Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations, correct grammar (verb forms, articles), and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words to connect ideas. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

例: I usually wear jeans and T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical. For example, I often choose red jeans and plain T-shirts when I travel because they are easy to move in and don’t need much care.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating the same adjective, fix grammar (subject-verb, articles), and give one brief reason with a linking word such as 'because' or 'so'.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me relax. For example, I often wear jeans and a T-shirt every day since they are practical and easy to move in.

提案: Start with a direct yes/no response then add a specific reason and one example. Avoid repetition and correct word order. Use a linking word like 'so' or 'for example'.

例: Yes, I do. T-shirts are comfortable and practical, so I often wear a plain T-shirt when I travel with friends because it’s easy to move around and pack.

提案: Give a direct short answer and explain briefly with clear reasons. Fix grammar and replace vague phrases with concrete ones. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

例: No, I don’t. Because my wardrobe is simple and I usually stick to comfortable basics, I don’t need to spend much time deciding what to wear.

提案: Answer directly then give a concise reason with corrected vocabulary. Replace unclear words (e.g. 'shoot the clothes') with clear phrases like 'plan outfits'. Keep to two sentences maximum.

例: No, I don’t. I wear the same simple and comfortable style every day because I usually don’t plan different outfits for weekdays and weekends.

提案: State your favourite colours clearly, correct spelling and word choice, and give a short reason. Avoid asking questions back to the examiner. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

例: I prefer dark colours, especially black and navy blue, because they look smart and are easy to match with other clothes.

× I prefer red jeans and T-shirts because it's very comfortable and practical for daily life is can be relaxed and simple and umm, every often time I wear this to travel.

✓ I prefer red jeans and T-shirts because they are very comfortable and practical for daily life; they are relaxed and simple, and I often wear them when I travel.

Errors: incorrect pronoun 'it' for plural 'jeans and T-shirts', inappropriate use of 'every often time', and mixed sentence fragments. Use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are' for subject-verb agreement. Replace 'every often time' with 'often' and use 'when I travel' for purpose/time. Also join clauses with appropriate punctuation to avoid run-on sentence. Suggested improvement: Identify the subject number (singular/plural) before choosing pronouns and verbs; use simple adverbs like 'often' and clear time clauses such as 'when I travel'.

× I prefer wearing the comfortable clothes because it's very comfortable and relax for me and everyday I usually wear these shoes because it's I choose the Jean and T-shirt for practically.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable clothes because they are very comfortable and relaxing for me, and every day I usually wear these shoes because I choose jeans and a T-shirt for practicality.

Errors: 'it's' (it is) incorrectly used for plural 'clothes' — should be 'they are'. 'Relax' used as adjective should be 'relaxing'. 'Everyday' (adjective) needs spacing as 'every day' for frequency. 'Jean' singular wrong; use 'jeans' and include article 'a' before 'T-shirt'. 'Practically' (adverb) wrong; use noun 'practicality' or adjective 'practical'. Suggested improvement: Match verb forms and pronouns to plural subjects, use correct adjective/adverb forms (relaxing vs relax), and choose correct word forms (practicality) or rephrase to 'for practicality'.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because the T-shirt is very comfortable and practical. I choose the simple T-shirt to travel with my friend and everywhere my I need to go is there practical and easy to move.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable and practical. I choose simple T-shirts to travel with my friends because they are practical and easy to move in.

Errors: 'the T-shirt is' used for general preference—use plural 'T-shirts' and 'they are'. 'My friend' should be 'my friends' if meaning multiple, or 'my friend' singular but keep consistency; likely plural. 'Everywhere my I need to go is there practical' is ungrammatical; replace with 'because they are practical and easy to move in'. Use 'move in' to indicate ease of movement while wearing clothes. Suggested improvement: Use plural forms for general statements, keep pronouns consistent, and use idiomatic phrases like 'easy to move in'.

× No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I haven't the idea or umm, stylist to shoot the closet. I actually should the closet. That's simple and umm, comfortable for me. That's why I didn't spend.

✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I don't have ideas or a stylist to organize my closet. My closet is actually simple and comfortable for me. That's why I don't spend much time on it.

Errors: 'I haven't the idea' is incorrect—use 'I don't have ideas' or 'I don't have an idea'. 'Stylist to shoot the closet' is wrong verb and article use; use 'a stylist to organize my closet'. 'I actually should the closet' is ungrammatical; intended meaning likely 'My closet is actually simple'. Tense inconsistency: 'That's why I didn't spend' should be present 'I don't spend much time on it'. Suggested improvement: Use correct negative form 'do not have', include articles before singular nouns ('a stylist'), and use appropriate verbs ('organize') and consistent tense for habitual actions.

× For me, no. I wear the same style of course every day of life because I haven't the idea of the different style to shoot the clothes. I usually choose the simple, cross and comfortable.

✓ For me, no. I wear the same style every day because I don't have the idea of different styles to choose for my clothes. I usually choose simple, casual, and comfortable outfits.

Errors: 'I haven't the idea' incorrect negative—use 'I don't have the idea'. 'Different style to shoot the clothes' wrong verb; use 'to choose for my clothes'. 'The simple, cross and comfortable' contains word choice errors: 'cross' is incorrect; likely meant 'casual'. Also article 'the' unnecessary. Ensure plural 'styles' when referring generally. Suggested improvement: Use correct negative constructions, choose appropriate verbs ('choose'), and use accurate adjectives ('casual') and parallel structure in lists (simple, casual, and comfortable).

× Actually, I usually lie the dark coast of the colour for assemble the black one or the blue one because I love to umm the intense colour. Does it look attractive for me?

✓ Actually, I usually like dark colors, such as black or blue, because I love intense colors. I think they look attractive on me.

Errors: 'lie' should be 'like'. 'the dark coast of the colour for assemble' is nonsensical—replace with 'dark colors, such as black or blue'. 'I love to umm the intense colour' incomplete; use 'I love intense colors'. 'Does it look attractive for me?' incorrect question form; use 'I think they look attractive on me' for a statement. Prepositions: 'on me' expresses appearance. Suggested improvement: Use correct verbs ('like'), natural expressions for examples ('such as'), and the correct preposition 'on' when describing how clothes look on a person.