Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and correct vocabulary; start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct words and linking words. Avoid invented or incorrect words (e.g. “bravable,” “line shirts,” “factories”). Use simple, accurate phrases about materials and situations.

例: I like wearing comfortable T-shirts and shorts because they allow me to move freely in warm weather. For example, I usually choose cotton T-shirts and lightweight shorts when I go hiking or meet friends, because cotton breathes well and dries quickly.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence, then contrast with a single clear reason and one specific example. Correct grammar (e.g. use present simple: “they let me”), avoid nonsense phrases (“soft drinks,” “AT shirt,” “formal casual”), and reduce repetition. Use a linking word like “but” to show contrast.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they let me relax during long days at university. However, I wear smart clothes for important meetings or formal events to look professional and show respect.

提案: Keep the answer natural and slightly more detailed: start with a clear statement, then add one specific reason and an example. Correct grammar: “I love wearing” and avoid filler words like “Yeah.”

例: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and let me move freely. For example, I usually wear a T-shirt when I study or hang out with friends because it’s easy and practical.

提案: This answer is clear and well-structured. To improve, make sentences slightly more concise and use precise time expressions. You can add a linking phrase to compare the two situations.

例: It depends. For everyday tasks like taking out the trash I wear whatever is comfortable, but if I'm going on a date I might spend two to three hours choosing an outfit because I want to make a good impression.

提案: Begin with a clear topic sentence and give a brief reason. Avoid hesitations (“umm”) and incorrect words (“wear off different”). Use linking words for clarity and correct verb forms.

例: No, I usually wear the same style on weekdays and weekends because I rarely have formal meetings; my daily routine doesn’t require different outfits.

提案: Answer directly with correct vocabulary and one specific reason or example. Avoid unclear fragments and repetition. Use correct sentence structure: “I prefer dark colors, such as brown and navy, because…”

例: I prefer dark colors like brown and navy for my T-shirts because they hide stains and suit my personal style better than light colors.

× I prefer wearing comfortable T-shirts and shorts because they let me move freely and are bravable in warm weather.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable T-shirts and shorts because they let me move freely and are breathable in warm weather.

The word 'bravable' is not correct English; the intended adjective is 'breathable' which describes fabric that allows air to pass through. Use appropriate adjectives that exist and match the meaning. Suggestion: learn common textile adjectives like breathable, lightweight, and comfortable.

× For example, I often choose a cotton T-shirt with a light colored line shirts when I go out with friends or do outdoor activities since these factories dry quickly and feel cool on the skin.

✓ For example, I often choose a cotton T-shirt with light-colored stripes when I go out with friends or do outdoor activities since this fabric dries quickly and feels cool on the skin.

Multiple errors: 'light colored line shirts' is ungrammatical — use 'light-colored stripes' or 'a light-colored shirt'. 'These factories' is incorrect; the intended noun is 'fabric'. Also verb agreement: 'fabric dries' and 'feels' must be singular to match 'this fabric'. Suggestion: refer to correct nouns for materials (fabric) and use hyphenated compound adjectives like 'light-colored'.

× I prefer comfortable casual clothes because they're letting me freely and feel relaxed during a long commuter day of studying, for example, I usually wear soft drinks and AT shirt.

✓ I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they let me move freely and help me feel relaxed during a long commute to study. For example, I usually wear a soft T-shirt and casual pants.

Problems: 'they're letting me freely' is wrong structure — use 'they let me move freely'. 'Long commuter day of studying' is awkward; 'long commute to study' or 'long day of studying' fits. 'soft drinks and AT shirt' are incorrect nouns; likely intended 'a soft T-shirt and a... shirt' or 'casual pants'. Suggestion: keep pronoun references clear, use verb 'let' for allowing actions, and choose appropriate clothing nouns.

× However, I dress smartly for a formal casual and a more important meetings to look fashionable and fashionable and show respect.

✓ However, I dress smartly for formal or more important meetings to look fashionable and to show respect.

Errors: 'a formal casual' is meaningless; choose 'formal' or 'formal events'. 'a more important meetings' has article and number mismatch; should be 'more important meetings'. Repetition 'fashionable and fashionable' is redundant. Suggestion: ensure noun phrases make sense, match articles with singular/plural, and avoid repetition.

× Of course I love to wearing T-shirts, they always make me feel more comfortable and move freely.

✓ Of course I love wearing T-shirts; they always make me feel more comfortable and let me move freely.

After 'love' use the base verb or gerund: 'love wearing' is correct; 'love to wearing' is wrong. Also two independent clauses should be joined properly; use a semicolon or separate sentences. 'Make me move freely' is acceptable but clearer as 'let me move freely.' Suggestion: use 'love wearing' or 'love to wear', not 'love to wearing'.

× No, I don't wear off different styles or clothes on weekends or weekdays because I don't have any umm serious meetings so I don't need to where I just always wear the same clothes.

✓ No, I don't wear different styles on weekends or weekdays because I don't have any serious meetings, so I usually wear the same clothes.

Word choice and structure errors: 'wear off different styles' is wrong — use 'wear different styles'. 'need to where' is typo for 'need to' or 'need to wear'. Remove filler 'umm' and fix run-on sentence with proper punctuation. Suggestion: simplify sentence structure: 'I don't wear different styles... so I usually wear the same clothes.'

× I prefer brown clothes or Li were dark colors on T-shirts because I I fit in the dark colors, not the light colors.

✓ I prefer brown or other dark-colored clothes, especially T-shirts, because I feel I suit dark colors better than light ones.

Multiple issues: 'Li were' is gibberish and should be removed; 'dark colors on T-shirts' is awkward — use 'dark-colored clothes' or 'dark-colored T-shirts'. 'I I fit in the dark colors' is ungrammatical; use 'I feel I suit dark colors' or 'dark colors suit me'. Suggestion: use clear comparative phrasing 'suit X better than Y' and avoid repeated words.