Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail and a short reason using a linking word. Avoid vague phrases like "looks nice in my personality."

例: I prefer comfortable clothes. For example, I often wear soft cotton T‑shirts because they let me move easily and suit my relaxed style.

提案: Use correct tense and reduce repetition. Give a clear contrast with linking words (e.g., "but", "however"). Be specific about occasions and one reason for your choice.

例: I prefer casual clothes at home, but I wear smart clothes for special occasions such as weddings because they make a good impression and suit the formal setting.

提案: Avoid tense errors and unnecessary repetition. State your main idea, then give one or two clear reasons using linking words like "because" or "so". Use singular/plural correctly.

例: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are more comfortable than long‑sleeve shirts. For instance, the short sleeves keep me cool and make it easier to do household tasks.

提案: Fix sentence structure and reduce redundancy. Start with a direct answer, then give specific reasons and avoid vague comparisons. Use linking words like "because" and "however".

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually stick to black and white items. I prefer these colors because they are easy to match and look neat for most occasions.

提案: Clarify the contrast between weekdays and weekends. Use one clear sentence for weekdays and one for weekends, with linking words such as "while" or "whereas". Avoid unclear phrases like "we are cheering."

例: On weekdays I wear practical clothes like simple shirts or jeans because they are comfortable for work. Whereas on weekends I choose more fashionable outfits when I meet friends so I feel confident and look presentable.

提案: Make the sentence concise and correct agreement and tense. Give one clear reason and avoid repeating words. Use linking words if you add an additional point.

例: My favourite colour is black because it suits my skin tone and makes me look sharper. For example, I often wear black T‑shirts or jeans as they are flattering and easy to match.

× Usually I like to wear comfortable clothes, it doesn't matter of brand, just looks nice in my personality.

✓ Usually I like to wear comfortable clothes; it doesn't matter which brand they are, as long as they suit my personality.

Incorrect preposition 'of' after 'matter' and missing relative clause. Use 'which brand they are' or 'what brand' and 'suit my personality' instead of 'looks nice in my personality'. Also ensure subject agreement for 'they'.

× I usually prefer comfortable and casual clothes when I was in my house.

✓ I usually prefer comfortable and casual clothes when I am at home.

Using past tense 'was' is incorrect for habitual present actions. Use present simple 'am' and idiomatic 'at home' not 'in my house'.

× When I want to go to any other place, to a marriage or any occasion, I want to wear I I am wearing smart clothes because it helps to enhance our personality.

✓ When I go to weddings or other occasions, I wear smart clothes because they help enhance my personality.

Sentence is wordy and contains repetition 'I want to wear I I am wearing'. Use simple present 'I go' for habitual actions and correct pronoun agreement 'they help' and possessive 'my personality'.

× Yes, usually I wear T-shirts when I was at my home because it helps.

✓ Yes, usually I wear T-shirts when I am at home because they are comfortable.

Mixing past 'was' with habitual present. Use present 'am' and clarify 'they are comfortable' rather than vague 'it helps'.

× It helps to be more comfortable than shirts because it have half sleeves which helps me to be comfortable in my work or in any doing any task.

✓ They are more comfortable than shirts because they have short sleeves, which helps me be comfortable while working or doing tasks.

Pronoun agreement: refer to T-shirts (plural) with 'they' not 'it'. 'Have' must agree with plural. Also 'half sleeves' is better as 'short sleeves' and streamline 'in my work or in any doing any task' to 'while working or doing tasks'.

× No, I not spend a lot of time on choosing clothes.

✓ No, I do not spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

Auxiliary 'do' required for negation in present simple. Word order: 'do not spend' and use 'choosing clothes' without 'on'.

× I usually prefer white or black color clothes because it it enhance my personality and I love that both colors and the other color I do not like this much because they are too much light or too much dark, but the white and black are always comfortable.

✓ I usually prefer white or black clothes because they enhance my appearance; I like both colors. I do not like other colors much because some are too light or too dark, but white and black always suit me.

Redundant words and incorrect pronoun 'it it'. Use plural 'they enhance' for clothes. 'Color clothes' should be 'clothes' with color adjectives. Improve clarity and concision.

× I usually prefer to wear clothes on weekdays which helps me to do work.

✓ I usually prefer to wear practical clothes on weekdays because they help me to work.

Use present simple 'prefer' and 'help' for habitual actions. 'To do work' is awkward; use 'to work' or 'when working'. Add 'practical' to clarify meaning if intended.

× Like I'm wearing T-shirts on weekends because when we are cheering with my friends and doing any fun activity, I usually wear stylish clothes because the around people notice us and we look gorgeous.

✓ For example, I wear T-shirts on weekends; when I am hanging out with my friends and doing fun activities, I usually wear stylish clothes because people around us notice and we look good.

Pronoun and tense issues: 'I'm wearing' should be 'I wear' for habits. 'Cheering with my friends' is unnatural—use 'hanging out'. Remove 'the' before 'around people'. Use 'we look good' instead of 'gorgeous' for naturalness.

× In colour the most colour I like is black because it suits it suits my colour skin colour and make my skin more bright when I wearing these black colour T-shirts or any jeans or shorts.

✓ My favorite color is black because it suits my skin and makes it look brighter when I wear black T-shirts, jeans, or shorts.

Multiple repetitions 'suits it suits' and 'colour skin colour' are incorrect. Use 'favorite color' and 'suits my skin'. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it' (the color) and correct verb form 'when I wear' not 'when I wearing'.