Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clear and direct. Start with a concise topic sentence naming the clothes you like, then give 1–2 specific reasons with correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid repetition and unrelated phrases.

例: I prefer traditional Pakistani clothes such as shalwar kameez because they reflect my culture and are comfortable for daily wear. For example, I often wear a shalwar kameez at family gatherings because it looks elegant and is suitable for our climate.

提案: Give a direct answer and support it with a clear reason and one short example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly and avoid repeating ideas.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I go to the gym regularly and need freedom of movement. For instance, I often wear a T‑shirt and jogging trousers in the evening so I can exercise comfortably.

提案: Answer directly then give one clear reason. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'I prefer wearing T‑shirts' or 'I like wearing T‑shirts') and avoid awkward phrasing. Mention one effect (confidence) and one brief example.

例: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they show my physique and make me feel confident. For example, after working out I often wear a fitted T‑shirt to highlight my progress.

提案: Start with a clear yes/no and give one concise reason. Use correct tense and avoid unnecessary repetition. Mention a specific detail about how you choose clothes (e.g., checking fit, comfort).

例: Yes, I spend some time choosing clothes because I always try them on to check the fit. I usually focus on T‑shirts and trousers since I value comfort and a good fit.

提案: Give a short direct answer and follow with one or two clear reasons. Avoid fillers ('uh') and repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

例: No, I usually wear the same style on weekdays and weekends because I prefer simple, comfortable clothes like T‑shirts and trousers. They are easy to wear and suit my daily routine.

提案: Answer directly and give one clear reason with a specific detail (e.g., how black suits you or matches other clothes). Avoid repeating words and correct small grammar mistakes.

例: My favourite colour is black because it looks smart and matches most of my other clothes. For example, I often wear a black T‑shirt and trousers since they are easy to style and look neat.

× Yes, I like to wear shower camis which is very common in our Pakistan because I am from the Pakistan.

✓ Yes, I like to wear shower camis which are very common in Pakistan because I am from Pakistan.

Use of the definite article 'the' before country names like Pakistan is incorrect. Also match plural noun 'camis' with plural verb 'are'. Remove unnecessary 'our' before country. Suggestion: say 'in Pakistan' and use 'are' for plural subjects.

× The Shan welcome is is remind our culture and the social interactions and and these clothes are very beautiful and charming.

✓ The shawl and traditional clothing remind me of our culture and social interactions, and these clothes are very beautiful and charming.

Original sentence has word choice and repetition errors ('Shan welcome', double 'is', double 'and') and incorrect structure. Replace unclear phrase with 'shawl and traditional clothing' (if intended), use 'remind me of' for correct verb pattern, and join clauses with commas. Suggestion: use clear nouns and 'remind me of' + object.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I am a healthy person and going and I am going to gym regularly in the evening.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I am a healthy person and I go to the gym regularly in the evening.

Use of 'going and I am going' is ungrammatical. For habitual actions use simple present 'I go'. Also include article 'the' before 'gym'. Suggestion: use simple present for routines: 'I go to the gym regularly'.

× So I wear when I wear these comfortable and casual clothes, I feel good and my gym are going very good when I am when my clothes are comfortable.

✓ When I wear comfortable and casual clothes, I feel good and my workouts at the gym go very well.

Original contains redundant fragments and wrong verb forms ('my gym are going'). Use 'workouts' or 'sessions' as subject and 'go well' for result. Suggestion: simplify to one clear conditional sentence: 'When I wear..., I feel... and my workouts go well.'

× Yes, I prefer to wearing T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I prefer wearing T-shirts.

After 'prefer' use either the gerund ('prefer wearing') or the infinitive ('prefer to wear'), but not both. Suggestion: use 'I prefer wearing T-shirts.' or 'I prefer to wear T-shirts.'

× The reason is I have a muscles and when I wear the T-shirts and the muscles are are freely visible to every people and this seem like very attractive and I feel very confident when I wearing the T-shirts so I like.

✓ The reason is I have muscles, and when I wear T-shirts my muscles are clearly visible to people, which seems very attractive and makes me feel confident, so I like them.

Errors: wrong article 'a muscles' (should be plural 'muscles' without 'a'), unnecessary 'the' before T-shirts, double 'are', 'every people' should be 'people', 'this seem' should be 'this seems' (subject-verb agreement), incorrect verb form 'when I wearing' should be 'when I wear', and need object pronoun 'them' for 'I like'. Suggestion: correct articles, agreement, and use gerund/verb forms properly.

× Yes, I am spending a lot of time in choosing clothes because I have to try all the clothes which I selected because I am healthy and I have to check the fitting of clothes.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I have to try on all the clothes I select to check the fit.

Use simple present 'I spend' for habitual actions, not present continuous 'I am spending'. Use 'try on' for clothing, simple present 'I select', and 'check the fit' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use concise phrases for habits.

× I I like T-shirts mostly and trouser because I am feeling very comfortable and it feel like.

✓ I mostly like T-shirts and trousers because I feel very comfortable in them.

Duplicate 'I', use plural 'trousers', use simple present 'I feel', and use 'in them' rather than 'it feel like'. Suggestion: use correct plural forms and natural collocations: 'feel comfortable in'.

× No, I don't like to wear different styles of clothes on weekends because, uh, mostly I wear a T-shirt or a trouser in the weekend, uh, I wear these items or T-shirt or trouser because these are very comfortable and easy to wear.

✓ No, I don't like to wear different styles of clothes on weekends; mostly I wear a T-shirt or trousers at the weekend because these items are very comfortable and easy to wear.

Use plural 'trousers', use 'at the weekend' or 'on weekends' consistently, and avoid 'a trouser'. Use plural determiners 'these items'. Suggestion: choose consistent time expression and correct noun forms.

× Yes, my favorite colour is black, so I choose mostly the black clothes when I wear black T-shirt or a trouser.

✓ Yes, my favorite color is black, so I mostly choose black clothes when I wear a black T-shirt or trousers.

Don't use 'the' before general 'black clothes'. Use 'a black T-shirt' but 'trousers' plural. 'Choose mostly black clothes' is natural word order. Suggestion: remove unnecessary definite article and use correct noun number.

× These these are looking very beautiful on me and so I this is the reason I prefer black clothes over another colour of clothes.

✓ They look very good on me, and that is why I prefer black clothes over other colors.

Remove duplicate 'these', use simple present 'look', replace 'this is the reason' with 'that is why', and use 'other colors' instead of 'another colour of clothes'. Suggestion: use concise clauses and correct comparative phrasing.