Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct word choices (e.g., 'plain' or 'casual' instead of 'clear') and correct verb forms and prepositions. Keep answers under five sentences.

例: I usually wear plain T-shirts and denim shorts because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I often wear them when I'm hanging out with friends or going for a walk because they keep me relaxed and cool.

提案: Answer directly and give a concise reason. Avoid filler words and repetition. Use correct structures to explain your situation (e.g., 'My university does not require a formal dress code').

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I am a university student and my school does not have a formal dress code. Therefore I usually choose clothes that are practical for classes and studying.

提案: Be specific and use correct nouns and phrases. If describing designs, name them clearly (e.g., 'a pink T-shirt with a rabbit print'). Keep it to one or two supporting details and avoid hesitation sounds.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. For example, I have a pink T-shirt with a rabbit print and a blue one with a simple pattern that I wear often.

提案: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and two contrasting examples using linking words (e.g., 'If... then...; however...'). Use correct verb forms and concise phrases.

例: It depends on the occasion. If I'm just going for a short walk near my home, I choose clothes quickly and casually; however, if I'm going shopping or taking photos, I spend more time choosing nicer outfits.

提案: Give a direct answer and explain briefly with clear vocabulary. Remove unclear numbers and unnecessary fragments. Use a simple sentence to explain your routine.

例: No. My weekdays and weekends are similar, so I usually wear comfortable clothes all the time rather than changing styles between days.

提案: Use correct color words (e.g., 'grey, white and black') and concise reasoning. Avoid repetition and improve grammar (e.g., 'deciding what to wear'). Provide one clear example.

例: I prefer grey, white and black because they are neutral and easy to coordinate. For example, I can mix a black top with almost any pair of jeans, so I don't spend much time deciding what to wear.

× I usually clear T-shirts and short jeans because they're comfortable and easy to move in and I'm so relaxing to wear this to hand out my friend.

✓ I usually wear clear T-shirts and short jeans because they're comfortable and allow me to move easily, and I feel relaxed wearing them when I hang out with my friends.

The student misused adjectives/adverbs and word forms. 'clear' is likely wrong choice — keep if 'clear' intended but more likely 'plain' or 'clear' as color is unusual; 'I'm so relaxing to wear this' is incorrect: 'relaxing' is an adjective describing an activity or thing, not the speaker; use 'I feel relaxed wearing them.' 'hand out my friend' is incorrect verb and preposition; use 'hang out with my friends.' Also improve adverb placement: 'move easily' not 'easy to move in.' Ensure pronoun agreement: 'them' for plural clothes.

× I prefer to clear comfortable and casual clothes because I am a university student so there umm the school is not required to meet the require me to clear.

✓ I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I am a university student and the school does not require me to dress formally.

The sentence has article and word choice errors. Remove unnecessary 'clear.' 'the school is not required to meet the require me to clear' is ungrammatical. Use 'the school does not require me to dress formally.' Also add comma between 'comfortable' and 'casual' for correct adjective coordination.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. I have difference color of and tattoos of teachers such as pink color with a rabbit and blue color with some umm umm.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. I have T-shirts in different colors and with different designs, such as a pink one with a rabbit and a blue one with some other design.

Problems include adjective order and noun phrases: 'difference color of' should be 'different colors' and 'tattoos of teachers' is unclear; likely 'designs' or 'prints.' Specify 'a pink one' and 'a blue one' for clarity. Avoid filler 'umm'.

× That depends on what I am doing. If I just walking near my home, I choose the clothes quickly and casually. If I go to shopping and take a photos, I will choose things umm choosing a beautiful clothes.

✓ That depends on what I am doing. If I am just walking near my home, I choose clothes quickly and casually. If I go shopping and take photos, I will choose things more carefully and pick beautiful clothes.

'If I just walking' needs present continuous 'am walking.' 'I choose the clothes' - drop article 'the' for general reference: 'choose clothes.' 'go to shopping' should be 'go shopping.' 'take a photos' should be 'take photos.' 'choosing a beautiful clothes' mixes forms; use 'pick beautiful clothes' or 'choose beautiful clothes.' Maintain consistent verb forms.

× No because the weekday and weekends for me is the same so I prefer to choose the comfortable and 75 outfits for myself. It's.

✓ No, weekdays and weekends are the same for me, so I prefer to choose comfortable outfits for myself.

Sentence has agreement and extra/incorrect words. 'the weekday and weekends' should be 'weekdays and weekends'; subject-verb agreement: 'are the same' not 'is the same.' Remove 'the' before 'comfortable' and delete '75' which is out of place. The trailing 'It's.' is incomplete and should be removed.

× I prefer great white and black clothes because they are neutral and very easy to coordinate. For example, I can mix them with almost anything so I don't spend much time to deciding what to clear where.

✓ I prefer gray, white, and black clothes because they are neutral and very easy to coordinate. For example, I can mix them with almost anything so I don't spend much time deciding what to wear where.

Preposition and word choice errors: 'great' likely intended 'gray'; list colors needs commas. 'spend much time to deciding' is incorrect; use 'spend much time deciding.' 'what to clear where' is wrong; use 'what to wear where.' Ensure correct verb infinitive forms after 'spend time'.