Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more specific and use a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details. Avoid vague phrases like "something convenient" and aim for natural phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes. For example, I often choose loose jeans or joggers and a soft T‑shirt because they let me move freely and feel relaxed when I'm with friends.

提案: Give a direct answer then clarify with clear examples. Remove filler sounds and correct vocabulary (say "shorts" not "short pants"). Use one linking phrase to explain why.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes. For instance, I usually wear T‑shirts and shorts because they are practical and keep me cool in warm weather.

提案: Correct grammar (subject–verb agreement), avoid unclear words ("working football", "AT shirt", "chemical"). State a clear reason and one example. Use a linking word for coherence.

例: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable and practical. For example, I wear a T‑shirt when I play football or meet friends since it allows me to move easily.

提案: Start with a concise direct answer, then explain briefly with specific factors (weather, mood). Fix grammar ("are" for plural nouns) and avoid fillers.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. I usually pick the first suitable outfit I see, depending on the weather or my mood that day.

提案: Answer clearly and check for consistency (weekdays vs weekends). Use correct plural forms and avoid repeating the same phrase. Give one specific contrast and a reason.

例: Yes, I wear different clothes on weekdays and weekends. During weekdays I wear my school uniform, but at the weekend I prefer my own clothes because they feel more stylish and comfortable.

提案: Give a direct answer naming colours, then explain why briefly and naturally. Remove repetition and improve sentence flow with a linking phrase.

例: I prefer bright colours like red or yellow because they make me feel confident and cheerful when I'm with friends.

× OK, I like to wear something convenient and just to enjoy myself and have fun.

✓ OK, I like to wear comfortable clothes so I can enjoy myself and have fun.

Original sentence uses 'something convenient' which is awkward and not idiomatic for clothes; also 'and just to enjoy myself' has incorrect infinitive phrase placement. Use 'so I can' + base verb to show purpose. Use 'comfortable clothes' for clarity.

× Of course, comfortable clothes because I like to wear something. Uh, in triangle like. T-shirt and short pants.

✓ Of course, comfortable clothes, because I like to wear things like T-shirts and shorts.

Fragmented sentences and awkward phrases ('in triangle like', 'short pants'). Combine into one clear sentence. Use plural 'T-shirts and shorts' for general items and 'things like' instead of 'something.'

× Of course, I think T-shirts is working football and I usually wear AT shirt when I go out with friends because they're easy to move in and chemical.

✓ Of course, I think T-shirts are good for playing football and I usually wear a T-shirt when I go out with friends because they're easy to move in and comfortable.

Subject-verb agreement: 'T-shirts' (plural) takes 'are' not 'is'. 'Working football' is incorrect collocation; use 'good for playing football.' 'AT shirt' is likely 'a T-shirt.' 'Chemical' is wrong word; context requires 'comfortable.'

× No, I just like to choose what I see at first because all of my clothes is very perfect. I just uh, choose. Clothes depend on weather or mood.

✓ No, I just like to choose what I see first because all of my clothes are very suitable. I just choose clothes depending on the weather or my mood.

Subject-verb agreement: 'all of my clothes' is plural and requires 'are' not 'is.' 'At first' should be 'first.' 'Perfect' is odd; use 'suitable.' 'Clothes depend' needs 'choose clothes depending on' and include 'my' for clarity.

× Yes I do, I usually wear my school uniform on weekends and wear my own clothes on weekend. The school uniform is good, but my own clothes is much more beautiful and cool than the uniform.

✓ Yes I do. I usually wear my school uniform on weekdays and my own clothes at the weekend. The school uniform is fine, but my own clothes are much nicer and cooler than the uniform.

Content error: wearing uniform usually on weekdays not weekends; adjust to match question. 'On weekend' should be 'at the weekend' or 'on weekends' and be consistent. Subject-verb agreement: 'my own clothes are' not 'is.' Use 'nicer' rather than 'more beautiful' for naturalness.

× Oh, I like to wear something bright because when I wear the clothes I can feel confident with my friends and go with them I I can have a good mood.

✓ Oh, I like to wear bright clothes because when I wear them I feel confident with my friends and I am in a good mood.

Pronoun reference: use 'them' to refer to 'clothes.' Remove repeated 'I' and use 'feel confident' and 'be in a good mood' for natural expression. 'When I wear the clothes' is unnatural; use 'when I wear them.'