Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and concise, start with a clear topic sentence, avoid brand list vagueness and give a specific reason or brief example. Use one linking phrase to add detail.

例: I usually wear T-shirts and shorts because I prioritize comfort. For example, I often choose a plain Uniqlo T-shirt and lightweight shorts when I go out, since they keep me cool and are easy to move in.

提案: Begin with a clear direct statement, then give one brief contrasting example using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (e.g., 'give person give other people a sharp image').

例: It depends on the occasion: I usually choose casual clothes for everyday life, but when I have meetings or formal events I wear smart clothes because they help me look professional and confident.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons with correct grammar and a linking word. Avoid awkward phrases like 'doing some hot weathers'.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially in Hong Kong's hot weather, because they are comfortable and breathable, so I can stay cool and relaxed all day.

提案: Answer directly and simplify the supporting details. Use linking words and correct verb forms. Give specific activities rather than repeating 'like'.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. Instead, I prefer to use my free time for hobbies such as reading, watching films, or meeting friends.

提案: This answer is clear and well structured; refine wording to be more concise and avoid repetition. Use a linking phrase to contrast weekdays and weekends and give a concrete example.

例: Yes. During weekdays I wear smart-casual clothes for work, such as chinos and a shirt, but on weekends I prefer T-shirts and shorts so I can relax and be comfortable.

提案: Use clearer vocabulary and correct phrasing (e.g., 'it doesn't suit me' instead of 'it doesn't shoot me'). Start with a direct statement, then briefly explain reasons with one linking word.

例: I prefer simple colours like black, gray, and white because I like a minimalist look. I avoid bright colours since I'm quite shy and neutral tones feel more comfortable for me.

× I usually wear T-shirts and shorts because I prioritize comfort and I like to wear some brands like Uniqlo or some Gu.

✓ I usually wear T-shirts and shorts because I prioritize comfort, and I like wearing some brands like Uniqlo or GU.

Use of gerund 'wearing' after 'like' is the standard collocation in English. Also use a comma before 'and' joining two independent clauses. Brand 'GU' should be capitalized consistently. Suggestion: use 'like wearing' and add comma for clarity.

× I think it depends. I prefer wear comfortable and casual clothes when I'm allowed.

✓ I think it depends. I prefer wearing comfortable, casual clothes when I'm allowed to.

After 'prefer' use the gerund form ('prefer wearing') or the infinitive with 'to' ('prefer to wear'). Also add comma between coordinate adjectives and include 'to' after 'allowed' for completeness. Suggestion: use 'prefer wearing' or 'prefer to wear'.

× However, there are some occasions that I need to wear some smart clothes and I'm fine with wearing smart clothes because it represents myself and give person give other people a sharp image.

✓ However, there are some occasions when I need to wear smart clothes, and I'm fine with doing so because they represent me and give other people a sharp impression.

Use 'occasions when' not 'that' for times; avoid repeating 'some' and 'smart clothes'. 'Represents myself' is incorrect — use 'represent me'. Verb agreement: 'give person give other people' is ungrammatical; use 'give other people a sharp impression'. Also combine clauses with a comma before 'and'. Suggestion: streamline sentence and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct pronoun use.

× Yes I do. I like wearing T-shirts a lot, especially doing some hot weathers like in Hong Kong.

✓ Yes, I do. I like wearing T-shirts a lot, especially in hot weather, like in Hong Kong.

Do not use 'doing' with weather; use the prepositional phrase 'in hot weather'. 'Weathers' is incorrect as a count noun here. Add comma after 'Yes'. Suggestion: say 'especially in hot weather' or 'especially when the weather is hot'.

× Wearing T-shirts can make me feel comfortable and it make me feel casual.

✓ Wearing T-shirts can make me feel comfortable, and it makes me feel casual.

Subject-verb agreement: singular subject 'it' requires 'makes' not 'make'. Add comma before 'and' connecting independent clauses. Suggestion: use 'it makes' or rephrase to 'they make me feel casual' if referring to T-shirts.

× No, I don't think I'm the kind of person that spent a lot of time choosing clothes.

✓ No, I don't think I'm the kind of person who spends a lot of time choosing clothes.

Tense and relative clause: use present tense 'spends' to match habitual action. Use 'who' (or 'that') but 'who' is preferred for people. Suggestion: use 'spends' for habitual actions.

× I prefer spend time doing other stuff like other hobbies like reading or even watching a film or spending time with my friends.

✓ I prefer to spend my time on other things, such as hobbies like reading, watching films, or spending time with my friends.

After 'prefer' you can use 'to' + infinitive ('prefer to spend') or a gerund form; original omitted 'to'. Use 'my time' and more natural collocations: 'other things' or 'hobbies', and plural 'films'. Suggestion: 'prefer to spend my time' and use parallel list structure.

× Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekends and weekdays.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends.

Word order: more natural to say 'on weekdays and weekends' or mirror the question. No major grammar error other than preferred chronological order. Suggestion: follow the order in the question or common usage.

× For weekdays, I usually wear smart casual because I need to maintain a sharp image during work.

✓ On weekdays, I usually wear smart-casual clothes because I need to maintain a sharp image at work.

Use 'on weekdays' rather than 'for weekdays'. 'Smart casual' as a compound adjective is often hyphenated before a noun: 'smart-casual clothes'. Use 'at work' rather than 'during work'. Suggestion: 'On weekdays, I usually wear smart-casual clothes at work.'

× On the other hand, I like to stay relaxed and casual, so I always wear T-shirts and shorts during weekends.

✓ On the other hand, I like to stay relaxed and casual, so I always wear T-shirts and shorts at the weekend.

Preposition choice: 'at the weekend' or 'on weekends' (American English) is more natural than 'during weekends'. Choose consistent variety. Suggestion: use 'on weekends' (US) or 'at the weekend' (UK).

× I like clothes in some simple colors, for example black, Gray or white.

✓ I like clothes in simple colors, for example black, gray, or white.

Avoid 'some' before 'simple colors'; unnecessary. 'Gray' should be lowercase. Use commas in a list and parallel capitalization. Suggestion: 'simple colors' and lowercase color names.

× I'm a kind of person that likes simplicity and I do not prefer some colorful T-shirts because I'm quite shy and I think it doesn't shoot me.

✓ I'm the kind of person who likes simplicity, and I don't prefer colorful T-shirts because I'm quite shy and I don't think they suit me.

Use 'the kind of person' not 'a kind' in this context. Use 'who' for people. 'Do not prefer some colorful' is unnatural; 'don't prefer colorful T-shirts' is clearer. 'It doesn't shoot me' is incorrect idiom — likely 'it doesn't suit me' and plural pronoun 'they' to agree with 'T-shirts'. Suggestion: use 'the kind of person who' and correct verb phrase to 'suit me'.