Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail to support your preference (e.g., fabrics, occasions). Use linking words if adding reasons.

例: I usually wear casual clothes such as shirts, trousers and sneakers because they are comfortable and practical. For example, I often choose cotton shirts and lightweight trousers when I’m meeting friends or spending time with family because they keep me relaxed all day.

提案: Good clear answer and reasons. To improve, vary vocabulary (e.g., relaxed, at ease, practical) and add a linking phrase to connect reasons. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed and confident. For instance, when I go to school or meet friends, casual outfits let me move freely and focus on activities without worrying about my clothes.

提案: Clarify ideas and avoid fillers (uh). Answer directly, then explain with a clear reason and one specific example. Correct unclear phrases (e.g., 'when I am at my throat' unclear).

例: Not really — I prefer wearing shirts, especially blue ones, because they look neater and suit my style. However, I do wear T‑shirts at home or when exercising because they’re more comfortable for casual activities.

提案: Make your answer coherent and specific. Remove hesitations and correct unclear expressions (e.g., 'lose the glutes', 'make me a wild'). State a clear reason (matching outfits, special events) and give one example of how you choose clothes.

例: Yes, I often spend time choosing clothes because I like my outfits to match. For example, before a special event I try different combinations and sometimes ask my sister for advice to make sure my shirt, trousers and shoes look coordinated.

提案: Keep the answer simple and clear. Explain briefly why your style is consistent and give one exception if applicable. Avoid unclear cultural references unless you explain them.

例: No, I usually wear the same casual style during the week and at the weekend because it’s comfortable and convenient. The only difference is at work, where I sometimes wear a slightly smarter shirt for meetings.

提案: Good content and clear reasons. To improve, avoid repetition (light/bright colours) and add a specific example of where you wear each colour. Use a linking word to contrast everyday use and special occasions.

例: I prefer light colours such as sky blue, light yellow and pale green because they make me feel cheerful and energetic. For special occasions like festivals, I choose brighter shades of these colours to stand out and celebrate.

× I usually wear casual clothes like shirt, trousers and Skechers.

✓ I usually wear casual clothes like a shirt, trousers and Skechers.

The noun 'shirt' is singular and requires an article 'a' when listed with plural items; use 'a shirt' or plural 'shirts'. Use consistent number: 'a shirt, trousers and Skechers' or 'shirts, trousers and Skechers'. Suggestion: use 'a shirt' or change to plural 'shirts'.

× I think they are comfortable and make me feel easy and easy to wear.

✓ I think they are comfortable and make me feel at ease and easy to wear.

The phrase 'feel easy' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'feel at ease' meaning comfortable. Repeating 'easy' is redundant. Use 'easy to wear' to describe the clothes and 'feel at ease' to describe the person. Suggestion: separate the two ideas: 'they make me feel at ease and are easy to wear.'

× And it's simple and good hanging out with my friends and family.

✓ And they're simple and good for hanging out with my friends and family.

The subject should refer to 'clothes' (they), not 'it'. 'Good for hanging out' is the proper structure; 'good hanging out' is missing the preposition 'for'. Suggestion: use 'they're simple and good for hanging out with friends and family.'

× No, I like to wear shirts, blue shirts uh because they look more formal and suit me better.

✓ No, I like to wear shirts, especially blue shirts, because they look more formal and suit me better.

Missing connective 'especially' improves clarity. Commas needed for the phrase; otherwise pronoun use 'they' is fine. This correction improves sentence flow. Suggestion: add 'especially' and punctuation: 'I like to wear shirts, especially blue shirts, because...'.

× However, uh, when I am at my throat I like to wear a bow and underman T-shirt.

✓ However, when my throat hurts I like to wear a scarf and an undershirt.

The phrase 'at my throat' is incorrect; likely meant 'when my throat hurts' or 'have a sore throat'. 'Bow and underman T-shirt' is unclear; 'scarf and an undershirt' fits context. Also use article 'an' before 'undershirt'. Suggestion: if meaning is different, use 'when I have a sore throat' or 'when my throat hurts'. Use clear clothing terms.

× I spend a lot of time picking up my clothes and because I want to lose the glutes.

✓ I spend a lot of time picking out my clothes because I want to lose the glutes.

Use 'picking out' (choose) rather than 'picking up'. The conjunction 'and because' is redundant; remove 'and'. 'Lose the glutes' is odd but kept; if meaning 'lose weight in my glutes' rephrase to 'lose fat on my hips/glutes'. Suggestion: use 'pick out' and avoid redundant conjunctions: 'I spend a lot of time picking out my clothes because...'.

× So uh I want to try to match my outfits and sometime ask my sister for advice.

✓ So I try to match my outfits and sometimes ask my sister for advice.

Tense and adverb form errors: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency). 'I want to try to' is wordy; 'I try to' fits habitual context. Suggestion: use 'sometimes' and simplify: 'I try to match my outfits and sometimes ask my sister for advice.'

× I can make me a wild specially even if even if I have a special event to go to.

✓ I can make myself look wild, especially if I have a special event to go to.

Use reflexive pronoun 'myself' instead of 'me'. 'Specially' should be 'especially'. Remove duplicate 'even if'. Also clarify 'look wild' if that is intended. Suggestion: 'I can make myself look wild, especially if I have a special event.'

× No, I usually have the same style on weekdays and weekends.

✓ No, I usually have the same style on weekdays and weekends.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Included here to note no error from the provided list.

× Maybe just because it's a culture dress with that fly, but I wear a buyer in my workplace.

✓ Maybe it's because of the cultural dress code at work, but I wear a blazer at my workplace.

Original contains many unclear and incorrect nouns: 'culture dress with that fly' and 'buyer' are incorrect. Replaced with 'cultural dress code' and 'blazer' to make sense. Fixes singular/plural and noun choice. Suggestion: use clear nouns: 'cultural dress code' and 'a blazer'.

× I like wearing light colours like sky blue, light yellow or green.

✓ I like wearing light colors like sky blue, light yellow and green.

'Or' is acceptable but 'and' lists better. 'Colours' vs 'colors' is spelling variant; either is fine. No major grammar error but adjusted list coordination. Suggestion: use consistent conjunctions in lists: '...sky blue, light yellow, and green.'

× But however, I prefer to wear bright colours and light colours also at parties and festivals.

✓ However, I prefer to wear bright and light colors at parties and festivals.

'But however' is redundant; use either 'but' or 'however'. 'Bright colours and light colours' is repetitive; combine into 'bright and light colors'. Suggestion: choose one cohesive connector and simplify the noun phrase.