Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and a brief specific example. Avoid vague wording and errors (e.g., subject-verb agreement and item names). Keep to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word if adding a reason or example.

例: I usually prefer very comfortable, loose-fitting clothes such as shalwar-kameez. For example, I wear shalwar-kameez at home because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed.

提案: Start with one clear sentence stating your preference, then give a concise reason and a correct example. Fix repetition and vocabulary errors (e.g., misnamed items). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly.

例: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes rather than smart outfits. Because they let me move freely and stay cool, I often wear loose cotton clothes such as a shalwar-kameez at home and when I go out.

提案: Answer directly and explain briefly with correct word choice. Replace unclear words (e.g., 'tissue') with accurate vocabulary like 'fabric' or 'cotton'. Keep it to one or two sentences.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because the soft cotton fabric is comfortable and breathable, especially in warm weather.

提案: Provide a direct short answer and add one specific supporting detail to sound natural. Avoid vague statements like 'I can choose everything' — explain how you decide or give an example.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer simple outfits. For example, I usually pick a T-shirt and jeans quickly for weekdays.

提案: Give a concise reply with correct tense and a clear reason. Use linking words (e.g., 'because' or 'so') correctly and avoid repetition. Provide a specific example of the different styles you wear.

例: Yes, I dress differently on weekends because I often go out for meals or shopping. For example, I wear casual jeans and a nice shirt when I go out, while on weekdays I usually wear simple, comfortable clothes at home.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence listing 2–4 colours you prefer. Then give one specific reason for your choice using correct phrasing. Remove unrelated comments (e.g., about your father) unless they are explained clearly.

例: I like bright, refreshing colours such as orange, yellow, light blue and pink. I choose them because they make me feel cheerful and energetic when I wear them.

× I like very comfortable clothes which is very loose fitted like shalwar kummies.

✓ I like very comfortable clothes which are very loose-fitting, like shalwar kameez.

Subject 'clothes' is plural so the relative clause needs plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement) and 'loose fitted' is incorrect adjective form; use the compound adjective 'loose-fitting'. Also 'shalwar kummies' appears to be a misspelling; 'shalwar kameez' is the correct term. Improve by matching plural subjects with plural verbs and using standard adjective forms.

× I prefer comfortable clothes because.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes.

The sentence ends with an incomplete subordinate clause 'because' with no reason provided, causing a sentence structure error. Either remove 'because' or complete the sentence with the reason. Here removal keeps the sentence grammatical and concise.

× I prefer very comfortable loose clothes because they let me move freely and stay cool.

✓ I prefer very comfortable, loose clothes because they let me move freely and keep me cool.

The phrase 'stay cool' is acceptable but 'keep me cool' sounds more natural and maintains consistent subject reference ('they' referring to clothes keeps 'me' cool). Also add a comma between coordinate adjectives 'comfortable' and 'loose' for clarity.

× For example, I often wear Shell Barclays at home and outside.

✓ For example, I often wear shalwar kameez at home and when I go out.

'Shell Barclays' is likely a phonetic or spelling error for 'shalwar kameez'. Also 'outside' as an adverb is better expressed as 'when I go out' in this context. Use correct vocabulary and clearer phrasing.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because tissue is also very comfortable.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because the fabric is very comfortable.

'Tissue' is an incorrect word here; likely intended 'tissue' meaning fabric or 'cotton'. Use 'the fabric' or specify 'cotton' to be clear. This fixes the lexical choice and meaning.

× No, not really. I'm not a picky person. I can choose everything.

✓ No, not really. I'm not a picky person. I can wear anything.

'Choose everything' is unnatural; 'wear anything' fits context and meaning. This corrects the quantifier/use of pronoun and makes the sentence natural.

× Yes, I wear different kinds of clothes on weekends because on weekends we usually went to outside, like dining outside or shopping, so we want to go shopping.

✓ Yes, I wear different kinds of clothes on weekends because on weekends we usually go out, for example to eat out or go shopping.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'went' with present habitual context. Use present simple 'go' for habitual actions. Also 'went to outside' is ungrammatical; use 'go out' or 'eat out'. Remove redundancy 'we want to go shopping' which repeats the idea.

× I like my refreshing colors like orange, yellow, light blue, pink that that gives you a vibes of to live. That is all my father.

✓ I like fresh, bright colors like orange, yellow, light blue, and pink; they give a lively feeling. That's all, my father.

Multiple issues: 'refreshing colors' is better 'fresh, bright colors'; duplicate 'that that' and incorrect 'gives you a vibes of to live' should be 'they give a lively feeling' or 'they make me feel lively'. 'That is all my father' is unclear; if addressing the examiner and then naming the speaker's father, separate with a comma: 'That's all, my father.' Improve by using correct adjectives, plural agreement for 'they give', and clearer phrasing.