Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar (use correct verb forms and articles), make the response more natural and concise, and add a brief specific reason. Keep it within 1–3 sentences. Use linking phrase if giving extra detail.

例: It depends on my mood, but I usually like to wear dresses because they make me feel feminine and comfortable.

提案: Use a clear topic sentence and concise supporting detail. Correct awkward phrasing and use linking words to explain reason. Avoid redundancy.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me move freely, especially when I'm running errands or meeting friends.

提案: Answer directly and give a brief specific reason. Correct grammar and sentence order. Use a linking word to connect reason.

例: No, I don't usually wear T-shirts because they don't fit my style and often feel too plain for me.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and one concise supporting detail. Correct verb forms and simplify structure; use linking words (for example, 'when' or 'because') to show contrast.

例: It depends on my schedule: when I have time I enjoy picking outfits carefully, but when I'm busy I choose something quick and simple.

提案: Provide a direct answer and a specific comparison between weekdays and weekends. Fix grammar and use linking words like 'whereas' or 'while' to contrast the two situations.

例: Yes. I usually wear smart, professional clothes on weekdays for work, whereas on weekends I prefer comfortable casual outfits.

提案: State your preference succinctly and add a short reason or example to enrich the answer. Correct redundancy and grammar.

例: My favourite colour is pink because it feels cheerful and suits my skin tone, so I often choose pink tops and accessories.

× It's depend on my mood.

✓ It depends on my mood.

The verb should agree with the singular subject 'it' in present simple. Use third person singular form 'depends' rather than base form 'depend'. Also 'It's' (it is) plus verb is ungrammatical here; use 'It depends' instead. Suggestion: use subject-verb agreement in present simple (He/She/It + verb+s).

× Uh, but actually I like to wear dress.

✓ Uh, but actually I like to wear dresses.

Countable nouns require an article or plural form. 'Dress' as a general category needs the plural 'dresses' or 'a dress' for singular. Because the student speaks generally about preferences, plural 'dresses' is appropriate. Suggestion: use plural for general preferences (I like to wear dresses).

× I like to wear casual dresses while it's getting a comfortable feeling for me.

✓ I like to wear casual clothes because they feel comfortable to me.

The original uses awkward structure and incorrect verb forms. 'While it's getting a comfortable feeling for me' is ungrammatical: 'get' in progressive and 'feeling' misuse. Use simple present 'feel' to describe a general state. Also 'dresses' may be too specific; 'clothes' fits the question. Suggestion: use clear cause conjunctions (because) and correct present simple verbs for general truths ('they feel comfortable').

× No, I don't like to wear T-shirt.

✓ No, I don't like to wear T-shirts.

When speaking generally about types of clothing, use the plural form 'T-shirts' or use an article with singular ('a T-shirt'). The singular without an article is ungrammatical. Suggestion: say 'I don't like to wear T-shirts' for general dislike or 'I don't like to wear a T-shirt' for a specific instance.

× Why is not fit to me.

✓ They do not fit me.

The original is ungrammatical: question word 'Why' is incorrect here and subject-verb order is wrong. The intended meaning is that T-shirts do not fit; use 'They do not fit me' or 'They do not fit.' For a question ask 'Why do they not fit me?' Suggestion: use correct subject ('they') and auxiliary 'do' for present simple negatives.

× It's depend on my day schedule.

✓ It depends on my day's schedule.

Same subject-verb agreement issue: 'depends' required for 'it'. Also possessive form 'day's schedule' is more natural than 'day schedule'. Suggestion: use correct third person singular verb and possessive form for noun phrases describing schedule.

× Sometime I have lot of time I am getting a spend lot of time but busy mood I am not spend the time.

✓ Sometimes when I have a lot of time, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but when I'm busy I don't.

Multiple errors: use plural 'Sometimes', article 'a lot of time', proper tense and verb forms ('spend' for habitual actions), contraction and clause structure. The original mixes progressive and incorrect phrasing. Suggestion: split into two clauses with correct connectors ('when') and use present simple for habitual actions ('I spend', 'I don't').

× Yeah, actually, of course I like to wear weekend is comfortable wear.

✓ Yeah, actually of course I like to wear comfortable clothes at the weekend.

The original word order is incorrect and 'weekend is comfortable wear' is ungrammatical. Use 'at the weekend' (or 'on weekends') and place adjective before noun: 'comfortable clothes'. Suggestion: use proper prepositional phrase for time and adjective+noun order.

× I like pink colour, it's in my favorite colour.

✓ I like pink; it's my favorite color.

Redundant and awkward phrasing. Use 'I like pink' or 'Pink is my favorite color.' Saying 'it's in my favorite colour' is incorrect. Also consistent American spelling 'color' or British 'colour'—keep one. Suggestion: simplify to 'I like pink; it's my favorite color.'