Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and give one specific reason. Use linking phrase for clarity. Example: “I like wearing dresses because they make me feel confident and look neat.” Then add one specific supporting detail.

例: I like wearing dresses because they make me feel confident and look neat. For example, when I wear a simple A-line dress I receive compliments and feel comfortable at social events.

提案: Give a concise clear preference sentence, avoid hesitations, and explain one specific reason using a linking word. Correct grammar: singular/plural and adjectives. Keep to two or three sentences.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they suit my daily routine. For instance, soft fabrics let me focus on work without feeling restricted, so I avoid tight or formal outfits.

提案: Answer directly and provide a specific supporting detail with smooth linking. Fix article use and comparative phrasing. Keep it natural and short.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable and easy to wear. For example, I can just throw on a T-shirt and jeans when I need to go out quickly.

提案: Be clearer: state whether you spend a lot of time, then give one or two specific factors (fit, fabric, style) and use linking words. Remove hesitations and correct word choice.

例: Yes, I do spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I care about the cut and fabric. For example, I usually check how a dress fits on my shoulders and whether the material feels comfortable.

提案: Structure your answer: one clear topic sentence stating yes/no, then explain contrast between weekdays and weekends with one linking word (but/whereas). Avoid repetition and grammar errors.

例: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. During the week I wear simple, practical clothes for work, whereas at the weekend I choose prettier or more casual outfits for going out.

提案: Give a clear statement of preferred colours and one reason; avoid unclear words and hesitations. Mention specific colours and when you wear them. Keep it to two sentences max.

例: I prefer neutral colours, mainly black and white, because they look smart and are easy to mix. For instance, I often wear a black coat or white blouse for work because they always look professional.

× I like wearing a dress because I think that dress is a pretty and gives people more nicely.

✓ I like wearing dresses because I think a dress is pretty and makes people look nicer.

Errors: adjective/adverb misuse and word choice. 'a pretty' is incorrect; 'pretty' is an adjective that needs a noun ('a pretty dress') or predicate form 'is pretty'. 'gives people more nicely' mixes verb and adverb incorrectly; use 'makes people look nicer' to express appearance. Also use plural 'dresses' to match general preference. Suggestion: use 'makes someone look nicer' for appearance and keep number agreement.

× I would prefer wearing a comfortable and casual clothes.

✓ I would prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes.

Error: unnecessary article or quantifier. 'a' should not be used before plural 'clothes'. Remove 'a' to make the noun phrase grammatically correct. Suggestion: for general statements use plural without 'a'.

× I think comfortable is a suitable for me and if I wear uncomfortable clothes I just feel uh, feel uh, confusing.

✓ I think comfortable clothes are suitable for me, and if I wear uncomfortable clothes I just feel confused.

Errors: incorrect adjective use and form. 'comfortable is a suitable' is wrong; use 'comfortable clothes are suitable' or 'comfort is suitable' depending on meaning. 'feel confusing' is wrong because 'confusing' describes something that causes confusion; the correct feeling is 'confused'. Suggestion: pair subjects and complements correctly and use 'confused' for emotions.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirt.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts.

Error: singular/plural mismatch with a general habit. When speaking about a general preference use plural 'T-shirts'. Suggestion: use plural for general statements about items you wear regularly.

× I think that T-shirt is comfortable and is a easier.

✓ I think that T-shirts are comfortable and are easier to wear.

Errors: article and adjective/adverb misuse. 'that T-shirt' should be plural for a general statement; 'a easier' is wrong because 'easier' is comparative and does not take 'a'. Also add 'to wear' to complete the idea. Suggestion: use plural and correct comparative structure 'easier to...'.

× I can take one of them and just go out.

✓ I can put one on and just go out.

Error: collocation and sentence naturalness. 'Take one of them' is awkward for clothing; 'put one on' or 'grab one' is natural. Suggestion: use correct phrasal verbs for dressing actions.

× Yeah, I think that's a problem because I think that the cough cutting and the, uh, texture is the is the important to me to choose a new clothes.

✓ Yeah, I think that's a problem because I think the cut and the texture are important to me when choosing new clothes.

Errors: wrong words and agreement. 'cough cutting' seems to intend 'cut' or 'cutting' — use 'cut'. 'the ... is the important' wrong article and agreement; use 'are important' because two factors. 'a new clothes' wrong article and plural; use 'new clothes' or 'a new piece of clothing'. Suggestion: use correct nouns ('cut') and match plural subjects with plural verbs.

× Yeah, I always do that because I like to, uh, when weekdays I'll just go to work and just where normally and, and when I goes out in weekdays, I weekends I just want to wear pretty more familiar.

✓ Yeah, I always do that because on weekdays I just go to work and wear normal clothes, and on weekends when I go out I prefer to wear prettier, more familiar clothes.

Errors: pronoun and verb agreement and word order. 'when weekdays I'll' is incorrect; use 'on weekdays I'. 'where normally' should be 'wear normal clothes'. 'when I goes out' has subject-verb agreement error; use 'I go out'. Phrase 'wear pretty more familiar' is incorrect order and comparative; use 'prettier, more familiar clothes'. Suggestion: use correct time prepositions 'on weekdays/weekends', ensure subject-verb agreement, and order adjectives appropriately.

× I think is poor double I think is UMM is suitable for me and is make me feel like S smarter but my my coach is always black and white.

✓ I think dark colors are suitable for me and make me feel smarter, but my coat is always black or white.

Multiple errors: unclear words 'poor double' and 'UMM' — likely intended 'dark colors'. Use plural 'dark colors' and match verb 'make me feel smarter'. 'my my coach' likely 'my coat' and 'always black and white' ambiguous; 'black or white' or 'usually black or white'. Suggestion: choose clear color words, use plural for general categories, and correct vocabulary ('coat' not 'coach').