Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clear and concise: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition and incorrect words, and add one specific supporting detail. Fix word choice errors (e.g., "orchard" → "casual"), reduce redundancy, and keep to 2–4 sentences.

例: I usually wear casual clothes, such as loose T-shirts and jeans. I prefer them because they make me feel relaxed and are comfortable for activities like walking or light exercise.

提案: Begin with a clear preference sentence, avoid contradictory connectors ("although... however"), correct word choice ("clever" → "casual"), and give one specific reason with a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so"). Keep responses concise.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits because they allow me to move freely. For example, I can walk, exercise, or do household chores more easily when I'm wearing casual clothes.

提案: Answer directly, remove fillers ("MMM") and correct mistakes ("dessert" → "T-shirt" or "garment"). Use one linking phrase to compare types and be specific about why loose T-shirts suit you.

例: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts, especially loose ones. I find them more comfortable than cropped or tight T-shirts because they allow better movement and feel cooler in hot weather.

提案: Start with a clear short answer, avoid repetition and grammatical errors, and give one concise reason with an example. Correct word forms ("a cloth"→"clothes"; "choose a close"→"choose clothes").

例: Yes, I often spend a long time choosing clothes when I go out with friends or travel. For instance, I have many options in my closet, so I struggle to decide which outfit suits the occasion.

提案: Give a direct statement about differences, avoid fragmented sentences, and provide one clear example of weekday vs weekend clothing. Correct grammar and finish the thought.

例: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I usually wear casual or work-appropriate clothes, but on weekends I might dress more traditionally, for example wearing a kurta or saree for family events.

提案: Answer directly and avoid repetition of the same idea. State your preference and give a specific reason in one or two sentences, using a linking word like "because" or "so".

例: I prefer black and white clothes because these colours suit me and make me feel confident. For example, I often choose a black shirt or a white blouse for meetings because they look smart and simple.

× I like to wear orchard clothes like loose T-shirt and jeans because casual wears helps me to make helps me to be relaxed and feel comfortable while doing any things or works like running.

✓ I like to wear casual clothes like loose T-shirts and jeans because casual wear helps me to relax and feel comfortable while doing activities like running.

Errors: 'orchard clothes' is incorrect adjective—likely meant 'casual' not 'orchard'; 'T-shirt' count and plural agreement; 'casual wears' incorrect noun form should be singular uncountable 'casual wear'; redundant phrase 'helps me to make helps me to be relaxed' is ungrammatical and wordy; 'any things or works' should be 'activities'. Suggestion: use correct adjective 'casual', make nouns plural/singular appropriately, remove redundancy, and use 'activities' for general actions. Type: 13

× Although smart clothes looks good, however, I prefer wearing comfortable and clever clothes because comfortable and casual clothes helps me to feel so comfortable while walking, doing exercise or doing household chores like cleaning.

✓ Although smart clothes look good, I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes because comfortable and casual clothes help me feel relaxed while walking, exercising, or doing household chores like cleaning.

Errors: 'smart clothes looks' requires plural verb 'look'; redundant connector 'Although... however' should not be used together; 'clever clothes' incorrect word choice—use 'casual'; 'helps me to feel so comfortable' has third-person singular 'helps' but subject is plural 'clothes' so use 'help'; unnecessary 'to' in 'help me feel'. Suggestion: match verb number to plural subject, avoid redundant conjunctions, use 'casual', and simplify phrasing. Type: 2

× Yes, I love wearing T-shirts. MMM Morover, I like wearing loose T-shirt because it I can feel more comfortable in loose dessert more than a cropped T-shirt or slightly tight T-shirt because I feel more comfortable.

✓ Yes, I love wearing T-shirts. Moreover, I like wearing loose T-shirts because I feel more comfortable in them than in cropped or slightly tight T-shirts.

Errors: 'MMM Morover' is filler and misspelled; 'loose T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' for general statement; 'it I can feel' contains extra pronoun 'it'; 'loose dessert' is wrong word—should be 'them' referring to T-shirts; repetitive phrasing. Suggestion: remove filler, correct spelling 'Moreover', use plural when speaking generally, use pronoun 'them' to refer back, and avoid repetition. Type: 10

× Yes, I spend a lot of time to choose a cloth when whenever I I have a plan to go outside with my friends or to go on a holiday trip.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes whenever I plan to go out with my friends or go on a holiday trip.

Errors: 'spend a lot of time to choose' should be 'spend time choosing' (use gerund after 'spend time'); 'a cloth' wrong—use 'clothes' for general; double words 'when whenever I I' redundant; 'have a plan to go outside' awkward—use 'plan to go out'. Suggestion: use gerund after 'spend time', correct nouns and remove duplicates. Type: 11

× It is very difficult for me to choose a close because there are many clothes in my closet and I don't know which one to pick up for them.

✓ It is very difficult for me to choose clothes because there are many in my closet and I don't know which ones to pick.

Errors: 'a close' wrong form—use 'clothes'; redundant 'for them' incorrect referent; 'which one' should be 'which ones' to match plural 'clothes'; 'pick up' unnecessary—'pick' suffice. Suggestion: use correct plural nouns and pronouns consistent with antecedents. Type: 12

× Yes I will different types of clothes on weekends and weekdays.

✓ Yes, I wear different types of clothes on weekends and weekdays.

Errors: Missing verb form; 'I will different types' is ungrammatical—should use present simple 'I wear' to describe regular habit. Suggestion: use correct verb for habitual actions. Type: 26},{