Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and natural: state the main preference first, avoid filler words (uh), and give one brief supporting detail. Use a linking word to contrast casual and formal choices.

例: I usually prefer casual clothes like hoodies and jeans because they are comfortable, but for special occasions I wear smart coats or suits to look more professional.

提案: Reduce repetition and correct small grammar mistakes. Give a clear topic sentence and one concise reason using a linking word (because/so).

例: I prefer comfortable clothes such as hoodies and jeans because they are practical and let me move freely during the day.

提案: Avoid awkward phrasing and compare appropriately. Use one linking phrase and correct adjective order (hot day). Provide a short reason why T-shirts are preferable sometimes.

例: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts, especially on hot days, because they are light and cooler than hoodies or heavy jeans.

提案: Make tense and phrasing more natural. Use a clear contrast with a linking word (but/however) and avoid unnecessary words. Keep it to two brief sentences.

例: Not anymore. I used to spend a lot of time choosing outfits when I was younger, but now I decide quickly and focus on comfort.

提案: Be decisive and give a clear comparison between weekdays and weekends. Fix grammar and be specific about examples of occasions. Use a linking word to clarify.

例: Yes, somewhat. On weekdays I often wear smart-casual clothes for meetings, whereas at weekends I stick to very casual outfits like hoodies and jeans.

提案: Answer clearly and finish your sentence. Add a concise reason and avoid repeating the word 'blue' too many times. Use one linking word to explain the preference.

例: My favourite colour is blue because it reminds me of the sky; I often choose blue T-shirts or jeans as they look calm and go with many other colours.

× I like to wear companion suits such as, uh, hoodies, but sometimes when I have a special occasion, I'd like to wear formal clothes like, uh, quality, good quality coats.

✓ I like to wear comfortable clothes such as hoodies, but sometimes when I have a special occasion, I'd like to wear formal clothes like good quality coats.

The original uses 'companion suits' which is incorrect word choice and repeats 'quality, good quality'. Replace with 'comfortable' for intended meaning and use 'good quality coats' once. Advice: choose precise adjectives and avoid repetition.

× Usually I prefer to wear comfortable suits like hoodies and jeans because I I'll just like it and the convenience is important to for me.

✓ Usually I prefer to wear comfortable clothes like hoodies and jeans because I like them and convenience is important to me.

Errors include 'suits' (wrong noun), 'I I'll just like it' (redundant and wrong tense/form), and 'important to for me' (preposition error). Use simple present 'I like them' and 'important to me'. Advice: avoid repetition, use correct pronouns for plurality ('them'), and correct prepositions.

× Absolutely. I enjoy wearing T-shirts, especially when it's hard hot day. T-shirts are convenient clothes rather than hoodies or jeans.

✓ Absolutely. I enjoy wearing T-shirts, especially on a hot day. T-shirts are more convenient than hoodies or jeans.

'Hard hot day' is incorrect adjective order and 'hard' unnecessary; use 'on a hot day' (correct preposition and article). 'Convenient clothes rather than' is awkward—use comparative 'more convenient than'. Advice: use proper prepositions for time expressions and comparative constructions.

× Absolutely not. When I was young I spent a lot of time to choose what I wear, but recently I don't spend more time to do.

✓ Absolutely not. When I was young I spent a lot of time choosing what to wear, but recently I don't spend much time doing that.

Use gerund 'choosing' after 'spent time' and 'what to wear' is correct phrase. 'Don't spend more time to do' is ungrammatical—use 'don't spend much time doing that' for present habit. Advice: after 'spent time' use verb+ing; use 'much' with negatives and 'doing that' as reference.

× I'm not sure. Usually I wear comfortable outfits well, both when I have a special occasion like a conference and the important to meeting.

✓ I'm not sure. Usually I wear comfortable outfits both for special occasions like a conference and important meetings.

'Outfits well' is incorrect placement; 'the important to meeting' is ungrammatical. Use 'for special occasions' and plural 'important meetings'. Advice: place adverbs correctly and use appropriate prepositions ('for') and plural nouns for general statements.

× My favorite color is blue. When I choose what I wear, I prefer to choose blue ones like blue T-shirts and blue jeans because it reminds me of a beautiful sky and.

✓ My favorite color is blue. When I choose what to wear, I prefer blue items like blue T-shirts and blue jeans because they remind me of a beautiful sky.

Use 'choose what to wear' not 'choose what I wear'. 'Blue ones' is vague—use 'blue items'. 'It reminds me' is wrong pronoun for plural 'items'; use 'they remind me'. Remove trailing 'and'. Advice: ensure pronoun agreement with plural nouns and use clear noun phrases.