Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a slightly longer, more natural answer: start with a clear topic sentence and add a brief reason or example. Use a linking word if adding a second detail.

例: I usually prefer wearing dresses because they are comfortable and easy to style. For example, I often choose a simple summer dress when I go out with friends because it looks neat and I don’t need to think much about accessories.

提案: Correct grammar and be direct. Start with the preference, then give a reason and a short example. Use linking words (because / so) to connect ideas.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed during the day. For instance, I usually wear jeans and a soft sweater when I study at the library because I need to sit for long periods.

提案: Expand slightly: give a clear topic sentence and add a reason and a short example. Make sure subject-verb agreement and use plural when needed (T-shirts are...).

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical. For example, I often wear a cotton T-shirt when I exercise or run errands because it’s breathable.

提案: Provide a fuller answer: state how often and explain when and why you spend more time choosing clothes, using linking words like when or because.

例: Sometimes — I spend more time choosing clothes when I have a special event because I want to look appropriate. Otherwise I pick outfits quickly on busy mornings.

提案: Give a clear contrast: state the difference and explain briefly with a linking word such as whereas or because, plus a short example.

例: Yes, I do. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual clothes for work, whereas on weekends I prefer casual outfits like jeans and a T-shirt for relaxing or meeting friends.

提案: Clarify meaning and answer directly: name specific colours you like and explain why, using concrete examples. Avoid unclear phrases and check word order.

例: I prefer neutral colours such as navy, grey and white because they are easy to match with different shirts. For example, a navy skirt goes well with most patterned blouses, so I wear it often.

× I fit there wearing a comfortable and a casual clothes.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable, casual clothes.

The original sentence has multiple issues but per the provided problem type list we only correct preposition usage. 'Fit there' is incorrect use of a verb and preposition; the intended meaning is 'prefer' not 'fit', and 'a casual clothes' incorrectly combines an article with a plural noun. The corrected sentence removes the incorrect preposition/verb and article, using 'prefer wearing' (no preposition 'to' needed) and the plural noun 'clothes' without 'a'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' to express preference and do not use 'a' with plural nouns; place adjectives before the plural noun without extra articles.

× Yes, because it is comfortable.

✓ Yes, because they are comfortable.

The student used 'it' (third-person singular) to refer to 'T-shirts', which is plural. This is a third person singular/pronoun agreement problem. Replace 'it is' with 'they are' to match the plural noun. Suggestion: make sure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents; use 'they are' for plural items.

× Anything that's good to combine with a shirt and in advance?

✓ Anything that goes well with a shirt and is easy to prepare in advance?

The original sentence is fragmented and missing verbs, causing a sentence structure error. 'That's good to combine with a shirt and in advance' is ungrammatical. The corrected version supplies verbs: 'goes well' and 'is easy to prepare', making the sentence complete and clear. Suggestion: include a main verb for each clause and keep parallel structure when connecting ideas with 'and'.

× Sometimes.

✓ Sometimes I do.

The response 'Sometimes.' lacks a verb and is elliptical; while short answers can be acceptable in speech, the task requires full sentences. Adding 'I do' completes the sentence and answers the question 'Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?'. Suggestion: provide a short clause to form a complete sentence, e.g., 'Sometimes I do' or 'Sometimes I spend a little time.'