Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct vocabulary and grammar: replace repeated errors (calls→clothes, teachers→T-shirts or sweaters). Make one clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Keep within 3–4 sentences and avoid redundancy.

例: I usually wear casual clothes, such as T-shirts and jeans, because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, on weekends I often choose a plain T-shirt and well-worn jeans for running errands or meeting friends.

提案: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct tense and word forms (made→meet, are make me→they make me). State your preference then give a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' correctly.

例: It depends on the situation. On weekdays I prefer smart clothes because I meet clients at work and dressing smart makes me feel more confident. However, on weekends I usually choose comfortable clothes to relax.

提案: Fix word choice and sentence formation: oversize one→oversized ones; easy to make→easy to wear; teachers→T-shirts. Give a topic sentence and one or two clear supporting details (why and an example). Avoid unclear questions within answer.

例: Definitely. I love wearing T-shirts, especially oversized ones, because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I often pair an oversized T-shirt with leggings or jeans for a relaxed look.

提案: Use clearer phrases: Not really rather than Not clearly; comfortable course→comfortable clothes; shoot my course→choose my clothes. Provide a short explanation and an example of your routine.

例: Not really. I prefer comfortable clothes, so I don't spend much time choosing an outfit; I usually pick something simple like a T-shirt and jeans and get dressed in a few minutes.

提案: Correct contradictions and wording: state weekdays vs weekends clearly. Fix grammar (I've made to take care→I have to meet clients; client→clients; professional professional→professional). Use linking words and give a concrete example of each style.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart outfits, such as blouses and dress trousers, because I have to meet clients and look professional. On weekends I prefer comfortable clothes, like loose T-shirts and joggers, to relax.

提案: Correct vocabulary and phrasing: pink cold→pink color; suits my meal→suits me; obtained through pink codes→try on pink clothes or see pink items. Keep one clear sentence stating preference and one supporting reason or example; avoid unclear phrases.

例: I like pink because I think it is a cute color and it suits me. For instance, I often choose a pink blouse or accessories when shopping because they make me feel happy and more confident.

× I usually like to wear casual calls, especially teachers and jeans.

✓ I usually like to wear casual clothes, especially T-shirts and jeans.

The student used 'calls' and 'teachers' which are incorrect words. The intended words are 'clothes' and 'T-shirts'. Use accurate vocabulary to convey meaning; proofread for similar-sounding word mistakes.

× I wear them almost everyday when I'm not working.

✓ I wear them almost every day when I'm not working.

Every day (two words) is the correct form meaning 'each day'. 'Everyday' (one word) is an adjective meaning 'ordinary'. Use 'every day' as an adverbial phrase here.

× On weekdays I prefer to wear smart clothes because I made a lot of clients at work and they are make me feel more confident.

✓ On weekdays I prefer to wear smart clothes because I meet a lot of clients at work and they make me feel more confident.

'Made' is past tense and incorrect; use 'meet' (present) to match habitual action. 'Are make me' is ungrammatical; correct is 'they make me'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb choice for routine actions.

× However, on weekend I prefer comfortable and care.

✓ However, on weekends I prefer comfortable clothes and casual wear.

Use plural 'weekends' for general statements. 'Care' is wrong word here; likely 'casual wear' or 'comfort'. Also supply a noun 'clothes' after 'comfortable'.

× Definitely, I love wearing T-shirts, especially oversize one.

✓ Definitely, I love wearing T-shirts, especially oversized ones.

'Oversize' should be the adjective 'oversized' and must agree in number with 'T-shirts', so use plural 'ones'. Also maintain consistent form for count nouns.

× They are really comfortable and easy to make.

✓ They are really comfortable and easy to wear.

'Easy to make' implies manufacturing; intended meaning is 'easy to wear'. Use correct verb collocations with 'clothes'.

× Which different outfit? I have quite a lot of teachers in my wardrobe.

✓ As for different outfits, I have quite a lot of T-shirts in my wardrobe.

Original sentences are unclear. 'Which different outfit?' is awkward; replace with 'As for different outfits'. 'Teachers' is wrong word; use 'T-shirts'.

× Not clearly. I prefer comfortable course so I don't have to think too much about my outfit.

✓ Not really. I prefer comfortable clothes so I don't have to think too much about my outfit.

'Not clearly' is incorrect; use 'Not really' for the intended meaning. 'Course' is wrong word; use 'clothes'. Maintain natural adverbial responses.

× I can usually shoot my course very quickly.

✓ I can usually choose my clothes very quickly.

'Shoot my course' is incorrect phrase. The intended meaning is 'choose my clothes'. Use correct verbs and nouns for the action described.

× Yes I do. On weekday I usually wear smart clothes because I've made to take care.

✓ Yes, I do. On weekdays I usually wear smart clothes because I have to take care (of my appearance).

Use 'weekdays' for general statements. 'I've made to take care' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'I have to take care (of my appearance)'. Use correct modal 'have to' for obligation.

× I need to take care client and look professional professional.

✓ I need to take care of clients and look professional.

Add preposition 'of' after 'take care'. Use plural 'clients' for general reference. Remove repeated 'professional'. Ensure proper noun forms and prepositions.

× However, on weekday I prefer very comfortable calls such as teacher.

✓ However, on weekends I prefer very comfortable clothes, such as T-shirts.

Use 'weekends' for habitual statements and 'clothes' not 'calls'. 'Teacher' is wrong word; use 'T-shirts'. Maintain consistency with earlier statements.

× I like pink cold because I think pink is a cute color and it suits my meal I obtained through pink codes when I go shopping.

✓ I like pink color because I think pink is a cute color and it suits my mood; I often choose pink clothes when I go shopping.

'Cold' is misspelling of 'color'. 'Meal I obtained through pink codes' is meaningless; likely intended 'mood' and 'choose pink clothes'. Replace with clear, logical phrasing.

× It also make me feel happy and confident.

✓ It also makes me feel happy and confident.

'Make' must agree with singular subject 'It', so use 'makes'. Ensure subject-verb agreement in present tense.