Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer slightly longer with a clear topic sentence and a specific reason or example. Use a linking word to add one supporting detail. Avoid single short sentence answers when more detail is helpful.

例: I prefer to wear casual clothes because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I often choose jeans and a soft sweater when I go out with friends, since they suit most activities and help me feel relaxed.

提案: Organize the reply with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations and grammatical errors, and use linking words to contrast choices. Be specific about occasions when you choose smart clothes.

例: I usually prefer comfortable, casual clothes, but when I have formal events I choose smart outfits to make a good impression. For instance, I wear a blazer and tailored trousers to job interviews or important meetings because they help me look professional.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence then add a specific reason and an example. Avoid vague phrases and repetition; use a linking word to add detail. Clarify what you mean by 'drop shoulders' if mentioning styles.

例: Yes, I like T-shirts a lot because they are comfortable and easy to style. For example, I wear a plain cotton T-shirt with jeans for a casual day out, and I keep a few oversized or drop-shoulder T-shirts for relaxed weekends.

提案: Start with a concise topic sentence, then use a linking word to give a specific exception and example. Reduce repetition and avoid filler words. Explain what kind of formal events and what steps you take to prepare.

例: No, I usually don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer simple outfits. However, when I have formal events like presentations or ceremonies, I take more time to select a suit or ask a friend for advice so I look professional.

提案: Make the topic sentence grammatically correct and clear, then give one or two specific contrasting examples for weekday and weekend styles, using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'affairs' and reduce repetition.

例: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. For example, on weekdays I dress more formally with shirts and chinos for work, whereas on weekends I prefer casual outfits like hoodies and jeans to relax and socialise.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence about your favourite colours, then give a reason or context and one example. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'muted' instead of 'dim') and avoid ending abruptly.

例: I usually prefer blue tops with white bottoms because the combination looks clean and balanced. I also tend to choose muted colours like navy, grey and beige for formal outfits because they appear professional and easy to match.

× I usually prefer to wear comfortable clothes, but when I need to go some, somewhere formal or somewhere, uh, like important for create an image for me there I wear some, uh, stylish or fashionable clothes.

✓ I usually prefer to wear comfortable clothes, but when I need to go somewhere formal or to an important event to create an image, I wear stylish or fashionable clothes.

Incorrect and awkward use of infinitive and verb forms: 'for create' should be 'to create' (use to + base verb for purpose). Also extraneous words like 'some' and repeated 'somewhere' create confusion. Suggestion: use 'to' before verbs to express purpose and remove filler words for clarity.

× They are my go to either for any event.

✓ They are my go-to for any event.

Incorrect preposition 'either' is unnecessary and 'go to' as a noun should be hyphenated 'go-to'. Also 'for any event' is correct; remove 'either' which does not fit here.

× I have shirts also and drop shoulders also.

✓ I also have shirts, including some with drop shoulders.

Awkward and repetitive placement of 'also'. Reordering improves clarity: place 'also' before the main verb or use a phrase 'including' to introduce a specific detail.

× No, no, I wear simple clothes usually, so I don't need much time to select my clothes for any outing or any event.

✓ No, I usually wear simple clothes, so I don't need much time to choose my outfit for an outing or an event.

Word order and word choice: 'wear simple clothes usually' is better as 'usually wear simple clothes'. 'Select my clothes' is wordy; 'choose my outfit' is more natural. Remove redundant 'any' when not needed.

× But yeah, for some formal event to look more professional, I take some time or ask my friends or family to choose some clothes for me so that I can create a great impression.

✓ But for formal events, to look more professional, I take some time or ask friends or family to choose clothes for me so that I can make a good impression.

'Some formal event' should be plural 'formal events' for general statements. 'Create a great impression' is less idiomatic than 'make a good impression'. Remove unnecessary 'some' and simplify phrasing.

× I likely to maintain different affairs at different days because it it gives me confident and I feel like that it's very important to change clothes for me to mix up with the people.

✓ I tend to maintain different styles on different days because it gives me confidence, and I feel it's important to change clothes to fit in with people.

Multiple issues: 'I likely to' should be 'I tend to' (verb needed). 'Different affairs' is wrong; 'different styles' fits context. 'Different days' not 'different days' -> 'on different days'. Duplicate 'it it'. 'Gives me confident' should be 'gives me confidence' (noun form). 'To mix up with the people' -> 'to fit in with people'. Overall restructure for grammatical verbs and idiomatic phrases.

× My favorite combo of colour is wearing blue at the top and white at the bottom.

✓ My favorite color combination is blue on top and white on the bottom.

Word choice and prepositions: 'combo of colour is wearing' is ungrammatical. Use 'color combination' and 'blue on top'/'white on the bottom' to describe clothing. Also use consistent American or British spelling; here 'color' is acceptable.

× And usually I like to wear formal clothes which are like mainly dim type colours.

✓ Usually I like to wear formal clothes in mainly muted colors.

'Dim type colours' is nonstandard; 'muted colors' or 'subdued colors' is appropriate. 'Which are like mainly' is awkward—use 'in mainly' or 'mainly in' followed by adjective + noun.