Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more specific and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two concise reasons, and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly and limit to 2–4 short sentences.

例: I usually prefer wearing formal black clothes. I find them neat and easy to match with other items, so I often choose them for work and social events.

提案: Give a clear reason and explain briefly with coherent linking. Avoid unclear fragments and aim for one or two supporting details. Use phrases like 'because', 'for example', or 'so' to connect ideas.

例: I prefer smart clothes because they make me feel confident. For example, wearing a blazer at meetings helps me appear more professional and approachable.

提案: Provide a complete, grammatically correct sentence and give a specific condition when you wear T-shirts. Keep it concise and use linking words such as 'when' or 'except'.

例: I sometimes wear T-shirts when the weather is very hot. Otherwise I avoid them because I prefer more formal styles.

提案: Clarify your meaning in one coherent response: state whether you spend time choosing clothes and explain why, avoiding contradictory fragments. Use linking words like 'however' or 'because'.

例: I don't usually spend a long time choosing clothes, but I do take my time when shopping for something special because I want to make sure it fits well and suits my style.

提案: This answer is clear but can be improved with a brief reason and smoother grammar. Add a short explanation of why you change styles and use 'during' or 'on' correctly.

例: Yes. I wear formal clothes on weekdays for work, but on weekends I choose more colorful and relaxed outfits to feel comfortable and express myself.

提案: Make the sentence grammatical and give a clear reason. Replace awkward phrasing with natural expressions like 'make me look slimmer' or 'suits me best'.

例: I prefer black clothes because they make me look slimmer and are easy to match with other items.

× I prefer to wear formal black clothes because I don't like casual clothes. So I wear it.

✓ I prefer to wear formal black clothes because I don't like casual clothes. So I wear them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular and does not match the plural noun 'clothes'. Use the plural pronoun 'them' to agree with 'clothes'. Suggestion: When referring back to a plural noun, use plural pronouns (they/them).

× I prefer to wear smart clothes because I'd like to. The scene, the bright person by everyone.

✓ I prefer to wear smart clothes because I like to. It makes me stand out and seem brighter than others.

The original has an unclear fragment 'The scene, the bright person by everyone' which is ungrammatical. Also 'I'd like to' is vague; 'I like to' fits context. Rewriting into a complete sentence clarifies meaning. Suggestion: Combine ideas into full sentences and use clear subjects and verbs to express comparisons or impressions.

× Sometimes I prefer to wear T-shirts, for example very hot summer, but I don't like wear it. Except such situation because I.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to wear T-shirts, for example in very hot summers, but I don't like wearing them except in those situations.

Several issues: missing preposition 'in' before 'very hot summer', plural/singular mismatch 'summer' -> 'summers', wrong verb form 'don't like wear' should be 'don't like wearing' (verb + -ing), and pronoun 'it' should be 'them' for clothes. Also the fragment 'because I.' is incomplete and removed. Suggestion: Use 'in' with time expressions, use gerund after 'like', and match pronouns to plural nouns.

× Sometimes I spend a lot of time to choose it. But I. Don't spend a lot of time. Usually I spend a lot of time to buy.

✓ Sometimes I spend a lot of time choosing them. But I don't always spend a lot of time. Usually I spend a lot of time when buying.

English uses verb+ing ('spend time choosing') rather than 'spend time to choose'. The fragment 'But I. Don't spend a lot of time.' had punctuation and sentence fragment issues; combined into 'But I don't always...'. 'to buy' should be 'when buying' or 'buying' to fit structure. Suggestion: Use 'spend time' followed by gerund, avoid sentence fragments, and use 'when' or gerund to indicate context.

× Yes, I prefer to wear formal clothes weekdays, but I prefer to wear colorful clothes in weekends.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear formal clothes on weekdays, but I prefer to wear colorful clothes on weekends.

When referring to days in general, use the preposition 'on' before 'weekdays/weekends'. This is a preposition/article-related usage. Suggestion: Use 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends' for habitual actions.

× I prefer to black color clothes because it shows me to small person.

✓ I prefer black clothes because they make me look smaller.

Several issues: 'prefer to black color clothes' is incorrect word order and extra words; use 'prefer black clothes'. 'it shows me to small person' is ungrammatical—use 'they make me look smaller' to express appearing smaller. Pronoun agreement: 'clothes' -> 'they'. Suggestion: Use correct adjective order ('black clothes'), match pronouns ('they'), and use 'make someone look + adjective' to describe appearance.