Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clearer and correct grammar; give one concise topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Avoid fragments and repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., because, so, and).

例: I prefer simple clothes such as T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable and practical. For example, I usually wear jeans and a T-shirt when I go shopping or meet friends, since they let me move easily and feel relaxed.

提案: Good content and coherence but fix tense/grammar and condense slightly. Start with a clear topic sentence and add one specific example or brief reason using a linking word.

例: I prefer to wear smart clothes because they make me feel more confident and professional. For instance, I wear a blazer and dress shirt to job interviews so employers take me more seriously.

提案: Keep it natural and grammatically correct; avoid short fragments. Provide one topic sentence and one or two supporting details with linking words and correct verb forms.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially on weekdays, because they are simple and comfortable. Also, they are easy to wash and dry, so I can take care of them quickly.

提案: Correct grammar (verb forms, articles) and be more specific about how you choose clothes. Use linking words to explain reasons or methods.

例: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing outfits for special events because I want to look my best. For example, I compare different combinations and sometimes ask my friends or family for their opinions before deciding.

提案: Correct the contrast and mistakes (weekday/weekend mix-up). Use a clear topic sentence that contrasts weekday and weekend styles with a linking word (but, whereas) and give one specific example each.

例: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I usually wear smart clothes like a shirt and trousers because they make me look professional, whereas on weekends I choose casual items like jeans and T-shirts for comfort.

提案: Good idea and specific reasons; improve grammar and use natural phrasing. Start with a topic sentence, then give two clear reasons joined by linking words.

例: I prefer white clothes because they make me look friendly and relaxed. Also, white reflects light well, so I tend to look brighter in photos when I wear white shirts.

× They are so comfortable in the They also make me feel like either going.

✓ They are so comfortable. They also make me want to go out.

The original contains fragmented and unclear structure ('in the' and 'like either going') causing sentence structure errors. Split into two complete sentences and use 'want to go out' to express desire correctly. Suggest using clear clause connectors and complete verb phrases.

× I prefer to wear smart clothes because they make me feel more confident and professional, and sometimes people will treat you more seriously when you dressed well.

✓ I prefer to wear smart clothes because they make me feel more confident and professional, and sometimes people will treat you more seriously when you dress well.

The clause 'when you dressed well' uses past tense incorrectly in a general statement; use simple present 'dress' to match the habitual meaning. Also keep tense consistent in conditional/time clauses describing general truths.

× I like wearing T-shirts on my weekdays. They are simple and clean and they are also. Make me felt more comfortable. They are easy to take care of.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts on weekdays. They are simple and clean, and they also make me feel more comfortable. They are easy to take care of.

Errors include unnecessary 'my' before 'weekdays' and sentence fragments. 'Make me felt' mixes present and past; use present 'make me feel'. Combine fragments into complete sentences and maintain present tense for habitual actions.

× Yes, I like spend a lot of time choosing different outfits and express my best on my special events or days. I even ask my friends or my families for the opinion.

✓ Yes, I like to spend a lot of time choosing different outfits and expressing my best on special events. I even ask my friends or my family for their opinions.

After 'like' use infinitive 'to spend' or gerund consistently. 'Express my best on my special events or days' is awkward; use 'express my best on special events'. 'Families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's family, and 'for their opinions' is idiomatic.

× On weekdays I prefer well, smart clothes which make me more professional and confident. But on my weekdays I choose the simple clothes like jeans and T-shirts. They are comfortable.

✓ On weekdays I prefer smart, well-fitting clothes that make me look more professional and confident. But on weekends I choose simple clothes like jeans and T-shirts because they are comfortable.

The original repeats 'weekdays' and misplaces 'well' and adjective order. Use 'smart, well-fitting clothes' and 'that make me look' for clarity. The contrast was intended between weekdays and weekends, so change second clause to 'weekends'. Combine the comfort explanation into the same sentence for fluency.

× I like the white color clothes for the reason that white make me feel easy going and friendly. Also I look brighter when I wear white clothes in the photos.

✓ I like white clothes because the color makes me feel easygoing and friendly. Also, I look brighter in photos when I wear white clothes.

Use 'white clothes' not 'the white color clothes'. 'White make' should be 'white makes' (subject-verb agreement) because 'color' or 'white' as a singular concept takes singular verb. 'Easy going' should be 'easygoing' as one word. Reorder 'in photos' for natural word order and clarity.