Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a slightly longer response with a clear topic sentence and one specific reason or example. Use a linking word to expand naturally (but keep under 5 sentences).

例: I prefer to wear light clothes because they are comfortable and cooler in warm weather. For example, I often choose linen shirts or cotton dresses when it's hot since they breathe well and dry quickly.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence and then give two concise, specific reasons connected by a linking word. Avoid small grammar slips and keep sentences natural.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed. Moreover, they are practical for daily life since they are easy to wash and maintain.

提案: Keep the positive tone but vary wording and use one or two supporting details with linking words. Reduce repetition and correct minor grammar (use pronouns consistently).

例: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are low-maintenance and comfortable. For instance, I can simply wash and hang them to dry, and often I don't need to iron them before wearing.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence then one specific detail about your routine. Avoid filler words and correct minor errors (extra words). Use a linking word to explain the routine concisely.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prepare outfits in advance. Therefore, in the morning I just pick a set from my wardrobe and I can leave quickly without stress.

提案: Answer directly then give one specific reason. Use linking words to connect the reason and include a brief contrast if relevant. Keep sentences varied to sound natural.

例: No, I usually wear the same style—T-shirts and leggings—both on weekdays and weekends. This is because I rarely go to social events or formal occasions, so casual clothes meet my needs.

提案: Start with a direct statement about colour preference, then give a clear, specific reason without conversational fillers. Correct small grammar issues and use a linking phrase to make it coherent.

例: I prefer wearing dark-coloured clothes, especially for work, because they hide stains and look tidy for longer. For example, navy or charcoal shirts are practical when I have a busy day and little time to change.

× I like wearing light clothes.

✓ I like to wear light clothes.

Both 'like wearing' and 'like to wear' are possible; however, in this conversational context 'I like to wear light clothes' is a slightly more natural infinitive choice. Use of the infinitive emphasizes preference as a general habit. To improve: you can use either form but be consistent with style.

× To wear casual, comfortable clothes because it makes me feel I can go on wherever I want or whatever I like.

✓ I prefer to wear casual, comfortable clothes because they make me feel I can go wherever I want and do whatever I like.

The original lacks a main clause and has pronoun/verb agreement issues. 'To wear...' is a fragment; replace with 'I prefer to wear...' Also use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'clothes' and correct 'go on wherever' to 'go wherever' and join ideas with 'and'. Improve by ensuring full sentence structure with subject and verb and by matching plural pronouns to plural nouns.

× I can move freely and it's easy to wash.

✓ I can move freely and they are easy to wash.

The pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to plural 'clothes'. Use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are'. Ensure pronoun number matches the noun.

× Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because it's so easy to prepare.

✓ Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are so easy to prepare.

'It' incorrectly refers to plural 'T-shirts'. Use plural 'they' and 'are'. Also 'prepare' is an odd choice; in context 'get ready' or 'prepare them' is okay. Ensure pronoun-number agreement.

× You just wash it and then you just hang it, and then you can wear it all over again without ironing it.

✓ You just wash them and then hang them, and then you can wear them again without ironing them.

Replace singular pronoun 'it' with plural 'them' to match 'T-shirts'. Also streamline repetition by removing extra 'just' and 'all over again'. Maintain consistent plural pronouns.

× I don't because I my clothes are usually prepared already in my cabinet, in my wardrobe, and so in the morning when I go out, it's already there.

✓ I don't, because my clothes are usually already prepared in my cabinet or wardrobe, so in the morning when I go out they are already there.

Original has an extra 'I' and awkward word order. Remove the stray 'I', place 'already' in correct position, use 'or' for cabinet/wardrobe, and change 'it's' to 'they are' to match plural 'clothes'. Ensure coherent sentence flow.

× I just have to pick it up, no stress.

✓ I just have to pick them up, no stress.

Use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'clothes' instead of singular 'it'. Ensure pronoun agrees in number with its antecedent.

× No, it's always usually my T-shirt and my leggings.

✓ No, it's usually my T-shirt and leggings.

'Always usually' is redundant and contradictory. Choose one adverb; 'usually' fits the intended meaning. Also 'my' before 'leggings' is optional; parallel structure is clearer without repeating 'my'.

× That's the usual outfit I have in my wardrobe.

✓ That's the usual outfit I have in my wardrobe.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change is necessary. (Included here for completeness.)

× I don't change that much because I don't usually attend social gatherings or formal occasions.

✓ I don't change that much because I don't usually attend social gatherings or formal occasions.

Sentence is grammatically correct and matches present habitual context. No change needed. (Included for completeness.)

× I like wearing dark clothes usually at work because the dark clothes don't get easily get dirt.

✓ I usually wear dark clothes at work because dark clothes don't get dirty easily.

Word order and redundancy need fixing. Move 'usually' before the verb phrase 'wear', remove extra 'get', and place 'dirty' (adjective) after 'get'. Also avoid repeating 'the' unnecessarily. Improve by using 'dirty' with 'get' and placing adverbs in typical positions.

× You know even if it gets dirty it won't be noticeable.

✓ You know, even if they get dirty, it won't be noticeable.

Change 'it' to 'they' to refer to plural 'clothes'. Keep 'it won't be noticeable' to mean the dirt won't be noticeable; add commas for clarity. Ensure pronoun-number agreement.