Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clear and concise: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetitions and sentence fragments, and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Watch pronunciation/fluency to avoid unnatural pauses.

例: I prefer wearing baggy clothes because they are comfortable and keep me cool. For example, loose cotton shirts and wide trousers let air circulate, so I stay comfortable in warm weather.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons using linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Avoid repetition and correct minor grammar (e.g., subject-verb agreement and redundant phrases).

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely and feel cooler. For instance, a loose shirt and jeans let me commute and work without feeling restricted.

提案: Keep the answer short and accurate: one topic sentence plus a supporting detail. Fix grammar (use 'are' not 'is') and avoid repeating words. Give a concise example to illustrate your point.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are usually made of breathable cotton. For example, I wear a cotton T-shirt in summer and layer it under a jacket in cooler months.

提案: Answer directly and organize reasons logically. Avoid hesitations and double negatives; use clear phrases like 'I don't need to dress formally' and give a brief explanation or example.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I rarely need formal outfits. I usually pick comfortable casual clothes like a T-shirt and jeans that are easy to decide on.

提案: Give a direct response and one clear reason with a linking word. You can add a short contrast if relevant. Avoid filler phrases like 'like' and keep sentences tight.

例: No, I don't. I usually wear T-shirts and shorts or trousers both on weekdays and weekends because they are comfortable and practical for my daily activities.

提案: Clarify the answer with a straightforward topic sentence about preferred colours, then give a specific reason. Avoid fragmented questions in your answer and fix unclear phrasing (e.g., 'make my skin look less dark').

例: I prefer moderately bright colors and earthy tones such as brown. Because my skin is tanned, these colours complement my complexion and make me look fresher.

× To be honest, I really love you.

✓ To be honest, I really love them.

The student used the pronoun 'you' which addresses the listener and is inappropriate here; 'them' refers to clothes. Use the correct object pronoun that matches the noun being discussed (clothes -> them).

× I really love wearing baggy clothes because I find them. Comfortable and also when wearing them in some. Feels much more cooler than the clothes that I normally wear.

✓ I really love wearing baggy clothes because I find them comfortable, and when I wear them I feel much cooler than in the clothes I normally wear.

The original has fragmented sentences and extra punctuation causing sentence fragments. Combine clauses into a complete sentence, remove unnecessary words ('some'), and correct word order ('feel much cooler' not 'feels much more cooler'). Use consistent subject 'I' for verbs.

× I think it is better to wear comfortable and casual clothes rather than smart clothes because I find casual clothes really comfortable and easy to move in and I also think that they are when wearing them it is it feels much cooler.

✓ I think it is better to wear comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because casual clothes are comfortable and easy to move in, and when I wear them I feel much cooler.

The sentence contains redundancy and disordered clauses ('they are when wearing them it is it feels'). Remove repetition, use clear subject-verb structure, and keep tense consistent ('I wear them' and 'I feel').

× Yes I do because most T-shirts are made from materials that I find really comfortable to wear and I also think that T-shirts is is suitable to wear in any season.

✓ Yes, I do, because most T-shirts are made from materials that I find really comfortable, and I also think that T-shirts are suitable to wear in any season.

The student wrote 'T-shirts is' which is incorrect for the plural subject 'T-shirts'; the correct verb is 'are'. Also remove duplicate 'is' and add commas for clarity.

× No, I don't because I think I don't have to wear something to formal.

✓ No, I don't, because I don't have to wear something formal.

The phrase 'wear something to formal' uses incorrect preposition 'to'. Use the adjective 'formal' after 'something' without a preposition: 'something formal.' Also simplify double negatives.

× I don't. I only have to wear something that I find like not not too unformal and also comfortable for me.

✓ I only need to wear something that I find not too informal and also comfortable.

Fragments and repetition ('not not too unformal') create confusion. Combine into one sentence, use 'need' instead of 'have to' for preference, and correct 'unformal' to 'informal'.

× Well, no, I don't. I always wear something like a T-shirt and a pair of shorts or a pair of trousers because I think wearing like that is very comfortable and easy for me to move in.

✓ Well, no, I don't. I usually wear a T-shirt with shorts or trousers because that is comfortable and makes it easy for me to move around.

'Wearing like that' is informal and awkward; replace with 'that' or 'that outfit.' Use 'usually' instead of 'always' if implying routine, and 'move around' is more natural than 'move in.'

× What units are like clothes that have colors, like bright colors but not too bright? Or clothes that have brown colors because my skin tone is tanned so wearing them make my skin? If so, wearing them makes my skin less dark.

✓ I like clothes with colors, such as bright but not too bright shades, or brown tones, because my skin is tanned and wearing those colors makes my skin look less dark.

The original has unclear pronoun use and broken clauses ('What units are like clothes'). Replace with clear subject 'I like clothes', use 'tones' or 'shades' instead of repeating 'colors', and correct verb agreement ('wearing those colors makes my skin look less dark'). Ensure sentence is complete and coherent.