Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), and add a brief specific detail or reason. Keep to 1–3 sentences.

例: I usually wear casual, comfortable clothes such as jeans and simple shirts because they let me move freely and feel relaxed all day.

提案: Answer directly and correct grammatical errors. Use linking words (but, when) and give a clear condition. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use specific examples.

例: It depends on the occasion: when I go to the mall I prefer casual clothes, but for work I choose smart-casual outfits so I look professional yet comfortable.

提案: Be concise and avoid hesitation. Use precise vocabulary (comfortable, versatile) and one clear reason plus an example. Correct small grammar mistakes.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile; for example, I often pair a plain T-shirt with jeans for a relaxed look.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and specific reasons. Remove vague phrases (“you know”) and correct expressions (pleasing to the eye). Use linking words (because, when) to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I usually spend time choosing clothes because I want to make a good impression when I meet people or attend important events.

提案: Organize your answer: state the general pattern, then give 1–2 specific examples. Avoid unclear phrases (stakeholder) and grammatical errors. Use linking words (for example, but, while).

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear smart-casual clothes for work, while on weekends I usually dress more casually; for example, I wear nicer clothes for church but casual outfits for meeting friends.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and a brief reason. Correct small errors (capitalization) and be specific about shades or combinations if possible.

例: I prefer neutral colours because I don't like drawing attention; for example, I usually wear white, black or grey, which are easy to mix and always look neat.

× Of course it differ.

✓ Of course it differs.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it' is singular, so the verb must be 'differs' (adds -s). Use 'differs' to match the singular subject. Suggestion: For singular third-person subjects, use the -s form in present simple (he/she/it differs).

× It depends to an event if I will go to mall and then I will use casual wear, but if I'm going to my work, of course the smart casual.

✓ It depends on the event: if I go to the mall I will wear casual clothes, but if I'm going to work, of course I wear smart casual.

Use 'depend on' not 'depend to'. Also use 'go to the mall' with the article 'the'. 'Use casual wear' is unnatural here; 'wear casual clothes' fits better. Maintain tense consistency: present simple for habitual choices. Suggestion: Use 'depend on' and include necessary articles ('the mall') and natural collocations ('wear casual clothes', 'go to work').

× Yes, I like wear T-shirts simply because it makes me feel relaxed and at ease.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts simply because they make me feel relaxed and at ease.

After 'like' when speaking generally, use the gerund 'wearing'. Also change 'it makes' to 'they make' because 'T-shirts' is plural. Suggestion: Use 'like + -ing' for general preferences and ensure pronoun agrees with plural noun (they/them).

× It makes me more really, and it's easy to part, uh, partner it with jeans.

✓ They make me feel more relaxed, and they're easy to pair with jeans.

'More really' is ungrammatical; use 'more relaxed' or 'really relaxed'. 'Partner it with jeans' is incorrect collocation; use 'pair them with jeans'. Also ensure pronoun agreement: 'they're' for plural T-shirts. Suggestion: Use clear adjectives (relaxed) or adverbs (really relaxed) and correct collocations ('pair with').

× Of course, because I want to be pleasing in eyes when I meet someone and when I go to work on, you know, something important is coming up.

✓ Of course, because I want to look pleasing to the eye when I meet someone, and when I go to work if something important is coming up.

Awkward phrasing: 'pleasing in eyes' should be 'pleasing to the eye' or 'look good'. 'Go to work on' is incorrect; restructure to show condition 'when I go to work if something important is coming up'. Suggestion: Use natural English phrases like 'look good' or 'pleasing to the eye' and simplify clause order for clarity.

× Of course it depends today occasion if I will go to church, of course I dress up, if I will go on the more course casual and weekdays I will work.

✓ Of course it depends on the occasion: if I go to church, I dress up; if I go out for a casual event, I wear casual clothes on weekends and I work on weekdays.

Use 'depends on the occasion' not 'depends today occasion'. 'If I will go' is incorrect in conditional; use present simple 'if I go'. 'Go on the more course casual' is unclear; rephrase to 'go out for a casual event' and clarify weekdays/weekends. Suggestion: Use 'depends on', present simple in conditional clauses (if + present), and clearer phrasing for contrasting weekday/weekend choices.

× So it is my casual to be presentable for the stakeholder.

✓ So I dress casually to be presentable for stakeholders.

Awkward and ungrammatical phrase 'it is my casual'. Use 'I dress casually' to express habit. 'the stakeholder' is vague; plural 'stakeholders' or 'a stakeholder' depending on meaning. Suggestion: Use subject-verb structure 'I dress casually' and choose correct noun form (stakeholder/stakeholders) and articles.

× Something that is in neutral color.

✓ I prefer clothing in neutral colors.

Sentence fragment and awkward adjective order. Use plural 'colors' for general preference and natural phrasing 'I prefer clothing in neutral colors.' Suggestion: Make full sentences and use plural when speaking generally about categories.

× I don't want to be the center of attraction, so I prefer white, black or Gray or something like that.

✓ I don't want to be the center of attention, so I prefer white, black, or gray clothing.

'Center of attraction' is incorrect idiom; correct phrase is 'center of attention'. Capitalization: 'Gray' should be 'gray' unless at sentence start. Add 'clothing' for clarity. Suggestion: Use standard idioms ('center of attention') and correct capitalization and parallel listing.