Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and add one clear, specific detail. Avoid single-word items without explanation. Use plural/singular correctly and more natural clothing terms.

例: I usually wear T-shirts and simple dresses. For example, I often choose a cotton T-shirt with jeans because it’s easy to move in and stays cool in warm weather.

提案: Start with a concise topic sentence, avoid repetition (e.g., “relaxed, relax”), and use linking words to connect reason and example. Be specific about what makes the clothes practical.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are relaxed and practical for my daily routine. For example, I often wear a simple dress or a T-shirt with leggings when I study or go out, since these outfits are breathable and easy to move in.

提案: Respond directly with present-tense phrasing and give a brief reason or detail. Avoid awkward word order and use one linking word if adding a reason.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they make me feel confident and comfortable. For instance, a fitted T-shirt boosts my confidence while allowing me to relax at home or with friends.

提案: Give a clear reason and avoid fragmented repetition. Use coherent linking words (because, so) and be specific about what you check (fit, color, occasion).

例: Yes, I usually spend time choosing clothes because I want them to suit the occasion and be comfortable. For example, before meeting friends I try on a couple of outfits to check the fit and the color so I look neat and feel relaxed.

提案: This is a clear response. To improve, add a brief supporting detail and a linking word to explain why the style is the same across days.

例: No, I usually wear the same style on weekdays and weekends because I prefer comfortable, casual clothes most of the time. For example, I often wear T-shirts and jeans whether I’m at work or relaxing at home.

提案: Use correct color names and grammar (plural agreement). If using unusual terms like “vanilla” and “beach,” clarify what you mean (e.g., cream, sandy beige). Give a brief reason and an example of matching.

例: My favorite colors are cream and sandy beige because they’re easy to match with other items. For example, a cream top goes well with blue jeans or a patterned skirt, so I can mix and match quickly.

× I like to wear T-shirt or baby doll.

✓ I like to wear T-shirts or baby-doll dresses.

The noun 'T-shirt' should be plural when speaking generally; 'baby doll' as a noun phrase describing a dress needs the noun 'dress' and a hyphenated modifier 'baby-doll'. Use plural forms to indicate general preference.

× I prefer to wear comfortable casual clothes because they feel relaxed, relax and practical for my daily routine.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because they feel relaxed and practical for my daily routine.

The verbs/words after 'feel' must be adjectives. 'Relax' is a verb; use the adjective 'relaxed' and join adjectives with 'and'. Remove the extra comma placement and add a comma between coordinate adjectives 'comfortable' and 'casual'.

× UMM for example, I usually choose dress and T-shirt when I go out or study.

✓ For example, I usually choose dresses and T-shirts when I go out or study.

Use plural nouns 'dresses' and 'T-shirts' for general statements. 'UMM' is unnecessary; begin with 'For example'. No -ing form error here but main issue is plurality and article use.

× Just I like when I wore T-shirts.

✓ I just like wearing T-shirts.

The original mixes past tense 'wore' with present liking. Use the gerund 'wearing' after 'like' to express a general preference. Also place adverb 'just' before the verb phrase: 'I just like'.

× I feel confident and comfortable.

✓ I feel confident and comfortable.

This sentence is correct. It uses the present tense appropriately to state a general feeling, so no change is needed.

× Yes I do. I usually take my time choosing clothes because I like too much of it to the occasion and make sure they are comfortable.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually take my time choosing clothes because I like to match them to the occasion and make sure they are comfortable.

The phrase 'like too much of it to the occasion' is ungrammatical. Use 'like to match them to the occasion' to express selecting clothes appropriate for events. Add comma after 'Yes' and use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'clothes'.

× For example, when I meet my friends I try. I will try on. I will try on.

✓ For example, when I meet my friends, I will try clothes on to see what fits best.

The original contains incomplete fragments and repeated phrases. Combine into one complete sentence: use future tense 'I will try ... on' for a habitual action in planned situations, or 'I try clothes on' for habitual present. Include the object 'clothes' and 'on' together.

× No I don't, I usually wear the same style during the week and at the weekend because I prefer comfortable casual clothes the most of the time.

✓ No, I don't. I usually wear the same style during the week and at the weekend because I prefer comfortable, casual clothes most of the time.

Add punctuation after 'No'. Change 'the most of the time' to 'most of the time'. Add a comma between 'comfortable' and 'casual'. Pronoun issue resolved by clearer phrasing.

× My favorite color clothes is vanilla and beach because they are easy to match my outfit every time.

✓ My favorite clothing colors are vanilla and beige because they are easy to match with my outfits.

'Color clothes' is ungrammatical; use 'clothing colors' or 'colors'. Use plural verb 'are' to agree with plural subject. 'Beach' is incorrect color word; likely 'beige'. Add 'with' before 'my outfits' and pluralize 'outfit' to 'outfits'.