Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more natural and concise by using a clear topic sentence and one specific supporting detail. Avoid redundant wording and grammar mistakes (e.g., use plural/singular correctly).

例: I prefer comfortable clothes made from high-quality, breathable materials. For example, I often choose cotton or linen because they feel soft and keep me cool.

提案: Start with a direct topic sentence, reduce hesitations, and explain one clear reason using linking words. Correct grammar (use 'prefer to wear', 'crucial' is incorrect). Be specific about materials and conditions.

例: I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because the weather in my country is usually very hot. Therefore, I choose breathable fabrics like cotton or linen to stay cool and comfortable.

提案: Use a single concise sentence for the topic and add one supporting detail or example. Improve grammar ('I really like wearing T-shirts').

例: Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts; in fact most of my wardrobe consists of them because they are comfortable and easy to pair with different pants.

提案: Answer directly and organize the reply with linking words. Use correct tense and reduce repetition. Give a clear distinction between special occasions and everyday situations.

例: Not usually. I sometimes spend time choosing outfits when I go out with friends, because I want to look good; however, for quick trips to the market I just pick something simple.

提案: Provide a grammatically correct, slightly more detailed response. Instead of just 'lazy', explain why and add a linking phrase to give clarity.

例: No, I don't. I'm a bit lazy about choosing clothes, so I usually wear the same casual style on both weekdays and weekends.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and one specific reason with correct grammar. Avoid unclear phrases like 'make it with my pet'. Explain how neutral colours help with matching outfits.

例: I prefer basic colours like black, white and grey because they are easy to mix and match with different pants and shoes, making outfit choices quicker.

× I like to wear comfortable clothes and that have very good materials and quality.

✓ I like to wear comfortable clothes that are made of good materials and have good quality.

The original mixes structures: 'and that have' is incorrect. Use a relative clause 'that are made of...' or 'that have good quality.' Also maintain subject-verb agreement: 'that are made' and 'have' agree with 'clothes.' Suggestion: combine into one clear clause: 'comfortable clothes that are made of good materials and have good quality.'

× I prefer wear comfortable clothes because I think umm, I prefer wear comfortable and crucial clothes because in my country the temperature was high and always very hot, so I think a breathable and good material clothes is.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because in my country the temperature is high and it is usually very hot, so I think breathable clothes made of good material are best.

'Prefer' requires infinitive 'to wear' or gerund 'wearing' (prefer to wear/ prefer wearing). 'Crucial' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'casual.' Tense should match present general fact: use present 'is'/'are' not past 'was.' 'Clothes' is plural so use plural verb 'are.' Also reorder to make sentence natural: 'breathable clothes made of good material are best.' Use 'usually' instead of 'always' if more natural.

× Yeah, of course. I very like wearing T-shirts. Most of my clothes are T-shirts.

✓ Yeah, of course. I really like wearing T-shirts. Most of my clothes are T-shirts.

English uses 'really like' or 'like very much' rather than 'very like.' 'Very' modifies adjectives/adverbs, not verbs. 'Really' correctly modifies the verb phrase. The rest is fine.

× Not really some it's sometimes because sometimes when I'm going out with my friends, hang out with my friends, I will choose. I spend sometimes to choosing my clothes, but when I'm just went to a market, I was simply choose a clothes.

✓ Not really. Sometimes when I'm going out with my friends, I choose my clothes carefully. I sometimes spend time choosing my clothes, but when I just go to the market, I simply choose something quickly.

Original contains mixed fragments and incorrect verb forms: 'I will choose' and 'I spend sometimes to choosing' are wrong. Use simple present for habitual actions: 'I choose' and 'I sometimes spend time choosing.' 'Went' is past; use 'go' for general habit. 'A clothes' is wrong: 'clothes' is plural and needs no article. 'Simply choose something quickly' clarifies.

× No, because I lazy to. I'm lazy in choosing clothes.

✓ No, because I'm lazy. I'm lazy about choosing clothes.

'I lazy' is missing the verb 'am.' Also 'lazy to' is not correct; use 'lazy to do something' sometimes occurs but better 'lazy about choosing clothes.' Keep consistent contraction 'I'm'.

× Mostly I like the colour that are more basic such as black, white and grey because it was easy to make with my outfit and it is easily to make it with my pet with my colours of pants.

✓ Mostly I like basic colours such as black, white and grey because they are easy to match with my outfit and my pants.

'Colour that are' should be 'colours that are' or simply 'basic colours.' Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'colours.' Tense should be present 'are easy.' 'Make with my outfit' is unnatural; use 'match with my outfit.' 'Easily to make it with my pet with my colours of pants' is unclear and incorrect—likely meant 'match with my pants.' Simplify to 'they are easy to match with my outfit and my pants.'