Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is direct and natural but could be slightly expanded with one specific reason or example to sound more fluent and informative. Keep it brief (max 3–4 sentences) and use a linking phrase to add the detail.

例: I prefer casual clothes because they are more comfortable to wear. For example, I usually choose jeans and a soft sweater when I go out, since they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed.

提案: Good structure and clear contrast. To improve, combine sentences for fluency and add a short example of an occasion to make it more specific. Use a linking word like 'otherwise' instead of 'but else'.

例: It depends on the occasion: if I have a job interview or a formal meeting, I wear smart clothes; otherwise I prefer comfortable casual outfits for everyday activities.

提案: Your answer is clear but repetitive. Avoid repeating 'T-shirts' and refine the sentence to include a reason or brief example. Use a linking word like 'because' to explain why you prefer them.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially black ones, because they are comfortable and easy to match with jeans or shorts.

提案: You answer directly but the second sentence has grammatical errors and is slightly vague. Use clearer phrasing, correct comparisons, and one concrete example of what you do when choosing clothes. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, I often spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I want to look smart for each occasion. For example, I plan outfits the night before important events to make sure my clothes are clean and well-coordinated.

提案: Clear and appropriate answer. Improve naturalness by using contractions and smoother linking (e.g., 'whereas' or 'while') and give one specific example of weekday and weekend clothing.

例: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I usually wear a shirt and trousers for work, while on weekends I prefer jeans and a hoodie for comfort.

提案: Good choice of reasons but there are grammar issues and a vague phrase ('little mysterious looking'). Make the sentence grammatically correct, use a linking word, and give a brief explanation of why you prefer these colours.

例: I like black and grey clothes because they don't show dirt easily and look smart; black in particular gives a slightly mysterious, stylish impression.

× I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable to wear.

✓ I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable.

Redundant use of 'to wear' at the end is unnecessary in this context. The present tense 'prefer' and 'are' are correct; removing 'to wear' makes the sentence more natural and concise. ID:6

× It depends on the occasion. If the occasion demands professional clothing, then I choose to wear smart clothes, but else I like wearing comfortable casual clothes.

✓ It depends on the occasion. If the occasion demands professional clothing, I choose to wear smart clothes; otherwise, I like wearing comfortable, casual clothes.

Use of 'then' and 'else' together is awkward; replace with 'otherwise' for correct conjunction. Also add a comma between 'comfortable' and 'casual' for clarity. Maintain present tense consistently. ID:26

× Yes I do like wearing T-shirts, especially black color T-shirts and T-shirts are comfortable to wear for me.

✓ Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts, especially black ones, and T-shirts are comfortable for me.

Use a comma after 'Yes' and replace 'black color T-shirts' with 'black ones' to avoid redundancy. Remove 'to wear' after 'comfortable' and reorder to 'comfortable for me'. Keep present tense and -ing form 'wearing' is fine. ID:8

× Yes, I do take a lot of time choosing clothes. I prefer to look smart in every occasion and try to be little extraordinary than other people's. I like putting efforts on myself.

✓ Yes, I do take a lot of time choosing clothes. I prefer to look smart on every occasion and try to be a little more extraordinary than other people. I like putting effort into improving myself.

Use preposition 'on every occasion' instead of 'in'. 'Be little extraordinary than other people's' has multiple errors: need article 'a', comparative structure 'more extraordinary than other people' (not possessive). 'Putting efforts on myself' is incorrect; use 'putting effort into improving myself' or 'making an effort to improve myself'. Tenses remain present. ID:6

× Yes, I do wear different types of clothes in weekdays and weekends. Weekdays demands more of a professional attire whereas weekends demands casual clothes.

✓ Yes, I do wear different types of clothes on weekdays and at weekends. Weekdays demand a more professional attire, whereas weekends demand casual clothes.

Use 'on weekdays' and 'at weekends' (or 'on weekends') for correct prepositions. 'Weekdays' and 'weekends' are plural subjects and require plural verb 'demand' (subject-verb agreement). Use 'a more professional attire' or better 'more professional attire'. ID:11

× I like black and grey coloured clothes, they are do not get dirty fast and are little mysterious looking.

✓ I like black and grey-coloured clothes; they do not get dirty quickly and look a little mysterious.

Replace 'are do not get dirty fast' with 'do not get dirty quickly' (correct negative structure and adverb). 'are little mysterious looking' should be 'look a little mysterious' with correct adjective order and adverb placement. Use a semicolon or separate sentences for clarity. ID:13