

✓ I prefer slim clothes because they make me look cooler.

'Small clothes' is unnatural; 'slim clothes' or 'tight' is better. Subject-verb agreement: 'they make' (plural). 'Cooler' is comparative. Remove 'I note' which is unclear. This addresses quantifier/word choice and agreement.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because it's comfortable and.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable.

T-shirts are plural, so use 'they are' instead of 'it's'. The sentence was also incomplete; finishing it corrects pronoun number and verb agreement.

× It's easy to wear. So I usually wear 2 shirts.

✓ They are easy to wear, so I usually wear two T-shirts.

Use plural pronoun 'they' with plural noun T-shirts. Spell out numbers in formal speech: 'two'. Specify 'T-shirts' for clarity. This corrects quantifier and pronoun agreement.

× Yes, I usually spend time to choosing girls.

✓ Yes, I usually spend time choosing clothes.

'Spend time choosing' is the correct structure; do not use 'to' before the -ing form. 'Choosing girls' is incorrect and likely meant 'choosing clothes'. This fixes verb + -ing usage and word choice.

× I. I separate. Crosses.

✓ I separate my outfits and cross-check them.

Original consists of fragments and unclear words. Combine into a full sentence: 'I separate my outfits and cross-check them.' This clarifies meaning and fixes sentence structure.

× Yes, I tend to wear different stars on weekend and week dates.

✓ Yes, I tend to wear different styles on weekends and weekdays.

'Stars' is incorrect word choice; 'styles' is appropriate. Use plural forms 'weekends' and 'weekdays' and correct pronoun usage by making terms consistent. This fixes word choice and pluralization.

× Starting weekdays, I usually opt for small casual or formal courses for work, such as shirts and tailored dozers to look.

✓ On weekdays, I usually opt for casual or formal clothes for work, such as shirts and tailored trousers to look professional.

Many words are incorrect: 'Starting weekdays' should be 'On weekdays'; 'small casual' unclear—use 'casual'; 'courses' should be 'clothes'; 'dozers' is likely 'trousers'. Add 'to look professional' to complete the idea. This fixes article and vocabulary errors and creates a coherent sentence.

× I prefer Brock because when I go now city everyone wear colorful color so I feel like strangers sex.

✓ I prefer black because when I go to the city now everyone wears colorful clothes, so I feel like a stranger.

Multiple issues: 'Brock' should be 'black' (spelling), 'go now city' -> 'go to the city now' (preposition), subject-verb agreement 'everyone wears', 'colorful color' -> 'colorful clothes', and 'feel like strangers sex' is meaningless; likely 'feel like a stranger'. Correct these for adjective choice, verb agreement, prepositions, and clarity.