Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You did not answer this question. Give a direct topic sentence stating the kinds of clothes you like, then add 1–2 short supporting details (why and when). Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences). Use linking words like “because” or “for example.”

例: I prefer casual, comfortable clothes such as jeans and soft hoodies because they are easy to move in and suit my daily routine. For example, I usually wear a hoodie and jeans when I go to university or meet friends because they keep me warm and relaxed.

提案: You left this question unanswered. State your preference clearly in one sentence, then add a brief reason and one example using a linking word (e.g., “because,” “so”). Avoid filler words and repetitive phrasing.

例: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because I value ease and mobility during the day. For instance, I often choose sneakers and a T-shirt when I need to walk or commute a lot.

提案: Good basic answer and clear preference. Remove fillers (“uh”), finish the second clause and add a brief specific reason or example. Keep it to 1–3 sentences, using a linking word like “because” or “for example.” Use more precise vocabulary (comfortable, versatile).

例: Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile throughout the day. For example, I wear a plain T-shirt when I study at home and a smart-casual T-shirt when I meet friends.

提案: You answered the question but the response is unclear and repetitive. Start with a clear topic sentence (“No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes”), then give one concise reason and one short example. Avoid vague phrases like “my choice is very good” and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like “so” or “because.”

例: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I plan outfits in advance. For example, before shopping I think about what I need, so I can pick items quickly.

提案: You answered directly but the explanation is confusing and somewhat off-topic (mixes weekdays with weekend activities). Make a clear contrast: what you wear on weekdays vs weekends, give one reason and one example. Use linking words like “whereas” or “while.” Avoid unnecessary repetition.

例: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I dress more formally or fashionably for work or classes, whereas on weekends I choose casual clothes for relaxation. For example, I wear a smart shirt and trousers to university but a T-shirt and jeans when I go to the cinema with friends.

提案: You gave a basic answer but it is vague and contains grammar issues. State the colours clearly (e.g., “black and light colors”), then explain briefly why you prefer them with a specific reason or example. Use cohesive words such as “because” or “so” and correct grammar (e.g., “they suit me” not “suits on me”).

例: I like wearing black and light-coloured clothes because black looks smart and light colours feel fresh and cheerful. For example, I choose black for formal events and pale blue or beige for casual summer outings because they suit my skin tone.

× Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts because, uh, they make me comfortable and I like. Throughout the day.

✓ Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts because they make me comfortable throughout the day.

Original has incorrect sentence break and extra 'I like.' which is incomplete and unnecessary. Also the phrase 'throughout the day' should be connected to the clause about comfort. Suggest removing filler and combining clauses: 'they make me comfortable throughout the day.' This fixes sentence structure and maintains the gerund 'wearing' correctly.

× No, I don't spend a lot of time for using clothes because my choice is very good and I wisely choose my clothes and there is not much time taken by me for cruising clothes.

✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I choose wisely and I don't take much time to browse for clothes.

Original uses incorrect prepositions/phrases: 'spend a lot of time for using clothes' and 'time taken by me for cruising clothes' are unidiomatic. Use the gerund 'choosing clothes' after 'spend time', and 'browse for clothes' or 'browse clothes' for looking around. Also simplify redundant phrases.

× For example, whenever I go for shopping, I choose my.

✓ For example, whenever I go shopping, I already know what to choose.

Original sentence is incomplete ('I choose my.'), and 'go for shopping' is unidiomatic; use 'go shopping'. Provide a complete object or clause. The correction completes the thought and uses correct verb phrase.

× On weekdays, I usually like to wear some fashionable clothes for spending my weekends in a efficient way.

✓ On weekdays, I usually wear fashionable clothes, and I prefer to spend my weekends doing enjoyable activities.

Original mixes intentions and uses an odd phrase 'for spending my weekends in a efficient way' which is ungrammatical and mismatched in meaning. Use present simple 'I usually wear' for habitual actions and rephrase the weekend purpose clearly. Also correct article 'a efficient' to 'an efficient' if kept, but better to reword for clarity.

× And I like to enjoy my weekends with my friends and family members and we go to watch a movie and many more activities.

✓ I enjoy my weekends with friends and family; we go to watch movies and do many other activities.

Original has redundant 'I like to enjoy' and awkward 'go to watch a movie and many more activities.' Use 'enjoy' (simple present) and plural 'movies' plus 'do many other activities.' Also remove 'members' after 'family' for natural phrasing.

× I like to wear black color clothes as well as light color clothes because they also enhance my personality as also suits on me.

✓ I like to wear black clothes as well as light-colored clothes because they enhance my appearance and suit me.

Original uses awkward noun phrases 'black color clothes' and 'light color clothes'; use 'black clothes' and 'light-colored clothes.' 'Enhance my personality' is unnatural here; 'enhance my appearance' fits better. 'Suits on me' is incorrect; use 'suit me.' Also remove redundant 'also'.

× It makes me comfortable and look attractive.

✓ They make me comfortable and look attractive.

Subject refers to 'black clothes as well as light-colored clothes' (plural), so verb should be 'make' not 'makes.' Use 'they' to match plural subject. This corrects subject-verb agreement and keeps parallel structure 'make me comfortable and look attractive.'