Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be careful with verb forms and word order; start with a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific details using linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

例: I usually prefer fitted clothes, especially sleeveless dresses. For example, I like cotton or linen dresses because they are breathable and flattering. Also, I often choose simple patterns rather than busy prints so the outfit looks neat.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence, then support it with one or two clear reasons using linking words such as 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundant phrases and fragmented sentences.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed. For instance, I often wear jeans and a nice top when I meet friends, so I can be both comfortable and stylish.

提案: Use consistent tense and be specific about what you like. Start with a direct sentence and add one specific detail using a linking word like 'because' or 'when'.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are versatile and easy to pair with different bottoms. I especially prefer ones that fit well and have simple, attractive prints.

提案: Use present simple for habitual actions and avoid short questions like 'Why?'. Provide a concise reason and a brief example to support your idea.

例: Yes, I spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because dressing well boosts my confidence. For example, I plan my outfit the night before if I have an important meeting so I feel prepared.

提案: Answer directly and use linking words to contrast weekday and weekend styles. Keep sentences natural and concise, and use correct modal verbs.

例: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I wear a uniform for work, but on weekends I dress casually in jeans and T-shirts to relax.

提案: Use clearer vocabulary (e.g., 'muted' or 'soft' colours) and correct grammar. Start with a topic sentence about favourite colours, explain why with one specific reason, and avoid repetition.

例: I prefer muted, soft colours like pastel blue and beige because they suit my medium skin tone. For example, I often choose light grey or pastel shades because they make my complexion look healthy.

× I liked wearing fitting clothes, a sleeveless and also a dress.

✓ I like wearing fitted clothes, sleeveless tops, and dresses.

The student used past tense 'liked' though the question asks about general preference (present). Also 'fitting' should be 'fitted' (adjective) and plural nouns need consistency. Use present simple for habitual preferences: 'I like'. Use plural 'dresses' to match general statement.

× I prefer to wear the casual clothes because it is very comfortable. And stylish for me, even though it is casual, but the tendency in that is that I'm comfortable wearing that.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes because they are very comfortable and stylish for me; even though they are casual, I tend to feel comfortable wearing them.

Use present simple for preferences. 'the casual clothes' incorrectly uses definite article and singular verb 'it'; 'clothes' is plural so use 'they are'. Remove redundant conjunctions and rephrase for clarity. Replace 'the tendency in that is that I'm comfortable wearing that' with 'I tend to feel comfortable wearing them'.

× Of course, I liked wearing T-shirts, especially when it is my size and the print is well needed.

✓ Of course, I like wearing T-shirts, especially when they are my size and the print looks good.

Use present simple 'like' for habitual action. 'T-shirts' is plural so use 'they are'. 'the print is well needed' is incorrect phrasing; use 'the print looks good' or 'the print is attractive'.

× Yes, I spent a lot of time choosing clothes. Why? Because I believe that wearing a nice clothes every day gives or boosts your confidence.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I believe that wearing nice clothes every day boosts your confidence.

Use present simple 'spend' for current habitual behavior. 'a nice clothes' is incorrect article and number: 'clothes' is plural so remove 'a'. Use single verb 'boosts' rather than 'gives or boosts'. Maintain subject-verb agreement: 'wearing nice clothes every day boosts your confidence'.

× Of course I should wear different styles because in weekdays I wear uniforms and in weekends I wear casual clothes.

✓ Of course, I usually wear different styles because on weekdays I wear a uniform and on weekends I wear casual clothes.

'Should' implies obligation; the student meant habitual action, so use 'usually wear'. Use prepositions 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends'. 'uniforms' changed to singular 'a uniform' as many schools use one uniform; if plural was intended, keep plural but structure clearer.

× I like wearing a low light clothes because my skin is not too bright and not too dark but is in the middle. So I tend or want to to have a clothes that is suited for my skin color.

✓ I like wearing low-key colors because my skin tone is neither very light nor very dark but somewhere in the middle, so I prefer clothes that suit my skin color.

'a low light clothes' is ungrammatical: 'clothes' is plural and 'low light' is not the right adjective. 'low-key colors' or 'muted colors' fits better. Use 'skin tone' not 'skin is not too bright'. Remove duplicate 'to'. Use 'prefer clothes that suit my skin color' for natural phrasing.